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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Ohhh! Poor Arnav😭
What The!! How dare Poojali slap him??😡 that too for that Shyam?? 🤢
I cried with Arnav today😔
Bechara is broken like hell

That was a Superb Update,Gazal👏
Hats off to u- U write every emotion soo beautiful- feel like happening before my eyes
Update soon,pls😃
thnx for the PM😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Ohhh! Poor Arnav😭
What The!! How dare Poojali slap him??😡 that too for that Shyam?? 🤢
I cried with Arnav today😔
Bechara is broken like hell

That was a Superb Update,Gazal👏
Hats off to u- U write every emotion soo beautiful- feel like happening before my eyes
Update soon,pls😃
thnx for the PM😃


I too cried for Arnav today...especially when he was confronted by his OWN di..!!! How heart broken he was looking...😒

And, Thank u soo much for liking my work...credit goes to u ppl. who make such wonderful comments, encouraging a writer to write more n better than his/her previous works...!!!👏🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
me sad for my arnav,plssupdate soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Hi everyone..!!
It really feel blessed when u all like n appreciate my writings...While updating second part i was scared 'coz this part was really a creepy one!🤢 I felt that do...but was overwhelmed by responses. Thank u once again for ur constant support n like..!! Now, as my exams are approaching i'll be less active here. As promised , next part is going to be treat for my readers...n don't worry i'll be updating that soon !!😉 Probably by tomorrow or on Sunday.

Love u all,
Gazal..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
baaaki ki story kaha hain???????????
updato karo naa...me getign impatient
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Part 3...updated on pg 15.. :)
Edited by khand_du - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
B'fore reading my OS please listen to song - Ekla Chalo re...From movie KAHAANI...for some emotional built up for the story...😊
Edited by khand_du - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
It feels so privileged to present my work in front of such an appreciating audience...Thank u once again for liking my work. Here goes 3rd part of my OS...I dedicate this OS to sweetheart of mine Harshu...😃



*FLASHBACK CONTINUES*


He was walking back to his room. Flashbacks of happy memories hovering in his mind...disturbing him within. Why?? Why he did this to his Di? Why he again could not do anything for her happiness? He failed again. With all these thought he felt weak on his knee n was about to collapse...when suddenly someone's support never let him fall...it were hands of same, who has been on his side...pacifying him...assuring him that someone is always by his side...His Khushi.


Khushi very well knew what was going in his mind. She too was broken from inside...to see her husband in this state...cursing herself. But for now, she has to needs to take of herself...so that she could mend the wound of That poor soul, who was walking properly just 'coz of her...a broken soul...a stabbed soul.


They reached their room...only place in whole RM where Arnav can cry...cry upto any extent in her lap. Khushi made him sit on couch...n went to get water for his medicines. As she returned, she saw him standing by french door, looking at stars...totally lost. She too joined him. She extended her hands n insisted him to take medicines.

"I am a curse to my mom, to my Di, n to u Khushi...I don't deserve to live..", He finally spoke. His words very well reflected how much broken from inside...not just broken, but totally dead.


"No, Arnavji..u r.. " Khushi was interrupted by him. "Let me say Khushi" , he said softly. " I am looser Khushi...i can never bring happiness in anyone's life...I don't deserve anyone...I...", He finally broke into tears.


"Shh...Arnavji...first take this medicine...please...for ur Khushi's sake. " She gave him his medicines. He took it n gulped it down.

" Now listen to me.. " She said...controlling her emotions. "You deserve me...u deserve every happiness. Without u I am nothing. Without u Di would have been completely broken. Without u nothing can go right. You r the best man I have ever met. " She said n hugged him really tight...now totally broken.

Arnav to held her tight...crying like an innocent child in her arms...the only place in the world where he can cry to his content. Both feeling, how much they were broken from inside.

Khushi, broke the hug. Her hands still resting on his shoulder...said.. " I LOVE U ARNAVJI...without u m nothing." She said that n got more closer n kissed his lips...started taking taste of lower lips. He stood there...motion less...in tears. He too responded to her kiss...biting hers too...caressing her back simultaneously...tears still wetting their cheeks.

Khushi wanted to be his tonite...she was determined. No one in this world could pull them apart them today. Today she wanted to take up all the pain that this poor soul was carrying since he was 14. They parted , to let some air in. Khushi slid her hands to his neck n kissed on cheeks...sipping each drop of his tears. Arnav too slid his hand to her waist, pulled her more n more towards...not letting even an inch of separation. He then kissed her forehead n picked her up. Put her softly on bed.. "I LOVE U TOO KHUSHI.." He said in his husky voice n bent down...caressing her neck with his lips...Khushi tightly held him.
That night two passionate lover became one...one for eternity. They made love that night, completed their desire to be one...which as been suppressed for ages...filled with guilt, happiness, gloom...filled with Passion.




*Next morning*
Khushi got up n found herself in his arms...Those arms which promised to protect her always. She blushed thinking of what happened the previous night. Took a glance at wall clock...n Alas! She has to get up...time for her Household responsibilities. She softly removed his hands , got up n kissed his forehead...n headed towards Washroom...assured that now Arnav gonna be alright..



Precap :- "Arnav sir, really loves u Khushi Bhabhi...My Boss is one of the best person on this whole earth.. " Aman said.
What made him say that..??



Ohk ppl. m done writing...i hope this was a treat to my readers...m sorry i don't know how to write love making scenes well...but i tried my best...😳
All i can say in my next part u'll see how much selfless soul Arnav is...i promise u won't regret reading that part...

Do comment n like...it encourages me...i really got emotional while writing...i hope m able to transfer same feeling to u too.

Love u all,
Gazal

p.s : Sorry for any mistake..
Edited by khand_du - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
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yupiee I m the first one to comment...
wow dalg it is really awesome😉

ofcourse bit romantic..😉

thanks for the PM

really awesome update dear waiting for another update

love u n love ur gazal dalg..🤗


Edited by shillu.arshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Ok...ppl. PMs sent...hope will like this part...

Happy Reading..!!❤️

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