Swaron OS-A Day Full Of Surprises *NOTE, page 12 - Page 8

Originally posted by: swaronland

absolutely loved this❤️ it was pleasure to read this os👏

now days with current swaron track i'm frustrated but ur os manage to calm me 😃

i really wish CV's would give us swaron hug but u made this possible in ur os very beautifully with special swaron intensity😃

loved all gift but swayam's poetry book is special one❤️

thank u so much for such beautiful part🤗

u should continue writing with more swaron stuff

thanks for pm

ah love you for giving our dream a shape of an OS we are dying to have a swayam or sharon birthday nd you made me grin ear to ear reading this thankyou very much for the pm

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

ah love you for giving our dream a shape of an OS we are dying to have a swayam or sharon birthday nd you made me grin ear to ear reading this thankyou very much for the pm

awesome OS...it was heavenly ...to see sharon and swayam share thier 1st hug ...sharon thinking about why they maintained physical distance as it feels perfect to be in his arms ...swayam the caring ,loving and understanding boyfriend ...he planned such sweet birthday for her ... spend time with her ..but he don't want her to avoide her friends for him ..so he left ...the hand written poem book ... perfect gift ... i loved ur style of writing .. wow 👏👏👏...m smiling like an idiot 😊😊😊 ...waiting for the next part ... ... thanx for the pm ...😊

Awesome OS Anmol, sorry if i am wrong.

Read the two updates together..gosh!!It was beautiful..Swayam made Sharon's birthday soo perfect..loved all the gifts especially the poetry book!!I loved their first hug!It WAS special!!i just don't know what to say..im at a loss of words..i just want to say it was awesome!!!

just read both of the update! goSh they were realy beautiful.. the way swayam managed to be the first one to wish sHaron.. bth the updates wer awesome.. bt the thingS Wich caught my eye wer: swayam gifts,especialy the poem buk... how swayam notwanted tears in sharon's eyes,not evn the happy ones.. and last the note left by swayam... that truly reflected his pure selfless heart.. waitin for the nxt update... do it soon.. Thanks for the pm!😃

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Awesome OS Anmol, sorry if i am wrong.

Loved how you handled both Swayam and Sharon's character very close to the one in D3.

The first part where Swayam very smartly tricks her in to a phone call and arranged for a b'day surprise was nicely done. Loved how he hides behind and waits for her reaction before going forward, i can so imaging Swayam doing that. The emotions that came to me with the second part had me smiling and the SwaRon hug- beautifully shown. The intensity SwaRon share could be easily felt. Keep writing more on SwaRon and thanks for the PM.