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@sambhavami

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: lucykaede
THANK U SO MUCH RADHI

Welcome !!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Ohho Di !! Why Do You Always Talk Negative ?? They'll Come Along...But Really Neera Should Have Some Compassion...Though I'm Not Supposed To Say This Before I Know The End...But Still, It's Horrible !!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Ohho Di !! Why Do You Always Talk Negative ?? They'll Come Along...But Really Neera Should Have Some Compassion...Though I'm Not Supposed To Say This Before I Know The End...But Still, It's Horrible !!

yes yaar i am pretty negative,sab yahe kehte hain,my best friend used to say this at school.sry.

neera and compassion??

well yes you have to wait till the end for these cruel things.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

chapter-7- awakened sadness

neera took karthik to her room.

shekhar wakes up.he saw everyone in the room.

shekhar saw nupur and got angry.😡

nupur thinks-mar gaye.

shekhar-where is she?

nupur-in her room.

he quickly got up.

jhanvi-shekhar kahan jaa rahe ho.but he didn't listen.as he was walking he saw amrit on the way.

amrit-😭

shekhar-😭

shekhar came to amrit,he touched her face and wiped her tears.

shekhar hugged her-i am so sry,warmth,love,compassion,i wasn't able to give you any of that.

amrit-you don't have to be sry at all...dd...dad...and they both burst in tears.

neera put karthik on the bed.

shekhar came to her room.

neera-i knew you were gonna come.

shekhar-why?😡why you destroyed my life?why you did all this?first you killed professor,then dad,but why you saved me?oh wait,just to come back in my daughter's body.you pathetic person.

neera smiled-i expected some cursing from your side.

shekhar-why?why you kill everyone?what is wrong with you?get out of my daughter's body.

neera-i am not in your daughter's body,i am your daughter.

shekhar shocked.😲

neera-i had a plan which needed you alive.

shekhar-plans,plans and always plans.love has nothing to do with you,right?

suddenly hrithvik came running to the room.

hrithvik-karthik,karthik beta kya hua?neera,karthik ne muzhse communicate kiya tha.

neera-haan wo karthik faint ho gaya,pata nahe kya hua.

hrithvik-oh mera baccha.

shekhar shocked,he saw hrithvik with shocked eyes.😲

hrithvik saw shekhar with strange eyes,neera told him to go out with karthik and he obeyed.

shekhar-this person?you married this person?what are you gonna do next?kill him as well.

neera-he is the only person in this entire pathetic world i won't kill.

shekhar slapped her.

neera😭

shekhar-i ...i hate you,from the core of my heart.

nupur entered from behind.

he saw her angrily.

nupur-shekhar meri baat suno,shekhar,shekhar,...but he didn't listen.he quickly left.

nupur-i think we should tell him the entire truth.

neera-entire truth.huh...in a place where sadness cry(she again thinks of a place,a building where valkyrie is written on top,a cross with chains and blood all over the floor.a kid hanging on that cross without cross and badly injured)

nupur-huh...

neera-let these kids have their happy ending.

nupur-and you?

neera-i know what i have to do.

in garden...

karthik wakes up.

hrithvik-karthik,karthik beta kya hua aapko?

karthik-dad...ah...my head hurts,kuch yaad nahe aa raha hain.suddenly karthik reminded someone's leg coming off.

karthik-dad kya kise ke legs...suddenly someone shouted in woods.

someone screamed-aaa...😲

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

are you guys scared of violent scenes?

please do tell me,my story is very very violent in first generation.if you guys don't wanna feel the torcher i will explain this in brief and then jump to second generation.please answer yes or no.there is nothing but violence coming with some passionate moments.

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

interesting update poor Neera she hv no one to LOVE n to b LOVED but Hrithvik 😳hey still Hrithvik unaware of Neera's truth na hope he'll LOVE her infinitely evn after knows evrything abt her till ur next update im gonna to be like "wat nxt...wat nxt..."😆r v reaching end of 1st Gen?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian
interesting update poor Neera she hv no one to LOVE n to b LOVED but Hrithvik 😳hey still Hrithvik unaware of Neera's truth na hope he'll LOVE her infinitely evn after knows evrything abt her till ur next update im gonna to be like "wat nxt...wat nxt..."😆r v reaching end of 1st Gen?

not yet honey,not yet.😆

abhe unke aur kids aane baaki hain na.😃

don't worry wo jaldi aane waale hain as story will take a leap.again.🥱

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

oye guys solid problem ho gaye hain,landline mein dial tone nahe hain.i am updating this with mobile.last time one year mein theek hua tha kyunki yahan koi complain nahe sunta.sry agar update na kar paon.shit.😭

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: lucykaede

yes yaar i am pretty negative,sab yahe kehte hain,my best friend used to say this at school.sry.
neera and compassion??
well yes you have to wait till the end for these cruel things.

Be Sure That I'll Not Leave This FF Till I Know The End Of It !!😛 But Let Me Inform You That I Wont Be Able To Come On IF For The Pujas,😭 but I'll Comment On All The Updates When I Am Again Free...In The Meanwhile, Please Don't Say That I Promised To Stay And Then Disappeared...😉

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Dear Lucy
I raed your this story from the bigining and only think about it. I can't comment on it because that time I was not the member of this forum.
I hate you Lucy.you killed Suryasree(Mouni)😭and portray neeranjana aka Anushka(Sona) as evil.😭
I have some questions
1.Why did Surya being killed?Only for her love and surrender towards Hrithvik?
2. Why did Vikrant aka Hrithvik's memory's some part erase?
3.Why did Neera have too much fondness towards Karthik?
4.Why Neeranjana (both new and old) had a such killing spree ? Can't she spare Sunil?
5.what is valkyre?and what was the reason that she loves Vikrant aka Hrithvik so madly?

I have a suggestion to destroy her. Pass through a sharp knife her heart and set her in fire,do all needful rites and rituals at her funeral and pray to god that She may find peace and happiness in heaven. She may rest in peace near to the god.
Atlast I want to give you tight hug🤗 and I am sorry for bing rude at starting.Your story has something that can stick reader's eyes only on the story. May god bless you.😊

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