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Posted: 12 years ago
Really Liked The Update And Pics !!
Edited by Radhikerani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey.. finally done reading the updates!

Lovely... awww Poor Surya n Hrithvik.. Hope Anu saves them, the anime pics of anu breaking the shell, anvik pic n the song are all fab!👏

Loving this FF..

thnx 4 the PM..

P.S. I will be full busy till next wednesday.. but plz PM me 4 all the updates, will catch up when free :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-11-slumber
neera-you just called on your own death.
there were soldiers out there.not army one.😆
hrithvik opens his eyes...the vision was very blurry.someone came from behind to hit her and hrithvik faints again.
after 4 hrs.
surya thinking-ye hrithvik abhe tak neera ko le kar kyun nahe aya,he bhagwaan kahin...
suddenly a doorbell rang.
surya got up and opened the door.she saw neera carrying hrithvik.
surya-hrithvik,hrithvik,surya couldn't see neera's face.neera puts hrithvik and turned.she was about to do something to surya when she saw her belly.a drop of tear fell from her eye.


she felt really sad.she saw surya again.
surya realized-you could have easily done it,why?
neera-i previously said that i don't kill children.if i wanted,i would have done it way before.
surya-welcome back,i saw you after such a long time.you look prettier now.
neera-huh...you selfish hags...you know that i always hated you.
surya-i realize it...
nupur entered-oh no...she bowed.welcome back.😭
neera-i am putting myself to sleep.
nupur and surya-what?😲
neera-i don't wanna feel the sadness again.
nupur-but valkyrie...😕
surya-you...you are serious?😲
neera-i will go to an entire slumber for this lily to bloom,hope that you will protect my beloved(to nupur and referring to hrithvik)
nupur-i will do my best.
neera-remember if this time i awake,there is no one who will able to tame me down,not even this selfless person.(to hrithvik)
neera fainted...
ashish on the beach...
ashish-i got way late...🥱 he saw body parts lying here and there.
cool there is also a kidney around here,oh and that stomach.woah...i never thought that she was that destructive,i thought she only liked to turn people into dust.😡
he remembered...
ashish's dad-i can help you,let me in.
a lady-get out of my head.
his dad-you have to be tamed otherwise you will...ah ah...his head started hurting and soon he turned into dust.
ashish shouted-dad...
ashish to lady-why???
lady with a scary expression,a tear fell from her eye-sometimes things are not in your control and she pats his head and left.
ashish-but..
he came out of his thoughts...
ashish-i will protect humans and mutants.
neera gets up..her head was hurting.her clothes were changed by nupur.
neera-ah what happened?
nupur-ah don't let yourself get tangled up.
neera-i remember watching a movie and then ah my head is hurting.
nupur-just go to sleep.okay..she left.
surya-hrithvik..😭
nupur-don't worry use thode der mein hosh aa jayega.
surya-hosh aa jane par wo puchega nahin.
nupur-mein uske aaj raat ke memory erase kar dunge.
surya-😭 i don't understand why she went to sleep?how she suddenly got a strange wisdom?😕 she is not that type.
nupur-sometimes i don't understand why she keeps coming back?just to destroy valkyrie,i thought she may wanted to kill you but she would have done it back then.
surya-i know why she doesn't want to kill me even after that she wants to do it so badly.
surya remembering...
surya as a child for standing all scared...blood was all around the forest.
another girl-now you...(to surya...)
a boy-no...he pushed her to the ground,they rolled,surya as a child all scared.
boy was shocked,angry,scared,crying...
he started slapping her...-stop it,stop it,stop it..stop it...stop it...
and the girl was doing nothing but crying.
she came out of her thoughts..
surya-ah ah...
nupur-what??
surya-i think the pain started in my stomach.
nupur-huh..i shall call the doctor.she quickly called.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
our gang...
nupur,kitty,mohit,yuuvi,neera,hrithvik,amrit and rathod.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
neera with karthik...a sneak peek.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww! wat an update!
And I guess neera mein us doosri neera ka aatma chalaa gaya hain!
Bechara hritvik!
Wassup with valkyrie thing? hmmm interesting!!!
And any dushmani of surya with anyone?

Loved the update!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this chapter quite confusing 😕 so its Anu who killed Hrithvik's dad n sis?but she mentioned Hrithvik as her beloved???she'll b in slumber until the birth of HritYa's(Hrithvik+Surya=HritYa😳)kid???
sneak peak of Anu wid Karthik chooo chweet 😃 n how abt HritEra for Hrithvik n Neera😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Wowww! wat an update!

And I guess neera mein us doosri neera ka aatma chalaa gaya hain!
Bechara hritvik!
Wassup with valkyrie thing? hmmm interesting!!!
And any dushmani of surya with anyone?

Loved the update!
Thanks for the pm!


just flow with the story😆 on valkyrie thing.
bas padhte jao aur specualte karte jao balak.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

this chapter quite confusing 😕 so its Anu who killed Hrithvik's dad n sis?but she mentioned Hrithvik as her beloved???she'll b in slumber until the birth of HritYa's(Hrithvik+Surya=HritYa😳)kid???
sneak peak of Anu wid Karthik chooo chweet 😃 n how abt HritEra for Hrithvik n Neera😉


i just wanna say you are smart.😃(on anu killing thing but how could anu kill his dad and sis when she born just 17 years ago??😲 😆)
i think neevik is better.😆
hritya is a nice name.
i told ya,the story in first generation is confusing.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
me smart 😆oh yeah she's jus 18 na i hope i wont get lost in this confusion 😉
NeeVik is cute 😳

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