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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Loved The Update !! Surely Kartik Is Not Gonna Give Away His Mom ??Don't Worry ! Mohit-Mouni-Sonarikaji Fans Would Take Care Of This FF !

Edited by Radhikerani - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Dear Lucy
I raed your this story from the bigining and only think about it. I can't comment on it because that time I was not the member of this forum.
I hate you Lucy.you killed Suryasree(Mouni)😭and portray neeranjana aka Anushka(Sona) as evil.😭
I have some questions
1.Why did Surya being killed?Only for her love and surrender towards Hrithvik?
2. Why did Vikrant aka Hrithvik's memory's some part erase?
3.Why did Neera have too much fondness towards Karthik?
4.Why Neeranjana (both new and old) had a such killing spree ? Can't she spare Sunil?
5.what is valkyre?and what was the reason that she loves Vikrant aka Hrithvik so madly?

I have a suggestion to destroy her. Pass through a sharp knife her heart and set her in fire,do all needful rites and rituals at her funeral and pray to god that She may find peace and happiness in heaven. She may rest in peace near to the god.
Atlast I want to give you tight hug🤗 and I am sorry for bing rude at starting.Your story has something that can stick reader's eyes only on the story. May god bless you.😊

hi honey and welcome to the forum.

thank you so so much for this awesome comment.these all questions are something first generation is based on.don't worry i will clarify everything.next update is tomorrow.😃

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#263

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Loved The Update !! Surely Kartik Is Not Gonna Give Away His Mom ??Don't Worry ! Mohit-Mouni-Sonarikaji Fans Would Take Care Of This FF !

i know honey,i know.i love you,seriously.😃

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#264

chapter-8-ancestors part 1

hrithvik and karthik went to woods.

kitty was there.kitty was shocked to see sunil's body.

3 hours later.

everyone was there.

jhanvi-same,same killing.kaun hain ye serial killer,kyun maar raha hain sabko?she started crying.

nupur and shekar's eyes met.there was only anger in his eyes.

amrit saw neera's face.she was all sad.😭

karthik remembered his legs coming off.

hrithvik-ye sab kaise,aise he surya ka murder hua tha.

maanvi-surya?

hrithvik-my first wife.

karthik-dad i saw,i saw his legs coming off.

neera 😲

hrithvik-what?

karthik-yes dad i saw his legs coming off.

kitty-you were here?

police man-pata nahe kaise,par kise ancestral mutant ka kaam hain.

virat-ancestral moment(oh and by the way anandi was in deep shock,amrit took her to her room)

rathod-haan kise ancestor ka he kaam hain,he sighed neera.😡

neera-😛

nupur-what the heck?you know there are very few ancestors left.koi ancestor aisa kyun karega.

policeman-aise drastic powers muzhe to nahe lagta kise new mutant mein ho sakti hain.

shekhar-i know the culprit.

everyone shocked.

shekhar-when arnab died,anu was in contact with him.when sunil died he was searching for anu.

neera-

hrithvik-yes,when surya died neera was there but i saw in master's memory and she showed me her memories as well.yes it was some lady but not neera.she can never do this kind of thing.

shekhar-oh really step dad or son in law.

hrithvik-what?😕

nupur-enough.

shekhar-yes enough.

jhanvi-shekhar kya keh rahe ho?kuch samazh nahe aa raha hain.

karthik started crying.

neera-no no baby don't cry.please.

karthik hugged her-mommy.she picked up in her arms.

neera-come,mein tumhe ghumane le jaati hun.and she left.

hrithvik-bas bahut ho gaya,i am not gonna stay here.

nupur-what do you mean?

hrithvik-i am gonna go somewhere else far from here.my family and you guys are no more safe.

shekhar-huh...kahe bhe chale jao,bar jab tak ye zinda hain kuch nahe ho sakta.

hrithvik-tum kehna chahte ho ke tumhare bete ne ye murder kiya hain.

shekhar-yes muzhe to lagta hain anu ne he tumhare first wife ko maara hain.

nupur-enough..😡shekhar...i mean shekhar jee please stop.

shekhar grabbed her hand.

shekhar-you have to give me some answers.and he took her away.

jhanvi and other shocked.

hrithvik-huh..nahe neera aisa...no way.

kitty-i don't believe it.rathod bhai,what you say?aur neera aisa kaise kar sakti hain,she is not an ancestor.

rathod-i am getting hell out of here.

maanvi-oh god ye sab kya chal raha hain,i can't understand anything.ye killings,kaun hain ye serial killer.

hrithvik thinks-i have decided,i trust my wife.she makes me feel complete.i am gonna go out from here,far away where i can live in peace with my family.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

yaar ye kya baat hue,maine break kya liya,comments itne kam ho gaye.😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

sneak peak...of next chapter

yuuvi and mohit in library.

yuuvi-no way...

mohit-agar aisa hain to..

nupur telepathically-you have no idea,you have no ideal what is upon us now.

mohit scared-she will rise again

nupur-she already did.

yuuvi and mohit scared.

after this chapter,mystery is gonna be slowly solved.every question will be answered.

first thing will be revealed about valkyrie.yes next chapter reveals of ancestors theories and next to next about valkyrie.so be ready for reveals.guys you will come to end of first generation now.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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soumya vohra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

O gosh...

so its gonna b sooper dooper trooper interesting!

I hd such a nice feeling reading dat Hritvik trusts hz wife so much...bt unfortunately he'llb proved wrong...i don't wnt hm heart broken!

BT lets c...

so nxt part wud b rocking...

Finally...D valkyrie mystrie wud b resolved :)

Desperately waitin 4 d nxt part :)

Update soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: coolfizzy
O gosh...
so its gonna b sooper dooper trooper interesting!

I hd such a nice feeling reading dat Hritvik trusts hz wife so much...bt unfortunately he'llb proved wrong...i don't wnt hm heart broken!

BT lets c...

so nxt part wud b rocking...

Finally...D valkyrie mystrie wud b resolved :)

Desperately waitin 4 d nxt part :)

Update soon :)