Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 - Page 78

Originally posted by: varshapan

yayayayayay!!!! you wrote my favouritest FF again...

ok now that i have exulted in that, let me get to the update itself.

amazing!! love the way khushi has taken over the role of a companion and asserted her rights as wife to arnav.

and love the conversation the two have had.

Originally posted by: NikitaM11

Loved the chapter! An so glad it was extra one! Can't wait for the talk they have with Anjali! Hope they actually get to and nothing goes wrong! Can't wait for the next update !!

Originally posted by: jojo21

You're absolutely right you did incorporate a lot in this chapter, and I'm really grateful to you. You in your 15! pages not only developed our characters relationship further, but you gave us more insight into Shyam's desperation and the fear that it creates amongst our characters. While I loathe this character, he's so deliciously evil that you can't help want to see what he does next, but also want to see hour our protagonists get the best of him.

On another note, I liked how you had Arnav talk to Khushi and reveal his feelings and how much it relieves that stress he's feeling and how Khushi reiterated that she is indeed his partner.

Such a great chapter!

Originally posted by: vann

So they are moving onto a partnership mode - at equal footing. so glad that Khushi is able to draw out Arnav from 'me, the protector' mode. You capture his yearning and feelings so beautifully. I am just waiting for Anjili to act!!

Thank you! I'm happy you approve of Khushi reminding Arnav he doesn't always have to be the one to be depended on - it's an important milestone in their relationship, and they're learning to move side by side :) Anjali will act soon too - I wonder if she'll take you by surprise :P

Your PM always brightens the day. It would be brighter though if you updated Cul-de-sac too...that one is turning out to my absolute favourite. Just that the updates are so far between. please do something about that... Please please pretty please, update cul-de-sac.😊

Aw, I'm sorry about the delays. Cul-de-sac is one my favourites to write too - but the thing is, it's probably more serious and symbolic than any of my other works and I want to be able to concentrate fully on it, which isn't possible in the little bits of free time I get between this and that. Next update will definitely be for that one, promise!

Originally posted by: kbtr

Excellent! I love the new Kushi. I love how it is becoming so blatant that he cannot do without her. The direction the relationship as taken makes it obvious that they are becoming so dependent on one another. I cannot wait to see what happens when they actually see each other after this new found feeling. Yeah, want to know what he said!

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

Sorry for late comment bit busy

update is heart wrenching and emotional for me atleast

they both live far from each other

separate places

separate room but same under sky under same stars and same moon

they bound with each other strongly from when she fall in hsi arms first time

that realize it later

but still they ready to collect and move with their own unique bonding and love

khushi always there for her arnav ji she doesn't want to add her in his responsibility list but she want to be share his happiness his woes his responsibility and most importantly his life

i m looking forward how together they fight with evil its time arnav khushi stand with each other to fight and its not time for choices its time for togetherness

thanks for giving long wali update

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Amazing update! :)

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very nice

khushi knows that she will have to be arnav's support when it comes to anjali and arnav is determined to keep shyam away from khushi

please continue soon

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Thank you for a long chapter.

Loved how it is so detailed. Each emotion and action so well written.

Khushi has summed up their relationship so beautifully. It's like she has given a new definition to the word relationship. Her strength is amazing.

Originally posted by: annieK

Liked it all . Immensely . The bond , the understanding , the role reversal and Arnav's growing dependence on Khushi ...everything beautifully expressed .
And that he couldn't help but give in to Khushi's pleas ...to unburden himself and seek comfort from only her . ...lovely !
Look forward to how they approach Anjali and maybe are surprised in their turn ...?
Thnx for the pm dear.

PS : NYR next , I am hoping . 😊