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Posted: 12 years ago

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here this is the scene where suhani first got kidnapped by rumasha.

enjoy it and feel the pain.\

i am giving future scene to you here.this is the scene where jhanvi(neera's daughter with hrithvik(yes who is now 6 years old and god amun's descendant as when she was conceived nephi was awakened)seeing her memory of rumasha kidnapping her to take her valkyrie.take that specs guy as arnab.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-97BpU5r3Y

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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mahachapter part 2

virat-you...you are joking.😲

nupur-do your really think i am joking?

anandi terribly shocked.

anandi-that means the person who killed my dad was anu.

nupur-that pig deserved it.

anandi started crying,she couldn't know how to react.

kitty-so this anu i mean our neera,why she isn't attacking rumasha now,why she married hrithvik?

nupur-she put her memories to sleep when surya was pregnant so that she by no chance is able to kill her or her child.she warned me that i should take care of everything.but you stupid girl(to anandi)

anandi-what did i do?

nupur-just because of you nephitiri got awakened again.when you blood bonded with karthik,it was unacceptable,she considers him as her child and she would never want him to be with a person who is related to arnab.i am surprised why she didn't killed you.

anandi-but why?why my brother?

nupur-she promised arnab,that one day she will kill him and every person related to him.

karthik in car reminding...

flashback...

anandi to hrithvik-i want to go with you guys,i can't live without him.

karthik-daddy.😭

neera-shut up,tumhe yahan rehne de rahe hain because tumhare bhai ke abhe abhe death hue hain,izzat raas nahe aa rahe hain.

anandi-please i beg you,i want to go with him.

hrithvik-no...listen he is just a child and is really uncomfortable around you plus i want to go far away from here,where i can live with my family in peace.

anandi-karthik please i will never talk to you,will not even come in front of you but please let me go with you.

karthik-i don't want you to come with us.

yuuvi-that means neera also killed surya.

nupur-no...

flashback...

a soldier came from behind and hit neera,she fainted.

rumasha came to surya who was lying on the ground.

here read this update to remind surya's death...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3187823/ff-when-they-cry-first-generation?pn=26

the woman whom neera was fighting was none other then rumasha.

rumasha-oh you..

nupur-yes me.

rumasha-i am here to take her away and this cute little baby.

nupur-shut up and go away.

rumasha-oh you are so changed my dear.

nupur-don't call me dear.

rumasha-soldiers attack...suddenly neera got up with her cosmic power.

nupur bowed in front of her.

rumasha got shocked.

neera was burning but fire was not affecting her.

neera-you want to eat my soul,i will eat your's.

rumasha-ha ha ha ha...you forgot my spell.you can't kill me till you break the spell caste on you by me.

neera(in egyptian)-you were,is and will remain pathetic sis.

neera did something that all the soldiers there were torn apart.rumasha was very intelligent so she thought to leave instead of letting her kill herself.

yuuvi-oh my god.

shekhar was dumstruck.

shekhar-so why mother killed dad and why she made me lose my memory?

nupur-your father,he married your mother because he got to know by dr. vishnu that she was direct descendant of god amun ra.he married her as she lost her memories thanks to prof.vishnu.he used to provoke her every night so that her real powers could awake and with her he could become king of mutants.still your mother loved him.one day when she got her memories back she became insane due to her curse,she had no choice but to kill people around her,she killed your father because she knew he didn't love her exactly,she killed prof. because he was trying to get in her head,getting in her head meant to kill her powers but she wanted these powers to kill rumasha.she made you away from here and my life so that you could start your own life again including you as a vessel to come back.she also feared that maybe she would kill you.and most important,you have power to penetrate any shield,she wanted this power to make her more strong against rumasha.

shekhar-then how she died so to come back as anu?

nupur-well,she made rathod stab her.

flashback..

neeranjana(old one)-aa...(rathod stabbed her).she was burning like a flame,her eyes had a flame in it.

rathod touched her face,the fire didn't effected him.

neeranjana-good bye...and she crushed into crystals.

kitty-so now why she married hrithvik?

nupur-i don't know whole story but hrithvik is someone she can never kill even she is at peak of her insanity.maybe his blood can nullify her curse,maybe i am not sure.

shekhar-if she isn't able to kill hrithvik then she could also condemn her from her other killings,this curse thing is just exuse and shekhar left in apathy.

nupur-listen..ah...

jhanvi fainted...

shekhar-jhanvi...

maanvi-di...

in valkyrie...

rumasha-ha ha ha ha ha...my sis,why you always so sexy haan,i so want to eat you but shit this cosmic power,ah...

she is on a bed with some other boy mutant...

rumasha-ah you are a trash in bed and she torned him apart in pieces.

one mutant came...

mutant-my goddess...here is the money we made from our business.

rumasha-ha ha ha ha...i can't believe egyptian queen rumasha has to do business to earn money.damn i hate myself so much..😆.the daughter of akhnaten,killer of nephitiri has to do work..ha ha ha ha ha...i think i should got to the museam and steal my brother's mask.

mutant-brother's mask.

rumasha-TUTANKHAMUN.

mutant shocked...(i bet you guys will become shock,rumasha as king tut's sister)

rumasha-these idiots think that boy king tut died of some injury,but they don't know that his own sister rumasha killed that boy.she shouted-aaa..that idiot,father made him king instead of me,i...i was supposed to be pharaoh but no...he gave him the throne to him who was barely 12.aaa...ii..i killed him,killed him hard and made his mummy so that he could get peace,i wanted to show nephi that even tut was better than her,i hated her so much that i gave tut his due peace after death...ha ha ha ...mutant got shocked and suddenly he got torn apart.

rumasha-nephi,just one folly,just do one folly and i will again capture you.ha ha ha..

neera in car-this journey will be our last journey sis.this time god amunra will do justice.

