Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Lovely work... nice twist thr...

At the beginning the "her" i thought was Khushi... but when he went to buy jalebi... it twisted... it wasnt her in the beginning... I'm assuming its Anjali and her son...

Well its great atleast that his daughter knows him and she hugged it... sooo emotional...

Khushi... she is a strong bold character here... nice...

lovely work once again.. keep it up...

update soon and do pm me...

thanks SubhaShreeNanda for the pm...

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garlic

@garlic

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

very good TS ...I loved it😊

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Saba Saifi

@-Saba-

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awee..its really awesome..love to read it..
and plz continue ...want to read more.

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onetwothree

@onetwothree

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

amazing update..👍🏼...continueee...👍🏼

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urm21

@urm21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

brilliant. please send pm update

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow.. amazing story.. soo touching.. loved it.

asha singh raizada was adorable..

poor arshi..

hey, can u plz pm me ur future updates.. i have sent u the request.

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Amazing start...
Beautifully written..
Loved it...😊

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-Iqraa-

@-Iqraa-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

intresting...

update soon😊

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Wow this sounds interesting ! Please do the update the next part soon dear !!👏😳

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

this is really interesting!continue soon! and please do pm me!😊

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