Swaron OS-A Day Full Of Surprises *NOTE, page 12 - Page 4

Thank you for the phenomenal response everyone!!

Originally posted by: meevee

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">Read the intro just now, mindblowing start...luking forward to the next part 😊</font>

Thank you so much. Will try and update tomorrow!

Here's the second part of the OS.

It's VERY long!

I hope you enjoy reading it and don't get bored half-way through.

Part II

As she opened the door of her room she heard a click, the sound of a switch being switched on. Standing at the doorway, she saw her room look as beautiful as it could ever be.

Her dark room had been dimly lit with a string of blue lights that adorned the walls.

On the floor, circling her bed, were gifts wrapped in coloured paper with pretty little ribbons tied around each one of them. In the middle of her bed was a chocolate cake on top of which was a burning candle. The rest of the room had pink and white balloons lazily scattered all over the floor. She stood fixed at the spot gazing intently at her room. As her mind registered what her eyes saw, her face broke into the brightest smile.

In one corner of the room, hidden in the dark, a heart danced in jubilation!

He had decided to reveal himself only after seeing her reaction. As he stood there looking at her, he saw something glisten on her cheek. He walked up to her, and looking into her moist eyes, silently, not disturbing the feel of the peaceful noiseless moment, whispered "Happy Birthday Sharon!"

She didn't know how to react. She wasn't the most expressive person in the world, but this surprise had rendered her speechless. Now that was something! Sharon Rai Prakash always had something to say. This was the first time in her entire life that she had found herself to be at a loss of words. Instinctively she threw her arms around his waist and buried her face in his chest. Now it was Swayam's turn to be surprised! Even though they had been in a relationship for 4 months now, they maintained a certain physical distance, except when they danced together. Both of them were extremely complex individuals and had acknowledged that they would take time to be truly free with each other, so they had started, with trying to share all their thoughts. They hadn't reached the stage of being comfortable with physical proximity, so Swayam, to say the least, was quite taken aback, but instead of saying anything, he just wrapped his arms around her, buried his face in her hair, and almost in a whisper, sang 'Happy Birthday' in his angelic voice!

She had wanted to express the way she felt, when she saw her room decorated like that. But she just couldn't find her voice! She wrapped her arms around him, trying to express her gratitude through the hug. She had buried her face in his chest, and could smell his sweet fragrance. She wondered why they had maintained a physical distance for so long! Hugging him felt so good. She felt so safe and secure in his arms, and when his fragrance enveloped all her senses, the world felt like the most beautiful place to be in.

He pulled away when he felt the front of his shirt getting wet. He didn't want to. The feel of having her in his arms was inexplicable. He loved holding her, against him and burying his face in her long locks. He pulled away from the hug and looked at her. He saw her wet cheeks, and immediately cupped her face in his hands. He wiped her tears with his thumbs and told her, "No tears today", she was about to respond, but before she could, he said, "Not even happy ones", responding to her unsaid words. Saying this he smiled his angelic smile. He took her hand and led her to the bed. He made her sit right behind the cake.

She could make out that it was home made, she instantly knew that he had baked it himself. She smiled, looking at it. He had tried to make it look as professionally baked as he possibly could, but to his dismay, he had learnt that icing a cake isn't as easy as it seems to be! He had actually done a pretty good job, and Sharon wouldn't have known if the words 'Happy Birthday Sharon' on the cake were not distorted! She made a wish, her wish was to let things be as beautiful as they were right now, if not better. She blew out the candle and cut the cake, while he was singing Happy Birthday in the background. She cut a piece and fed it to him. The melted chocolate with which he had layered the cake, now proudly layered his nose, with one swift movement of her hand! She stuck her tongue out at him, and all he could do was stand and marvel at her cuteness and innocence. He took a piece of cake in his hand, fed it to her, and then very gently caressed her cheek. Her cheeks turned a shade of red at his touch. His movement was so smooth that she didn't even realize that her cheek was covered with chocolate. She was too lost in his eyes. He held both her shoulders and turned her around to face the mirror. She was still in a spell, it took her a moment to register the intelligent manner in which he took revenge. And when she did, her mouth was left open in disbelief at his smart move! She looked so cute with her mouth open like that, that he couldn't stop himself from laughing.

Before he could infuriate her with his reaction he picked up all the gifts and placed it in front of her. Then he handed her the gifts one by one. She opened the wrapper of the first one. There were two boxes in it. Each of the two boxes had in it a dress, one- http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=casual+dress&start=687&hl=en&biw=1360&bih=677&addh=36&tbm=isch&tbnid=d0d-WkFeCTNAcM:&imgrefurl=http://www.dhgate.com/free-ship-09-chiffon-casual-new-evening-dresses/p-ff80808120d295c30120d6d00f4d559a.html&imgurl=http://image.dhgate.com/upload/20094/76/ff8080811d8a7896011d8aed99881e6e/productimg1240554081284.jpg&w=480&h=644&ei=AC5HUKTxPJHirAfg4YGYBg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=791&vpy=73&dur=1633&hovh=260&hovw=194&tx=59&ty=167&sig=100939459068554913937&page=23&tbnh=143&tbnw=108&ndsp=31&ved=1t:429,r:20,s:687,i:68

and the other-

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They were two simple yet beautiful dresses. Just like him, and she loved it.

The next gift was a pair of black pumps-

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(The link is for all the boys who read this OS and who don't know what pumps are! :P)

Another gift was a box full of assorted Swiss chocolates and Belgian dark chocolates.

He also gave her a teddy bear-

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And the last gift, which was the best of all, was a book of poems. Poems written by him, about her. It was a handmade book and was an open book, in the sense that more pages could be added to it. When she saw it, she had tears in her eyes. He had been standing beside her, silently observing her reaction to each of his gifts. He wiped the tears off of her cheeks and said, "I told you na, no tears today". She said in response, "I can't help it, this is just so beautiful, and I've only just read the first poem yet". Taking the book from her hand he said, "Read it later", then offering his hand to her he asked "May I have the pleasure to dance with the beautiful birthday girl?"

She took his hand, he played the song Tum Ho (from Rockstar) on his phone and they slowly began to sway to the music. The words of the song, in some ways expressed Swayam's feelings for Sharon. They were lost in the depth of each others eyes and they wished they could stay like this forever, but their beautiful moment was ruined by the sound of the landline ringing. Both of them were jerked out of their trance. Sharon ran outside and picked up the receiver. Simmi screamed at her, "Why the hell aren't you picking up your phone? Rinni and I have been trying to call you since forever! Oh! And Happy Birthday!", she chuckled when she said the last bit. "Oh my God! I'm so sorry!" Sharon said. "It's okay. Rinni and I are going to call on your phone, you better pick up" was Simmi's response.

When she was talking to Simmi, Sharon had an epiphany, of sorts, she realized that Swayam had called her on her landline so that he could get her out of her room and execute his plan. "I must say, my boyfriend is pretty smart!" she thought to herself. She ran into her room to receive the calls which were to come. He was nowhere to be seen. He had left a note on her bed which said, 'I wanted to be the first one to wish you, and I managed to do that. Just because I am your boyfriend doesn't mean I'm going to keep you away from your friends. Enjoy your talks with them. I hope you liked the surprise and the gifts. Happy Birthday Sharon! I love you.

P.S.- I'll be picking you up for college in the morning. Don't worry about what others will think. I've got that covered.'

She blushed while reading his note. Just when she was going to start thinking about the proceedings of the day, rather night, her phone, which was now in her hand started to vibrate. It was Simmi's call, but when she received it, she discovered that the entire Dazzling team was on conference. The first thing they did was to shout "Happy Birthday Sharon" in unison. Then each one individually began screaming at her for not picking up their call. She was too happy to care about the fact that she was getting screamed at, by her own friends on her birthday. She smiled at all the rubbish they were saying, rubbish because they were all talking and the same time, and despite her many efforts, she couldn't make out a word of what they were saying to her individually. The screaming stopped when Neha and Vishakha joined the conference. After that, there was more of a Kagu-Babu romance session on the phone with the others just getting annoyed at how pathetic the two love birds sounded. The conversation soon started to get on Nilesh's nerves and the final goodbyes were said. Everyone wished Sharon again and left her to hug her new teddy bear and read the book of poems written for her. She checked her phone. She had a hundred missed calls from all her friends put together and messages from them and many other people. She lay down in bed and began to read the other poems he had written for her, hugging the teddy bear he had gifted her. A little while later, she closed her eyes after reading a message she had just received, which said 'Goodnight Love'

I want the Swayam and Sharon's first hug to be special, and hopefully I've managed to make it so.

I hope you enjoyed reading the update.

I know I said that this OS would have a total of 3 parts, but I guess there'll be more, so I guess it'll have a total of four parts.

I'll try to put in everything I want to in the 4 parts.

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It was soo beautifull update
Swayam at sharon house n her reaction when she saw her room n gifts was really adorable
Swaron first hug was indeed special.. ❤️ ❤️
That cake part was cute then when sharon said my bf was pretty smart aww after that note n blushing sharon I just imaging both of them while reading this
Ending was sweet
Waiting for next part
Try to update it ASAP..
Loved it...:)

Hey!tum kya ho yaar..! oh god,never expected this one to be so-"out of the world"types!!
loved the following-
'she wondered why they had maintained a physical distance for so long'


about tears-'not even happy one's'

& the most-
"i wanted swayam and sharon's first hug to be special & hopefully i've managed to make it so"



dil khush ho gaya aj to...

thanchieee...for such a wonderful piece..



love tania;)

this was too cute...The way u described the room swayam decorated was nyc and loved the gifts u chose...Well written and pls pm me wen u update next!