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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awesome story ..how a child bond her parents to life partners loved it its amazing

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Loved it totally. Such a nice story.
:-). U are a brilliant writter.

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Nivedithachand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awesome ff !! Loved it to the core !!! No words to say how much beautiful it is !!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

wow a truly beautiful ending

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

read the whole story in a go... i was so hooked to it that taking a break in between was also difficult... i just loved the story... though i have read many stories in this forum but this one was entirely different...

i loved the special element riya included with maaneet her a lot... her bond with maan in the initial parts was just lovely and late when geet enters her life the changes which u shown in her was just fab! her determination to make her parents marry was just praise worthy... and her partner in crime thomas... just love their both talks!!!

loved geets character in here ... though she is hurt but still she is strong and loving ... when geet was trying to steal something i never ever imagined the situation will go like this... i loved her adamant nature when she wanted to give back money to maan and later pay for her stay at km... she didnt even once tried to take riya from maan even for a sec ... just awesome geet over here...

maan was just lovable in the initial parts... his love care for riya made my heart swell with happiness... his reading story books o riya and playing tea parties with her was just awesome... riya was so attached to him that even being a shy gal she knocked off poor thomas who wanted to marry her!!!! later when geet came in pic his insecurities with regard to diya was just wonderfully portrayed...

later his bond with geet and a bit of his dominating nature over her, like refusing her to travel by bus, accompanying her to her uncles, decision to marry was just showing how much he loves and cares for her...

wonderful ff... all the best for ur future works

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

@ freya123 - Thank you very much! Your icon is adorable, by the way.

@ watergirl68in - Aww, Annie, thank you so much! Wow, that means a lot to me and I really appreciate it. I remember your supportive comments from earlier in the story, too -- many thanks. Yes, sorry for the delayed updates! So happy you finished it!

@ --Fairy-- - Many thanks, dear! You are amazing. :)

@ Ubiquitos - Ahh, you are too kind, thank you so very much. Very happy you liked it. :)

@ Nivedithachand - Wow, thank you, thank you, thank you! What sweet words. :)

@ flowers4u - Thank you, dear, so glad you thought so!

@ -lakshmi- - Oh my goodness, thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a sweet and lengthy comment. You are so thoughtful and kind to have gone through each character/point of the story! Wow. Thanks again and I'm so happy you liked it.

Edited by kumari3 - 12 years ago

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Serenity_me

@Serenity_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

u know , i was eagerly waiting for u to continue this ff. n now suddenly i got to know from a fnd that u hv finished this ff n i was like----- reallyyy😲 but when. i thought she had stopped writing this ff. but iam really glad that finally u got time n finishd this ff. this is one of my favorite ff , that i hv read so far. loved d plot of this ff and maneet were really amazing, different from other stories and riya and thomas were reallyyy adorable . iam already in love with riya n thomas pair😆. hope to see their romance 😆, if u r planning a sequel of this ff😃

thanks for this wonderful ff.🤗

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

^ Thank you very much, dear! You are so very sweet! So sorry about that -- the first thread that I was using to post chapters got locked, so I opened a new one (this thread) to complete the story. :) I'm so happy that you liked it and that you enjoyed little Riya and Thomas, too! Best wishes. <3 🤗

Edited by kumari3 - 12 years ago

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Cathy25

@Cathy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

i absolutely loved your ff and your style of writing. you had a very interesting plot going on there. the 'part 1' of your story had me wondering what exactly is the storyline, before you decided to spill it all.
also, i loved loved loved riya... i so identify with the shy girl that you had initially presented her to be. and thomas and riya's stories! aww how adorable.
I'm very glad I came across this ff. I had a great time reading this story. *thumbs up*

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

^ Thank you very much, Ben25! Your comment made me so happy. :) I'm really glad that you liked the story (including Thomas and Riya), and that you found shy Riya identifiable. :) Have a wonderful week!

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