FF: Tales of the Heart|VirMan|CH 1 - 23 (Thread 1)

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

first of all dnt think dat u r spamming inbox. .coz i loved it u do dat i got excitd for reading ur ff as soon as i see ur pm..
nw abt update asusual it was wondrful...loved it d way virman relatn is developing n their mutual undrstnding... continue soon n thanks 4 pm. .

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

wonderful part dear... loved the way virat is still in hurt due to his past and maanvi giving him all the space for him to overcome it... waiting for next part...

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Siya N

@monumolu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Loved it to the core!!!! It was magical indeed. 😊

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

loved it.. aswome as usual.. nd keep updating dear..😊 ..

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Thanks for the lovely comments! Will update as soon as I get home from college (like I said, I love waking up to read them! ;))

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

U know what,after reading the ninteenth part,I could only think of 2 things ''strawberries'' ''She had an yearn to comfort him''...That's why I reserved the comment!😆I love the way you have writtten VirMan's thoughts about eachother's presence..And JeeMan's bonding is so heart-warming...And I love the way you are unfolding Virat's past in that proper pace..I seriously love it!❤️And you are describing the Vadhera palace so beautifully and clearly that I could imagine it myself..And that last part!Maanvi saw a teary-eyed Virat was yearning to comfort him!OMG!Thank you so much for giving us such lovely VirMan moments❤️
PS:I love that strawberry part!How much poor Virat is affected by her!😆
Virat's past is more explored in the last chapter..😃...I love this pace girl..Keeping that suspense still in hand when Maanvi gonna know all about it..Can't wait for that..Really interested to know how he's gonna tell it and how the whole part will be like..
And loved Maanvi gave him his space to let him cry and get over with it..And I love their closeness..*blush*And OMG the second half was a treat to read..Virat taking care of her..Their understanding..Their convo..Their thoughts about eachother...And I love Maanvi's disappointment where she thought Virat didn't let her know about his past..
PS:I specially love the parts where you mentioned Shiv...Maanvi is still missing him..You keep it all so natural<3
Uh-oh...And that rose part has some significance??Like it symbolizes Maanvi will get hurt because of Virat or something??..May be I should just stop before you think I'm gone insane reading your updates!😛
PS:And don't worry Zahara..You have given us so much awesome VirMan as well as other moments to cherish until your next update..And thank you for that...Loved the spamming..Still waiting for your lovely VirMalacious updates!😛

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arhifandebi

@arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.

awhh! GET WORKING. Good luck with your exams...
mine start in 2 months, sighhh

Thanks a lot dear..⭐️... After 2 months I again have an exam and after that a series of exams will follow...... Exam-filled life..😛..where your updates act as my best source of relief...⭐️... All the best to you as well for your exams...😊

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Oh.My.Gosh!

I like the way you go slow with the whole thing without rushing. You write so fast, that I'm not able to manage with the pace you update! You're certainly on a roll girl..

I find friendship blossom between the two. Okayy so, Maya betrayed him and so he was on the verge to commit suicide but then Viren came by and saved him I guess..though I felt a little surprised at the sudden mood swing of Virat.

You showed it how wonderfully Manvi had made a difference to her unknowingly. You gonna update today! Man are you planning to kill me with the updates!