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Posted: 12 years ago
as soon as i will get the siggie of finale,i will update the final chapter of first generation.be ready.😉
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Originally posted by: lucykaede

as soon as i will get the siggie of finale,i will update the final chapter of first generation.be ready.😉


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Obviously! I WANT to read the prequel😃
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Originally posted by: lucykaede

thank you guys for the comments.foram dear you should have added your comment as well.

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I hope that you guys will like this conclusive volume and will try to answer many questions that i left in this generation.

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there will be epicness in last chapter,i will try to make it hell epic.

sory lucy.
Was quite busy. But i read all ur updates and pls this 1 is my fav so dont abndon dis.
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GUYS HERE I AM,BE READY TO READ THE FINALE OF THE STORY.

BEFORE I START I WANT TO THANK EVERYONE FOR READING MY STORY,EVEN TO THOSE WHO LEFT IT IN BETWEEN BECAUSE IT IS BECAUSE OF THEIR ENCOURAGEMENT I COULD WRITE IT FULL.(MY SPECIAL THANKS GOES TO MY DARLING RUI WHO MADE SIGGIES FOR ME.LUV YOU DEAR 😳 AND TO RADHIKA WHO ALWAYS SUPPORTED ME EVEN THE UPDATES WERE BAD.😃)THANKS AGAIN TO ALL THE READERS.
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WHEN THEY CRY:FINAL BATTLE

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=piC4uPOMZ90[/YOUTUBE]

Rumasha-oh look,here is my sister(in egyptian),you look better than all your other incarnation.it would have been good if you stayed dead.please now tell me one thing,what was the thing that motivated you to suffer so much sadness,tell me when you are finally going to die and i am going to have the supreme power.he he he he he he...😆
Neera-you will never understand,you have never loved someone,how you can understand?you always loved yourself,you,you and only you,you didn't think of imhontep,imprisoned him to know a thing that he never knew,made me torcher for so many decades just for what?to take revenge,to take revenge which was sin of our father...
Rumasha-no...she shouted,it was not sin of our father,it was sin of yours,you,you were the one who separated me from my father,you were the one who married pharaoh to destroy my happiness
Neera-you even didn't care for your daughter,who just now got killed.
Rumasha-remnasen???😕she got killed...
Neera-nice to know that atleast you can show yourself a little sad by her death.
Rumasha-ha ha ha ha ha that creep died,i love it,i so love it,whosoever wants to help you,its okay for that cicada to die...he ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...you know na nefertini,even if you have developed these drastic powers,you still can't kill me because my curse is bonded with you.
Neera-don't worry,i am not here to give you such an easy death.
Rumasha-you are still so confident,you still think that your pathetic lover was left by me on mercy...
Neera-😕
Rumasha-no...he possess that nullifying power,the power which is equivalent to god amun,how could i kill him,i wanted him to fully grow these powers,i took his baby..
FLASHBACK...

