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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Hey moni sorry for not reading and commenting on ur ff!! Well i cannot read them now or any sooner will read in april and then surely comment till then do pm for any of ur ffs!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: Gowri05
Hey moni sorry for not reading and commenting on ur ff!! Well i cannot read them now or any sooner will read in april and then surely comment till then do pm for any of ur ffs!!

do read whenever you get time and comment on chapters too.hope you will like this journey of bloodshed.

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Awesome End !! I Am Really Looking Forward To The 2nd Generation !!

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

wow.. awesome part! loved da ending.. a bit ambiguous, just da way 2 end dis fic..

superb! i will re read wheneva free <3

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Hey Monica this is my best New Year gift from you. I read all parts from Illusion to Final battle and found it so beautiful. You are superb👏👏👏👏👏👏I have no words to appreciated your skill and to thank you as well.
So Finally Vikrant got back his memory and remember everything and became angry! I always wondered what would happen when he came to know everything about him, his relation with Nephi, his children, his wife and cousin Surya? So he was God Amun Ra himself who came to this world to get back his wife(I mean Anakhamun) . But I still can't understand what would happen to Veena, Rumasha and Nephi ??They were staying in the Valkyre when it was blasted.
And the most important thing is- who are that boy and girl???Who digged up Vikrant and Suhani's rock slab and suddenly a beautiful girl came behind of them and told them that they were waiting for a freind? A special FRIEND?
Happy New Year Dear.🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Hey Monica this is my best New Year gift from you. I read all parts from Illusion to Final battle and found it so beautiful. You are superb👏👏👏👏👏👏I have no words to appreciated your skill and to thank you as well.
So Finally Vikrant got back his memory and remember everything and became angry! I always wondered what would happen when he came to know everything about him, his relation with Nephi, his children, his wife and cousin Surya? So he was God Amun Ra himself who came to this world to get back his wife(I mean Anakhamun) . But I still can't understand what would happen to Veena, Rumasha and Nephi ??They were staying in the Valkyre when it was blasted.
And the most important thing is- who are that boy and girl???Who digged up Vikrant and Suhani's rock slab and suddenly a beautiful girl came behind of them and told them that they were waiting for a freind? A special FRIEND?
Happy New Year Dear.🤗

why you are confused i added the pics,so you can see who the boy and girl are.

thank you so much for your comment.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: Priyamvada
wow.. awesome part! loved da ending.. a bit ambiguous, just da way 2 end dis fic..

superb! i will re read wheneva free <3

thank you dear,i am so glad you liked it.

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

thank you readers for your encouraging comments. 😃

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Ria

@chand1234

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

OMG! Amazing ending! Waitinf fr 2nd generation :D
So sry fr the late reply:(

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Arun

@TimenTIMEagain

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: lucykaede

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yeah i copied many scenes from elfen lied anime,even the ending is like the manga but i swear this story is my own creation.

I havent seen or watched it so this ending is original for me. Good job that you took efforts to write it luce 😊