FF: Tales of the Heart|VirMan|CH 1 - 23 (Thread 1)

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Awesome update virman getting closer loved it continue soon and do pm me

Ps sorry for the late comment

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oriyana

@oriyana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Strawberries!! I Love Strawberries... ❤️

Virat loves strawberries... Maanvi loves them too!! I Loved this 😊

And their relationship is develping at a very good pace... Neither too slow, nor too fast!! And I Love it..

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Ava

@SmileXD

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Sorry, (not your occasional hi but this is needed)

Sorry for commenting late I read like the last five chapters (I think) yesterday but didn't comment because I was sleepy (lamest excuse ever).

I really, really, really enjoyed reading the past couple chapters. Their relationship is just getting better and like I said before you're an awesome writer. The pace is the best thing about it, it makes it seem like the stories and the characters are more real, nothing rushed, nothing slow.

The emotions are another thing I like about your story. You just describe things so well which makes me :)

Loving it so far,

Take care, Ava

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shona v p

@Shona1907

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Heya!! Sorry i've not commented to da last few chaps... Eee!! I know it sounds like an excuse bt genuinely my fon was acting all stupid and it dint let me like or comment on IF for a few days lol... I'm loving and njoying how da story has moved... U hav made Shiv as a very imp characters for virman's marriage happening... Nice to see how virat is feeling Sumthng for Manvi and is attracted to her... Hmmm Manvi is already understanding him... Ok der was a flashback scene den present wer Shiv opens Manvi's chit to see 'V' written on it, tat was really interesting... Hope sumtym ahead Manvi cums to noe or remembers abt tat V lol... Manvi is anyway helpful so i guess soon virat will forget Maya? Well i see virat Manvi becoming frnds atleast... I like how u r not skipping anythng and da story is moving scene by scene in detail... Shows that u plan things really well in advance... Gr8 job Zahara 😊 thanx for da pms 😉

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Will surely pray for you Zahara... Don't worry 😊
Take care 🤗

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Nisha

@nisha33

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

zahara!!

this comment will prolly sound like the last comment

I LOVE THE PACE OF YOUR FF. you are taking it slow and developing each relationship, i adore that.

thank you for the pm

as usual it was an amazing update.

my favorite part was when virat came back for her and showed her around the palace.

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

For everyone that recently commented: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so sorry for the lack of updates, but I swear once I'm through with Uni applications I will be back. I know exams are starting for you (and for me soon), so I'm delaying this FF for a bit. It's a little short notice, yes I know but I'm sorry.

*Edit*

I'll update another chapter on Monday, seeing as I'm turning 18 and how else do I celebrate than writing a VirMan FF? 😆

Ciao!

Edited by ZAHARA. - 12 years ago

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

loved the update...the way virman's relationship is blooming is a treat to read...and i love how true you hav been to maanvi's original character...now waiting eagerly for their love story to start...as it is virat has started feeling something more for maanvi...loved the strawberry-smell part...

now waiting for maanvi to realize her feelings too...

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

tat was a really a fabulous part:)👏

loooved the way they both r understanding each other...😳

i hope soon virat would tell her truth...😊

lovely update:)😊

thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

i just love this story...you portray emotions really well and never hav i read a sentence where it has been overdone...am loving the relation ship btween virman...the awkwardness , hesitance , care everything is so serene and pure...

and the vadheras truly are different and awesome...

update soon wen you get the free time...