Rumasha to surya...
Rumasha-i want your baby.
Surya-no i won't give you my baby,no...
Rumasha-you can't escape for the hell,he he he...you know if you give me your baby,you will never be able to see my face again,i won't disturb you and your husband at all ,i promise.
Surya-huh,you really think i can believe you.
Rumasha-trust me,okay don't trust me,you can trust nupur,you are in her care right,you and your husband will be left by me to peace for eternity.
Surya-no please...
Rumasha-and then she gave me her child,but...😡she grabbed veena's hair..
Veena-ah...
Rumasha-but she is so so weak,i hate her...i thought she would inherit her father's drastic powers but no...she didn't,i killed her killed her off...
suddenly...
Karthik-you witch...
Neera-karthik...😲,jhanvi,just leave.
Jhanvi-no mother,i don't know what is going on but this witch is need to learn a good lesson.
Neera-you can't fight her...she is too powerful.
Jhanvi-mom this is your problem...
Neera-huh...
Jhanvi-you never trusted us,bore all the pain by yourself,trust us for once,have faith in god,the reason you always neglected it is the reason you felt so much pain.
Neera-j..jhanvi...😲
Jhanvi-i don't know what is it but someone is calling me...i can feel the signal...justice will be prevailed...i have faith in GOD AMUN.he will help us.
Neera smiled...
Neera-okay then...
Rumasha-enough...enough with all the crap...attack...😡
all the mutants ran to attack them,the reason is that both parties can develop shields,no one can use their powers so this is going to be hand to hand combat.
Jhanvi and Karthik started fighting...Neera was fighting against those mutants...
Rumasha ran into the building..
Neera-rumasha...😡ah...she cut off the head of one mutant...
suddenly she was about to kill veena when she stopped.
Veena-why you stopped?
Rumasha-hmm...she touched her face,she could feel the warmth of her hands.suddenly she felt that her wounds were healing,it was like god herself was blessing her happiness,her eyes became like fire,the fire was glittering in her eyes,all those mutants who were coming to kill were getting torn apart inspite of the shield they possessed.
Veena saw her mother and father's faces,she saw surya smiling and vikrant caressing a baby,she then saw herself with her parents...a tear of drop fell from her eye.jhanvi too created a shield and her eyes were burning as well,she was also protecting karthik with her shield and her karate skills,the fight was deadly going.
suddenly Vikrant and Gang also reached there.he saw neera burning in fire without getting hurt and her giving some healing to a girl.He quickly realized it was his daughter.
One person came to kill vikrant,he torn him apart,he needed no shield,Amrit took place of nupur to lead others.
one person came to kill karthik..karthik fell...
jhanvi-bro...😲
as the mutant was about to kill him...he was killed by kitty.
Amrit-good job kitty...
Neera was shocked...
Kitty-couldn't you understand Neera?
Neera-huh...
Mohit-how could we side with someone so horrible.we were sent here by master to free veena and imhontep but we couldn't but still tried to look as dangerous as we can.
Vikrant came to veena,Veena was shocked to see him.
He came to her and touched him with his hands on face.
Veena-ff..Father??
Vikrant became so happy that he hugged her tightly to her suffocation.😭
Veena-ah...ah..you ...😃he started kissing her cheeks badly like a father and daughter.
Vikrant-i am sry,so sry that i couldn't provide you the warmth you deserved,you mother and i loved you so much,so much that you can ever realize.i am so sry...
Neera came to comfort them but Vikrant pushed her hard,she fell on the ground.(other mutants were fighting with gang,imagine it by yourself guys.)
Jhanvi-dad???😕
Vikrant-don't you dare come near my family.
Karthik-dad??
Vikrant-just because of you my children are here,you witch...first i will kill rumasha and then you.
Rathod-no don't...vikrant if you touch her then i will kill you.😡
Vikrant-why??huh...did you guys having an affair behind my back?
Yuuvi-hrithvik???😡
Vikrant-you know what,i really don't care.Mohit...take care of Veena,i am going inside.
Neera-no don't,please don't go inside...i don't know how you developed so much powers in yourself but you still aren't quite capable to defeat her.
Vikrant-i don't want your suggestions.
Neera-please,you want to kill me na,i won't utter a work,you can do anything you want to me but please let me help you killing Rumasha and i swear you can torcher me as much as you can.
Vikrant ran into valkyrie,Neera too ran after him.
Jhanvi-what the hell is happening?what suddenly happened to dad?
Karthik-just concentrate...
Jhanvi-huh...a mutant was about to kill her when she puched him hard.
mutant-ah...
Jhanvi-this is what happens when you take panga with jhanvi.😆
IN VALKYRIE...
Rumasha-why i am having such feeling?for the first time i feel scared,is this because of that guy,she reminds his face and his locket.that damn locket,there is something which is strongly related to that locket.
(Jhanvi brought that ancestors book with her because she felt a signal to do it).
Vikrant Shouted-Rumasha...😡
Neera-you are being too confident.she can easily torn you apart.
Vikrant-shut up and let me concentrate.he then saw the jails in which she has put mutants,they were all burned up,torn up,torchered up...tears fell from his eyes...
Vikrant-Nefertini...
Neera-huh...you...
Vikrant-i know everything...😡 you should do a good deed before i beat you to death,you should make these mutants free..