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@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Oh Gosh!
I've missed commenting on many updates! 😲
Sorry, was a bit busy!

The updates r awesome! Luv this ff..really interesting!! Btw..nice pics. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chand1234
Oh Gosh!
I've missed commenting on many updates! 😲
Sorry, was a bit busy!

The updates r awesome! Luv this ff..really interesting!! Btw..nice pics. :)

thanks for commenting.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

next update date=1 nov.

i can update before if i get time.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Hi Lucy now I have no words to praise your updates so these are for you dear👏and🤗and keep it up👍🏼.
After reading your Maha Chapter pt1 and 2 some mystries are cleared. Rumasha killed Surya and want to take Karthik and Neera to valkyre.But Nupur stopped her. Sounds interesting.And Neera has not done anything till now. It gives me a relief.
As usual I have some questions-
1.Who is this Hrithvik aka Vikrant? Why Neera can't kill him in her peak of insane?
2.Why only a baby girl can be a direct decendent of God Amun Ra?
And one more thing is this black widow rumasha need a 4400volt shock therapy. I am sick of this pathetic insane fellow. God help her. My Neera (Anu😭) was right.She was.is and will be a pathetic.Only for her so many people are killed,suffered from killing insanity and lost their beloved ones.I hate her from core of my heart.

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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Hi Lucy now I have no words to praise your updates so these are for you dear👏and🤗and keep it up👍🏼.
After reading your Maha Chapter pt1 and 2 some mystries are cleared. Rumasha killed Surya and want to take Karthik and Neera to valkyre.But Nupur stopped her. Sounds interesting.And Neera has not done anything till now. It gives me a relief.
As usual I have some questions-
1.Who is this Hrithvik aka Vikrant? Why Neera can't kill him in her peak of insane?
2.Why only a baby girl can be a direct decendent of God Amun Ra?
And one more thing is this black widow rumasha need a 4400volt shock therapy. I am sick of this pathetic insane fellow. God help her. My Neera (Anu😭) was right.She was.is and will be a pathetic.Only for her so many people are killed,suffered from killing insanity and lost their beloved ones.I hate her from core of my heart.

thank you honey.

and your doubts...

1-honey this is the mystery to be solved,it will be solved in end of first generation.after all its their love story.

2-no not necessary baby girl,shekhar was also direct descendant of god amun's powers but neeranjana destroyed his powers to gain it.i said she took him as a vessel to revive again.it consumed his powers.when neera was anu and slept,she was also a normal mutant,she couldn't torn anybody with her powers.

why rumasha is so insane is also to be explained.

and i am surprised that you didn't get suprprised on king tutankhamun's fact.😉

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nephitiri and ???????????????😕

guess guess...

old memories..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

God.. that soundtrack/theme is a bit haunting... but thrilling too! Loved both the mahachapter parts... u are very talented writer and u have a clear picture of what u r going to write..👏

I so so excited to read the next chappie.. I guess I'm k wid violence in ur FF..😉 cuz its sooo good, thoda bahut bloodshed toh hona hi hai, yeh FF hi aisi hai ;)

OMG... I hate that Rumasha that old cranky widow is driivng me crazy.. 🤬 But was Neera her own sis? Just curious.. and I'm loving Nupur... awww poor Surya.. yeh toh hona hi tha...😭

Update SOON! 🤗

thanks for the PM...

P.S. O thank u yar.. for ur special wishes to my family.Now they all r doing k, U know season kuch aisi hai..sabhi ko Viral fever tha.. ab sab theek hai.. take care n do pm me for the next :)

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Originally posted by: Priyamvada
God.. that soundtrack/theme is a bit haunting... but thrilling too! Loved both the mahachapter parts... u are very talented writer and u have a clear picture of what u r going to write..👏

I so so excited to read the next chappie.. I guess I'm k wid violence in ur FF..😉 cuz its sooo good, thoda bahut bloodshed toh hona hi hai, yeh FF hi aisi hai ;)

OMG... I hate that Rumasha that old cranky widow is driivng me crazy.. 🤬 But was Neera her own sis? Justha.. curious.. and I'm loving Nupur... awww poor Surya.. yeh toh hona hi t.😭

Update SOON! 🤗

thanks for the PM...

P.S. O thank u yar.. for ur special wishes to my family.Now they all r doing k, U know season kuch aisi hai..sabhi ko Viral fever tha.. ab sab theek hai.. take care n do pm me for the next :)

thank you priya for so much praise.i pray you and your family are always healthy.

neera is rumasha's sis as neera is nephitiri,neeranjana was nephitiri.they all are reincarnation of nephitiri.

surya ka ek aur dark secret hain jo maine reveal kar diya tha way before bas ab wo neera aur hrithvik ko reveal karna baaki hain.