SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1021

part 12 to 14

all three parts were awesome

really liked arnav's protective side towards their kido..

gosh i hate dadi and anjali..their talking r so disgusting..

how can she think about his own brother

here anjali bein so selfish..

glad to read that khushi defend her arnavji.. naniji is so sweet..

wow kya entry li hai ASR ny..

loved it..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1022

part 15 to 18

all paryts were superb

oh god they fight

now khushi is going to her buaji house

arnav is angry with khushi..he called her stupid and hormonal..hehe😆

plz arnav khushi ko mana lo..patch up with her..

hmm finally thori aqal i asr ko..he must pecify his pregnant wife..

aman lines were funny..

so finally anjali take decision to adopt a girl...

aww how sweet arnav wants a baby girl..

oh wow khushi is having a baby

arnav wish come true..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1023

part 19 to 21

aww that was so sweet..😊

and haldi scene was hilarious..and buaji blabbering was too funny..

she ruined her saree and arnav suit too.hehehe🤣

their patch up was so cute..

loved their lovey dovey moments..

the gift arnav gives khushi was so pretty❤️

very touchy and emotional

so finally arnav kido is born..so sweet name and perfect ending..

u r an amzing writer.wonderfully written..👏👏

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1024

Awesome ss 😛

U have nicely portrayed the journey of a couple in to parenthood.

Love it 😊

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Sweta1495

@Sweta1495

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1025

awesome yaar...i love the concept, and i agree with your thoughts...khushi should have been portrayed as someone more strong and smart, not as someone as crazy as was portrayed...

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1026

OMG ... first time in IF suggested by my friend to read it..u blew me away with this story of "becoming a father". This is the exact story line I was looking for in IPKKND as Arshi becoming a parents and been dying them to include this kind of story.

Congrats to you and hats off for writing this superb n awesome story AND THANK YOU. Please do write more story like this.

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Akhila

@slowsun93

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1027

I just started reading it nice story .

Am very eager to complete.

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#1028

Hi read it in one go. It was superb

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loveandluck

@loveandluck

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#1029

The last chapter is so cute and emotional. I've read it atleast ten times just today, and that's after reading the whole story atleast five times in the past.

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1030

Farah, this was the first ever Fan Fiction piece I read and I had immediately fell in love with your writing style!!!! From then I started following 'Something About You'!!!!

So these two stories are my absolute favourites as 'Becoming a father' made me fall in love with your writing style and 'Something About You' just confirmed how much of an amazing writer you are!!!!! It just showed how you always beautifully depicted various emotions!!!! It was truly breathtaking and unique!!!!

Thank you so much for writing this SS and 'SAY'!!!!!

I always love re-reading this SS!!!!

Thanks again Farah!!!

Take care!!!!

Lots of love,

Rahat