Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

HOW

WHAT

WHEN

WHY

SO MANY QUESTIONS TO ANSWER AND ONLY YOU CAN ANSWER THEM

UFF THAT WAS SO SAD ASR MEETING HIS DAUGHTER WHOM HE KNEW NOTHING ABOUT AND YET ALL THAT GUY THINKS ABOUT IS HOW SHE BETRAYED HIM

WHY DO I FEEL THERE IS MORE TO THIS STORY THAN WE KNOW OR DONT KNOW DOES THAT MAKE SENSE

WOULD LOVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED

CHEERS FOR PM

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

tooo good and pls continue soon

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

thx for pm dear

poor Arnav

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome story
Although I hv a question hw old is asha is she 6 or 4

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Priya_990

@Priya_990

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

very well written dear.👏cant believe that it is ur first one.if possible plz pm me wen u update.thanks for subha for introducing this to me.😊

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow...A new story and a new author👏👏👏...loved the way you portrayed the feelings of the characters...Awaiting your update and would you please PM when you update..Thanks to SubhaShreeNanda for forwarding your work...

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome TS.
really loved it.
loved the way you narrated and the best part of this TS is slap on the face of arnav.
superb.
no one has written that.
kushi has to bear so much and had to go through lot of pain but arnav got forgiveness easily but it seems difficult here.
so too happy.