FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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Jessica

@jessicad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

RES ??

what the hell !!!!!

UNRES: Hahah wow Zehra!! I loved this! You all come up with such amazing chapters, that Im all scared now! :o

How am I going to match up?!!

haha loved it la being all pervy and Khushi getting all thoughts! Hell Arnav couldn't control his imagination too! 😆

Omg now Khushi has to take him around the college?! Omg can't wait!

Rafa is next right? Update soon, then I can put my brain to work :P

LOVE IT!! <3

OMG THIS COLLAB IS MAKING ME ALL NERVOUS AND GIGGLY! :')

Edited by jessicad - 12 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Fab update hun... I simply loved it but you know that by now right😆

Loved their awkwardness and their stealing glance at each other

loved how La described him

Love you

Now go and update Unconditional😆

Hugs

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

I loved this !!

I really enjoyed reading the chapter...

I bet Kushi didn't listen to one word he spoke :D

And then Being studious in class does have its disadvantages :D😆

She's gonna show him around the college !!!!

I can't imagine what she's gonna tell him...What they're gonna tell each other ?? OMG

I can't wait for the next chapter !

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Dammit guys.. I was lost.. I was on the destroyed thread.. dammit..*bangs fist on table**

Res

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😆 you have got to love La..!! Aww poor khushi, if I was in her shoes, I would have killed myself and arnav naughty boy.. can't wait for the next update.. loved it!!!

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Areeba

@Areebaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Hahaha Res Res Res !!

Omg Yaar !! 😆 😆

Samiya U were Amazing , A nice Idea !! 😉 I loved it

Zehra . It was very nicley written so I enjoyed it !! 😉

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

amazing update...loved it..

hehe..how are they going to behave now..all alone..😆

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shalinii173

@shalinii173

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Oh! My! God! she slept her professor😉

very interesting

pls msg me wen u update

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Awesme Zehra😃
I love this idea of 'Collaborating Writting'👍🏼
Great writters in 1 SS-who dsnt want to enjoy?? Huh,Tell Tell😉
So Carry on , I am with u😃

Now come to the update- Superb😆
I was laughing like crazy!!🤣
Above all the students of this class, Khushi got the job of showing Arnav around!! - Awesme😆
Cant wait for the third part😃
Thnx for the PM🤗

Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago