Swaron OS-A Day Full Of Surprises *NOTE, page 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: d3lover90

Hey awsm superlikess
my heart skip a bit when they huged ech other
dont knw jb wo show me hug krenge tb kya hoga..
That will b biggest event ...
Nw bck to ur update it is awsm they way u express friends wishing her bday was awsm loved it

Originally posted by: D3rocksss

Awsum
D update was amazingly beautiful or rather i say u wrote it beautifully
Swayam is such a sweetheart
N sharon is no less
Deir hug was decribed beautifully by you
Just d way it should be 'perfect'
I thought it was d end but i guess dere is a lot more to come
After reading dis os i am jelous of sharon
She had got a perfect boyfriend

Originally posted by: meevee

Awsum update...ekdum wished for in dreams birthday...to have her BF go out of his way and make the beginning of her birthday so so extraordinary...ekdum Swayam style, puray planning ke saath aur Sharon ka shockingly pleasant surprise, usse bhi pleasant reaction, emotionally choked, happiness overbounding...u made it all look so genuinely natural and beautiful...the choice of gifts, the dance, everything was so personalized and hence so SwaRon - reading this OS brought life to my otherwise drab evening as far as SwaRon are concerned😊 - update soon

Originally posted by: ABBY92

That was super sweet !! Loved the surprise and adored the way Swayam hid to see her reaction first before coming behind her to sing Happy Birthday !! The first hug was truly special and I loved the end bit where everyone else called to wish her and he left her to attend to the her friends too !!! Can't wait for the third part !!!

Originally posted by: mrash

Njoid??? Loved it!!!! 👏

As usual adorable SWAYAM, and a different (emotional) SHARON - such a cute couple.


🥳🥳Happy B'day SHARON !!!🥳🥳

Originally posted by: kool kanz

awsum awsum...d best bday a boyfrnd swayam can plan for his girlfriend sharon...wow...it was indeed special for both of dem . i love d gifts...dey wer so awsum...plzz update soon...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey d second part was awesum..i liked everythyng..d hugging part was also d best..i wanted to see something like dis only on d3..but u already fulfiled my wish..nd d dazzlings wishing was also nice..do update d next part soon..nd plz don't forget to pm me..

Originally posted by: shaani2209

just read both the parts...and firstly would like to say THANK YOU for writing something like this, it really helped me get out of the shit that we are getting in the show...

AWESOME till now...

loved the plans swayam had for sharon...and yeah i know how important someones first wishes are, you have got that out in a beautiful way through your writing...loved it totally...

Loved their first HUG😳 and the gifts you chose to portray the feelings...

loved the teddy specially😳

and the way sharon was least interested in the shouting she was getting was cute...

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

That was super duper update. Aww swayam the majnu, he is the best and the hug yaar, awieee i loved it. It is really damn special. Thanks a lot for such a lovely hug wali update. Plz do start writing a FF...