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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: random94

well, its my first time reading ur work, so i will comment thread by thread!

1st thread: loved the way u hv built up the characters and ur descriptions are just wonderful, really helps connect

2nd thread: loved the convo btw shashi and khushi!! no more words, wasnt expecting things to progress soon

3rd thread: well mushy and sweet!! awesome!!

btw i dont really comment if i really dont like something and this is probably one of my longest comments!!

ps, u should really try writing professionally!!


Hi! I'm really moved that you liked this FF enough to comment and let me know your views! It's very motivating and encouraging and I'm glad you took the time to do so! Thank you for reading!

And I do intend to take up writing professionally in the future...*fingers crossed*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saucechips

*blushes*

*blushes harder*

Hum bhi aapse I love you dammit! In fact, hum aapse thoda zyada I love you dammit!


I doubt that :P

I was actually lucky to have made this for you, you know? That was the ONLY way it could have got so much of praise considering the photoshop experts which reside in this place. You totally didn't need to do this and I am so glad you liked it and that is just enough.

Ah, but I did need to do this, if only to show you how much it meant to me that someone put in the time and effort to make this for me :) And you've gained a lot of fans with this banner so maybe you're underestimating your abilities :P

You be an awesome writer dammit! I would totally chhe mahine contract marriage you anyday. 😃

Definitely! :P

Lots of love,
Sabi :)

- By the way, nobody's going to believe that I've made this. W
hat with it being serious and all 😆

Everyone loves it, and they should too, it's gorgeous! :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains

This chapter was brilliant. So brilliant! You have an amazing way of understanding human emotions and then putting them into text. The role-reversal was subtle, but oh so beautifully done. *sigh* <3


Aw thank you! That's a HUGE compliment and I'm so happy and flattered you think so, especially as this was one emotionally dense update and I was nervous about whether I got everything across well or not :) Thank you sooo much for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment! *hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _disha_

I love the Banner !👍🏼❤️


Awesome Work Saucechips !😎

Abhi isi khushi main dono ache ache updates de do !😃😆


Lol 😆 Updated NYR and to be honest I really want to update MDJND too so who knows :P


Thanks - from both Sabi and me :P

Originally posted by: preethi28

Ek zabardast banner mil gaya issi Khushi mein ek update ho jayein?😆


😆Let's see :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vks11

I loved it. Each chapter is better and amazing the previous one.. What can I say. I love your writing. too good. no words to express.


Thank you!!! I'm flattered :P Really happy you enjoyed the chapter and my writing - thank you so much for taking the time to read, and for letting me know your thoughts!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amv63

Nafisa,

First, you have to stop being so worried about our reactions to your story(ies). You are a wonderful, talented writer and you have absolutely no reason to be so diffident about readers' responses. We love your work, as evinced by the number of likes and comments you receive. ❤️👏

Oh my goodness. I don't know what to say. This has got to be one of the most moving comments I've read until now, I just - thank you, thank you SO much!

I'm generally an insecure person about everything in life, to the point that my best friend calls me the 'worry-wart', and writing is one of the things I take the most seriously, so this type of encouragement means the world to me. I can't thank you enough!

I would have written this in a PM but you say your inbox is choking with messages, so I thought I'd say it here because I think everyone who reads your stories will agree with me. What say, ladies?
I do not comment on every chapter because life is really hectic, but believe me, I read every one, sometimes twice over.

I completely understand how life can get hectic, which is one reason I become so irregular with updates, but honestly, the fact that you took the time out to read or reread my work, and especially to write such a lovely, motivating comment, means a whole lot to me. I don't have words to explain how moved I am :) Thank you so much!!

Over the past few updates, you have slowly shown the growing trust, the bond between Arnav and Khushi. Besides being physically closer, they are also now coming together emotionally. Khushi's right, it's time Arnav stopped shouldering this burden on his own. He has to know that just as he has the right to kiss his wife "wherever and whenever" he likes, she also has the right to share his sorrows together with his joys. He cannot keep on protecting her and Anjali. They are strong women and need to feel as if they are contributing to the happiness of the man they both love.

Thank you! Anjali is one of the most complex characters I've ever written about, and I'm so happy you appreciate and approve of the development in her character, brought out by as mundane a feat as accompanying someone to the mandir instead of being accompanied :) Yes, Arnav had been shouldering too many burdens for too long - but hopefully the two most important women in his life will help lighten that load :)

So, sweetie, you are doing great 👍🏼, a genuine ⭐️, and here's a great big 🤗 for you.
Okay, now I'm off to read about New Year ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I can't tell you how happy this comment made me :D
And I hope you enjoy NYR too!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne

I love this FF and all your work! Your writing and all your stories are so addictive, I can't wait for your next part! 👏

Thanks for the update and thanks for still writing on IF!


Thank you! I'm really touched and always moved by your opinion of my writing - it's flattering and humbling at once :) Really happy you've enjoyed this update- thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Excellent bed time read! I saved the last chapter so read both in one go. Very nicely written. Enjoyed it loads x


Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapters! Again, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Japonica





Aaaww, Saucechips, that was such a sweet banner, very apt for DE's terrific story.

I can imagine those puffed out cheeks getting puffier while the razor sharp teeth gnaw away at the corn in a mix of emabrassment and pleasure at the well-deserved compliment that that DE has paid you in her special note!!!


Chomp away Ms. Chipmunk! I've always loved your DP! itis one terrific DP😃


Hello Di! It's been so long since I've heard from you ... thank you for your comment on the TwoShot btw - I loved it and have replied :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana73

now update this one jaldi jaldi


Lol, I'll try

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