Neera-as you wish...😭 but rumasha...i am not leaving you here.
Vikrant-if you don't leave i will kill myself.
Neera-n0...she ran to make those mutants free.
Rumsha came out...Neera ran to make free all mutants.
Vikrant-you witch...be ready for your death.
Rumasha-you are really stubborn...and...stupid.don't you understand that you can't stand against me.
Vikrant-i can stand against you because i am righteous,i have faith in god...the witches like you have to end,who make others cry,who ruin other people life.wait a sec how can i understand egyptian?😕
Rumasha-yeah..
they together-huh...
A silent was there...
Rumasha saw in his eyes...
Rumasha-huh...huh...huh...your...yyy...your eyes are...bbb..burning...
Rumasha-aaa...she shouted...don't,don't come near me...aaa...you...i fear you,stay away from me...aaa...
Neera was freeing all mutants,she finally came to imhontep's jail.she saw imhontep...she started crying heavily seeing his condition.He saw her with his one eye as another was heavily damaged.
Neera in egyptian-uncle imhontep.
Imho-Princess???????Princess Nefertini???(in mind as he can't talk).She removed his jail with her powers.she opened him from the slab he was lying.
She started burning again,her eyes were burning like hell,the red flame was coming from her body...these rays sanctified him,his founds started healing,he was feeling pleasure and warmth which he forgot in all these centuries.
IMho talked-princess...princess...where is he?
Neera-who?
Imho got up...he saw here and there and took a knife...
Neera-no don't go,she will torn you apart...but he left.
jhanvi,karthik,yuuvi,mohit,kitty,rathod and amrit finished all the mutants outside.(before nupur was dieing she radiated herself(just like sati)and her powers got divided equally among the gang,thats why they were able to defeat strong army of those mutans because they technically ate nupur,vikrant's light only destroyed her body not her powers)
Rumasha was feeling pain.
Rum-aaa...
Vik-he he he he ha ha ha you feeling the pain right?the same pain you gave to all of us in these years.you witch,the pain you are feeling,right.
Rum smiled-i understand...
-i understand who are you...Thank you...but before i die can i meet Nephi.
Vik-huh???😕
Rum-nephi...sister...😭
Neera-huh...RR.RUMASHA??her tone is different now,its the same when we were children.she ran to meet rumasha.
Nephi-what the hell you want with me now?😡
Rum-for one sec can you enter in my thoughts?please...he he...😆
Neera entered in her mind...
she saw...
she and her playing with each other in childhood.they were practicing fighting.and then she saw rumasha and nephi getting married to same pharoh,her seeing nephi as her enemy,she realized that rumasha was inflected with the same curse she got inflected by rumasha,it was not rumasha who was tochering nephi but someone else curse that made rumasha to do the things..then she saw a scene...
rumasha-nephi...she grabbed her hair...
nephi(real one a.k.a sukirti form)-aaa...nephi pushed her and was about to kill her when rumasha grabbed her neck and made her fell on the ground.she was grabbing her neck tightly..
nephi-aaa...a..aa...aa...
suddenly rumasha...
rum-sister help me...a tear fell from her eye...
the again..
rum-enough...you ...you are reason for my ugliness...i...he ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...😭
Neera shocked...Vik too saw it,he entered her head.
Neera-i ...i can't believe it...for all this time...it was not you but a curse...
Rum-i have done so much sins that i even can't say sry...
Neera-RUMASHA...SISTER...SHE STARTED CRYING.
Rum-please make me torcher,all those horrible things i have done to you and others,i don't deserve such easy death.
Neera-for all this time i was hating on you when you were not at fault at all.
Rum-who was the one who cursed you badly?
Imhontep came...
Imho-AMUN RA...
they all-huh?
Imho-the curse of amun ra...
i remember that...when god amun appeared in front of your father,your father asked for a boon to become a powerful mutant,lady remnasen was also there,but...but...amun ra warned him that this will lead to only disaster as this boon will turn into a nothing but a curse,the curse will pass on and on till the whole world is a disaster but your mother insisted it,amun ra saw her with angry eyes at first but then he gave this boon,it lead the separation of his power with him,which made him angry,it resulted into such curse,when you two were born,lady remnasen knew that one of you will eat the another to become one soul but...she wanted it different way...she and not your father was the one who cursed Princess Rumasha of this curse,she liked her more and wanted to become very powerful but...it resulted into such a disaster...when she got to knew what sin she did,she tried to tame princess rumasha but...you also killed her badly.
Rum-i remember that...then your curse started getting worse and worse and it lead you to the place where you are now.
Nephi-😭 why we had to bear the sins of our parents on us.why???😭imho-Amun ra could never bear the separation of him and his power which is equivalent to his wife(shiva and shakti type not exactly them...please...don't kill me...🤢).one of you possess akhnamun...(by the way this whole conversation was heard by the gang as they all arrived there).Amun ra needs it back...
Neera-huh...he took the knife and suddenly stabbed Vikrant.
VIkrant-aaa...
everyone shocked and nephi was like...

