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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

Part 20 - Beautiful update...Sweet Arnav & Sanka devi still remembers tht 2 lakh hand bag 😆

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

Lovely ending...I read few parts few mnts back then missed d link...Got it again this week & finally read all d parts...Awesome SS 😊

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Beautiful SS...
Loved it...😊

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saakhi01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

This whole ss was awesome...
It was beautifully written n all d emotionds eere aptly described 😃

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ayu_tripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

beautiful story..!! loved the way it unfolded..written beautifully..!!👏👏

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Sonia Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

😊 very nice ff!!! read it all in one go... i really liked Arnav's progress as a would be father... Anjali disappointed me somewhat but then i always thought of her as a very weak spirited person... gr8 rendition of every relationship!!! do write more...

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Ananya_Arshi

@Ananya_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

This stupid idea of asking khushi's baby definately fed by dadi to anjali . . . . I liked this strong khushi nt a emotional freak who sacrifices her baby fr othrs

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Ananya_Arshi

@Ananya_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1048

Stupid dadi is a baby some kind of jwelery or comodities tht one can gift othr

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1049

This was so nice,

loved the way you depicted Arnav and Khushi's

transformation from a married couple to Parents!!

Well written!!

Just loved it!!

Keep writing and TC!!😊

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1050

Farah, this was an amazing story. As soon as I read thst dhaddi was living with them I thought this wasnt going to go well, and I was right. How can anyone walk up to someone who is so happy to be pregnant and ask for their child?Even worse they asked Arnav that too in a sly way. Sounds like something out of repunzel, only a witch would do something so horrid. LOVED how you kept to the original characters, even though anjali was more screwd up.

Well done I hope you keep writing. Muuwh