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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

@kumari3: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

@ girlz-rule - Thank you so much, dear, you're very sweet! Have a great day! :)

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

That was surely a beautiful story!!!

There was nothing more or less ... everything was perfect and it was a bliss to read it...

Loved it... loved the characterization and the way you had written the emotions and flow of events...

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

^ shrutheAjay, thank you so much for your extremely kind words and for bumping this thread! I'm really happy that you liked it. Take care. :)

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

^ Thank you so much for your interest, KhanAtiyah! Really appreciate it. :) I actually am not planning on adding a Part 3; Chapter 30 in Part 2 is the last chapter of the story. :) Thanks again for your kind words!

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KhanAtiyah

@KhanAtiyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

A very beautiful piece of art , indeed is your ff!

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

^ Thank you so much dear, you are sooo sweet. Big hugs!! :)

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

^ Thank you, sweetie! You are so kind. :) By the way, your username is too cute!

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deepthich

@deepthich

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

aweee... really this is such a beautiful story... i loved it sooo much!!!

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deepthich

@deepthich

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

hey dear... i read ur story FOR THE LOVE OF CHILD

it is such an awesome story... i loved it!!! start me jab tum past ke baare me likhrahhi ti to maine socha... its abt GEET... but when it turned out to be sameera ... i was really angry 😡 😡

but neverthless GEET entered in their lives... n riya... is MAANEET child... 👏

the progress of MAANEET lovestory is also just great... it was fab...

MAAN caring GEET... telling her he is her family... accompanying her to her uncle's place...

demanding her to marry him!!! aweee... i loved all that so much...

n u portrayed this motherhood of GEET... n MAAN love for children so very well... yes it is truly amazing to see MAAN with kids... n GEET happy to get back her child!!!

n the nightmare of GEET in the last made me frightned... i really thought it was true...

ahhh... well!!! i forgot one of my faaavvvourite character in this story... guess whom?? well it is mr. thomas 😆

he is such a cute one!!! he directly came n asked MAAN abt his daughter's hand!!! well i appreciate his guts 👏 😆

that plan of riya to hide in woods was really scary... but again the wonder boy thomas brought her out of that... n alsomprovided her his jacket... hayeee... kitna cute n sweet hai 😳

well... finally MAANEET union was too good... MAANEET got married... n MAAN saying I LOVE YOu again n again... n GEET also said it back!!! their ends a sweet story which was very nice 👏

do u have any other stories as well???