Swaron OS-A Day Full Of Surprises *NOTE, page 12 - Page 6

That was super duper update. Aww swayam the majnu, he is the best and the hug yaar, awieee i loved it. It is really damn special. Thanks a lot for such a lovely hug wali update. Plz do start writing a FF...

Awesome update...yaa d hug was special n d gifts by swayam for sharon were also special...even liked d last part where sharon reads swayams message n goes to sleep...update soon...n thnx for pm.

AWESUM UPDATE. . SWAYAM IS JRT A PERFECT LOVER A GAL CAN HAV. . ND FIRST HUG WAS SO DAM ROMANTIC😉

Originally posted by: Rutu

With the current scenario that we see in the show, your update erases all the grimaces on my face.

I loved it how you proceeded with the story.the surprise that Swayam planned although somewhat expected but for Sharon as well as us it is amazing.I loved the description of the first hug and Swayam's reaction to he same was also nicely put. It seemed real. Swayam singing Happy Birthday in her ears in his angelic voice gave me a picturesque version of the same. I loved it where you mentioned about how he didn't want to see her tears be it happy or sad ones.

Loved the way Swayam took his revenge sweetly.

Ah the poems, we all miss our Poetic Majnu thanks for including that part. And how he left her after that saying that he didn't want to keep away from her friends. It was so Swayam like!!!

The last bit of conference call, quite relatable. It was hilarious when the dazzlers where shouting at her!!

I loved the ending as well where Sharon in spite of receiving so many messages, she preferred reading Swayam's poem.

Beautifully written loved it to the core

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

res..

unres...

loved the way you brought the SwaRon intensity..loved the way you portrayed their first hug. i wish if they could share one in reality nevertheless loved the portrayal of emotions. both swayam and sharon's POV was penned down beautifully. the gift overpowered each other as they purely reflected the affection he had in store for her. also, i liked the fact that you took care of every single detail be it swayam's statement that he doesn't want to impose himself on sharon or the concluding statement of his about picking her up for college..

loving this OS~GREAT work...

waiting for the next update eagerly..

just a suggestion don't use such links for images instead insert them in your post!

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

It was soo beautifull update
Swayam at sharon house n her reaction when she saw her room n gifts was really adorable
Swaron first hug was indeed special.. ❤️ ❤️
That cake part was cute then when sharon said my bf was pretty smart aww after that note n blushing sharon I just imaging both of them while reading this
Ending was sweet
Waiting for next part
Try to update it ASAP..
Loved it...:)

Originally posted by: tanzz15

Hey!tum kya ho yaar..! oh god,never expected this one to be so-"out of the world"types!!
loved the following-
'she wondered why they had maintained a physical distance for so long'


about tears-'not even happy one's'

& the most-
"i wanted swayam and sharon's first hug to be special & hopefully i've managed to make it so"



dil khush ho gaya aj to...

thanchieee...for such a wonderful piece..



love tania;)

Originally posted by: pooja123456

this was too cute...The way u described the room swayam decorated was nyc and loved the gifts u chose...Well written and pls pm me wen u update next!

Originally posted by: mili1987

wow...i could imagine each and every word...

kash show main aisa kuch dikaye

that will be the most special day for swaron fans...

plz update soon