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
next update will be the last updat e of first generation,then after it i will take a break from this fanfiction and then again will come with second generation which will i hope be better than first one.also still if you have questions regarding anything in this ff,do ask me.😉
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Superb yaar superb update.
Mindblowing.
Waiting for the next 1.
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LAST CHAPTER
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XROG_O6Oepk[/YOUTUBE]

LYRICS(THIS SONG IS DEDICATED BY RUMASHA TO NEPHI AND BY NEERA TO VIKRANT).THIS SONG PERSONALLY MAKES ME HELL CRY.😭

Where might you be right now?
What are you doing?
One day, can I know?
I've been searching for you
Under this blue, endless sky

I realized for the first time
All of the things
That had once filled my heart
How I came to lose them
I cannot remember now
Everything you gave me
Somewhat a blur
Only vaguely I see
How you made me smile
And how you had supported me

Losing this, it was just too much to bear
Struggling, I felt like I was just grasping air
Too far away, everything was just out of reach
My arms were a bit too short, as you can see
And just like
A spring wind
It carried everything away
With the false hope
That one day I'd get them back

I had become lonely
Wrought with despair
How it would strangle me
Every passing moment
I was sure my heart would break
But then I would see you
Here in my mind
Lost in a memory
Because I remember
How your smile encouraged me

Let's go back to all those bright sunny days
All the ones I desparately tried to save
Forever, I'll always smile by your side
So closely, so warmly
It's just you and I

Where might you be right now?
What are you doing?
One day, can I know?
I've been searching for you
Under this blue, endless sky
And when I do find you
Will you smile
Like you always did before?
It's all that I ask for
All that I need
Just to be sure

Where might you be right now?
What are you doing?
One day, can I know?
I've been searching for you
Under this blue, endless sky

