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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was wondering where you have been after chap 29. What an idiot I am, never realized that the FF is over with chap 30. I was still thinking that you are busy or something and havent had the time to post the next update (which apparently is the last one). Today, I remembered that its been ages since you have updated and searched for this FF and found that it is complete. That was too soon, isnt it?

I loved the way you have portrayed the entire story and the characters. Both Geet and Maan are strong in their own ways but still had their demons to fight and insecurities. But both were blessed with an angel who helped them indirectly to rediscover themselves and unearth the hidden treasures of their lives and live again.

Thomas imagining himself and Riya at maaneet's wedding was nothing short of childhood fantasies and Riya consenting to the proposal for a daily dose of cake was innocence personified.

I would have been happier if Maan had proposed Geet properly, but as parents we outgrow the romantic gestures I believe.

I felt the story came to a close too soon.

I had a wonderful time reading For the love of a child and got to know a very good writer who is humble and acknowledging ( and that means a lot to me as a reader).

Have you started to write anything else and would like to recommend? Looking forward.

Uthra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ Thank you SO much, Uthra (pretty name!)! Your comments have always been so thoughtful. I know it takes effort and time out of a reader's day to leave feedback (especially lengthy feedback like you have), and I really appreciate it. I actually haven't started writing anything else, but thanks for asking. :) Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Hey .

Do continue to write…last night I was thinking of your FF…how hooked I was on every part and desperate to know when you were updating…do continue to write…when you are free...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Omg updated almost 3 mths back n i was wondering when u'll update d next chaptr... Update was ammmaaazing n sooo beautiful loved ur ff... Keep writing dear u r an amazing writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww, Frankie, thank you very much. You and your enthusiasm is just so sweet. I will be sure to keep you posted if I write anything else.

chubzy, thank you so much dear! I thought I had PMed everyone who was interested about the posting of Chapter 30, very sorry if I didn't! Many thanks again for your kind and undeserving words. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Hey! I'm quite late in discovering this story but I guess 'better late than never!' I jUst cannot express how much this one story had me glued to the screen! I couldn't, just couldn't put down my phone! This is probably the only story which I read in this speed, just so that I could get to the next chapter. 😃 I have to say, even being so late in reading this and not being a part of the journey of this story when it was being written, I'll still miss it! I'll miss reading Maan's subtle hints he dropped for Geet to convey his heart's feelings, I'll miss Geet's insecurities and finally her determination to not lose the love of her life, I'll miss Riya and her cute talks, and most importantly, I'll miss Thomas trying to woo his lady love! To think that they're just six! 😆

This is one story which gave me jitters while I read it. I could actually feel every emotion in there which any of the characters felt. I bow down to you for penning it down in such a beautiful way! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ Thank you beyond words, dear! I don't even know how to tell you how much your comment means to me -- such lengthy, generous, and undeserving feedback, wow. :) Like I mentioned earlier, I started the story over a year ago and finished it up about three months ago, and it is just such a sweet surprise that you stumbled upon it. Many thanks again! Happy holidays to you and your family. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ I am sort of in a disagreement with something you said in reply to my comment. For this story - and for you - this comment isn't 'undeserving'! It's actually a very, very little portion of what you deserve! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ Aww, thank you so much dear! Ahhh. Big hugs!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi

Thank you so very much for completing it, I had been following this story and felt sad when the updates became far apart...there was a time when I felt that you might have abandoned it altogether.

It was a pleasure reading the story and am going to take a print of it so that it stays with me for ever.

Regards
Annie

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