Swaron OS-A Day Full Of Surprises *NOTE, page 12 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah. Both the parts were pretty impressive. I loved the fact that Swayam decided to surprise her at such an hour of night. . And Sharon.. aww.. she was so cute here.. Especially in the second part.
Coming to part two, it was very well written. What I liked the most was the way you described their physical proximity from her point of view.
I'm glad that she has realized something.. At least she now knows that hugging him is pure bliss.. 😆 I'm sure she knows that she has fun in his company.
All in all, these two updates were fun and enjoyable to read. I liked the idea of Swayam gifting her a handmade book of his poems..
Nice execution.
Update soon..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanha29

Woah. Both the parts were pretty impressive. I loved the fact that Swayam decided to surprise her at such an hour of night. . And Sharon.. aww.. she was so cute here.. Especially in the second part.

Coming to part two, it was very well written. What I liked the most was the way you described their physical proximity from her point of view.
I'm glad that she has realized something.. At least she now knows that hugging him is pure bliss..😆I'm sure she knows that she has fun in his company.
All in all, these two updates were fun and enjoyable to read. I liked the idea of Swayam gifting her a handmade book of his poems..
Nice execution.
Update soon..😳



Thank you Mihika for the lamba wala comment! :D
I'm working on the next update.
Hopefully I'll be done with it soon. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:

I know an update to this is LONG LONG overdue, and believe me, I've been working on it. I have a few ideas, but for some reason I'm not being able to form a comprehensive update.

Please bear with me a little while longer. I really hope I'm able to give you guys an update which will be worth all the patient wait.

Thank you. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon!!
and pm me wen u update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja123456

update soon!!
and pm me wen u update!



I will. :)

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