neera-aaa...
jhanvi-dad..
karthik-father
vikrant fell on the ground-ah...ah...
rumasha-no don't die,i will become insane without your influence,please,please...i...i don't want to,nephi please kill me or torchur me before i become a deadly ogre.veena,please...
veena-i just saw my father and you killed him,i will kill you.
neera-i am going to kill you ,you ra******.
amrit-he was my brother and you killed him.
rathod was getting angry,he turned into a wolf.he was about to kill imho when neera said-no wait,i am going to torchur him,he didn't deserve sympathy.
a tear fell from imho's eye.
imho-little girl.
jhanvi-huh?what?
rumasha-little girl he is saying.
imho-give me your diary.you brought it with you,right?
jhanvi-no...
mohit-before that we are going to kill you.
imho-please give it to me.
neera-you...😡
jhanvi-no wait mamma,she came to him and gave him the ancestors book.
he opened the last page of the book.
he chanted-akhna...ishanam...amun...wura(it doesn't mean anything)amanaphus...
he then placed his scorpion tattoo on the locket...
he again chanted-amanaphus...
suddenly a light glowed very bright,no one could see it.
rathod ran away as wolf.
kitty-ah my eyes.
rumasha,neera and jhanvi were the only one who could see that light,even imho couldn't see it.
vikrant-ah...he became alive.
neera-huh...huh...vikrant...😃
veena-father
jhanvi-dad...daddy...😭😃
vikrant got up...he turned...
nephi-huh...???rumasha,nephi and imho bowed in front of him.
nephi-everyone just leave from here.quickly..
rumasha-immediately...she saw him and cried.
rumasha-i am sry... i am sry...😭
nephi-you are not vikrant,right? GOD AMUN.
amun saw her like this.
rumasha-my lord,kill me for my sins,whatever i did was...just horrible,even worse,no words are ...
Amun-both of you,hello.😃
nephi and rum-huh...
Amun-can you give my wife back please.
rum-he is a very...ah...friendly god.
amun closed his eyes...
nephi started having headaches...
nephi-aaa...aaa...aaa...aa...a...she fell on the ground,she was in deep pain,suddenly a light came out of her(akhnamun) and entered in amun's body.
amun-i knew the consequences of the choice your father made,i warned him,but...he didn't listen to me at all,i didn't cursed him,imho you idiot,what kind of stupid story you made.i told him,that be careful with this boon,it will create illusions in mind,which would lead to that person's hatred towards another person whom it loves the most.remnasen,your mother knew that and for her own selfish cause she ruined two beautiful lives,the descendants of my powers.
nephi-i being vikrant's descendant is a little creepy for me if you ask.
amun-excuse i am talking here.😉
nephi-sry...🤢
amun-its so sad of us(gods)to know everything and still wouldn't able to stop it.i knew this was gonna happen so i told imho that my human incarnation will take birth and blah blah...i will tame you.and here i am..
rum-for a god you are so cool.👏
amun-for a god i am also very justice loving.😛rum-aaa..aaa...
amun-sry kid,you have to pay for your sins...rumasha was in pain...her nails automatically ripped apart and she started melting with the worse pain.
nephi-and me,what you have planned for me?😭
amun-since you so carefully and sadistically bore my dear power(Shakti),you have right to ask for a boon,and also you suffered so much.
nephi-i always knew gods were kind,i realized it now.i am sry for not realizing you as god amun.
amun-i am repeating it,vikrant was not me,he was another soul.oof...
nephi-you are very much acting like human,why is that?i know,you are talking in this way because i have always imagined you as my friend.amun smiled a very cute shivji smile.
nephi-in my childhood i used to pray you as my friend.oh my lord,you are so kind.she fell in his feet.the only boon i want for you to kill me and to give me a life where i can live happily with vikrant,please.
amun-let us meet at the same place...
nephi-huh..😕.
and the valkyrie blasted.
jhanvi-aaa...no it can't be...no...daddy...mamma...
everyone outside was shocked with such an unwanted blast.
no...
jhanvi fell on the floor-no...no...😭everyone was crying.
amrit-i didn't want this end at all,even after vikrant killed my mother,never.no...😭
mohit and kitty-master nupur totally inflected her powers in us that rumasha wasn't able to know our true intentions and we were able to work with it.
amrit-hey where is veena?
karthik-oh no,she too was in the building.
yuuvi-what???😲that means she died with them.
jhanvi in her mind-huh...oh...😭
yuuvi-what?
jhanvi-let us go.😭she obviously would never want us to cry for her.let us start our lives again.
yuuvi-what are you saying?😡neera was my sister like,vikrant was my brother,i...we all loved them no matter what.
jhanvi-😭
50 YEARS LATER...
Big karthik and grown up jhanvi came to graveyard.
karthik came to surya's grave.
karthik-today my mom died.
jhanvi-she was very sweet,mom used to tell me this.
karthik-huh...he placed roses on her grave.mom...i never met you,but i want to tell you...as i tell you every year,i love you,i miss you.i will always love you,forever.
then the placed flowers on vikrant's grave which was on right side of surya.
jhanvi-hey dad,i came this year as well,you know,when...😭when you left,i...i...was angry,because no one was there to play basket ball with me.
karthik-hey i was there...
jhanvi-ah..you are not a good player.
karthik-accha..
jhanvi-sssh...dad will not like it,right dad?he he...she placed roses on his grave.
then they came to nephi's grave.,...
karthik-hey...don't worry we haven't forget you yet.we loved you,no matter what.
jhanvi-yeah,i am still learning mother as i promised you,i am learning not to fall for illusions and not to become like you.
karthik-haan bas ab tak 56 log he maare hain,ab tak chappan(in dramatic way)
jhanvi-ssh...it was because they were wrong mutants,we had to kill the,because now our family has become a ruling dynasty right.when other mutants got to know that we are from pure god amun's family they themselves accepted us their ruler.
they placed roses on her grave.
jhanvi placed her head on his shoulder.
karthik-wish they were alive...
jhanvi smiled...😃-yeah...
AT THE SAME TIME IN THE FOREST WHERE VIKRANT AND SUHANI FIRST MET.
AT THE SAME TREE WHERE SHE BURIED THE MUSIC BOX.
a girl-whom we are waiting for here?
a boy touched that vikrant's tablet,yes it is still here..he remined suhani and vikrant's first meeting.he touched it again and started crying.
girl-looks like something is buried here...
boy-hmmm...he started digging it.he found another rock tablet.
girl-what is this language?
boy-its egyptian...
girl-oh what it says?
boy-vikrant,i love you,i want to marry you and he burst into tears.
gilr-ah...you shouldn't cry,no...whom you are waiting for here?
a voice from behind-he is waiting for a friend...
the boy turned
a girl was standing there...
girl-he was waiting for a friend,a very special friend.
the boy saw her like this...



THE END 😃




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Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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