SwaRon OS :Not just another day

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

loved your concluding line " They dance ...Giving the perfect day... "a perfect ending "...It was an eventful day ...Not just another day ... " you justified your tittle..

adoring the swaron confession in-front of the gang...and also girl gang plotting a plan to find out the truth was hilarious.

thanks for the PM.

write something new soon.

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

MIND BLASTING...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

omg...dat was so romantic yaar...superb 1...sharon blushin so much...aww...loved it😊😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: swaronland
amazing part👏 i didn't feel it was long😳 bcoz there was flow in ur writing 😃 i didn't realize when it come end😆
all girls teasing sharon & she gave lame excuses😆
loved simmi's plan😎
ending was superb👏
loved swaron dance❤️
thanks for pm

thanx for this nice comment ...m glad u liked it ...swaron dance part is my fav too 😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Sorry for commenting soo late!

Thanks for sucha long update!!
It was awesomee!! 👍🏼
sharon blushing soo sweetly! 😳
and the convo's between them was super adorablee! 😃
i really lykd that part wen sharon thought of announcing them as a couple and taani and rinni fainted...lol! 😆😆
The ending was lovely..their dance! 😊
Keep writing more! 😃

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Cute... Sharon blushing hard 👍🏼

And Swayam asking her for dance in such a cute manner...☺️

Awesome...⭐️

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this!
☺️

Edited by mrash - 13 years ago

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Amruta

@.CoffeeStains.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Hey it was so beautifuulll...👏 🤗

So Romantic...so simple yet beautiful nothing overdone...😳

N a perfect ending...SwaRon dancing on pehla nasha n swayam's cheesy lines just made it perfect...had tears in my eyes while read the end...its just so beautiful to see Swaron all happy...😳

n pehla nasha is d perfect song for Swaron...😳

Sumtimes i feel pehla nasha is just made for our Swaron...😊

I really hope CV's show us sumthng lyk dis..🤔

U've penned it beautifully...😊

Keep up d good work...😃

Keep writing on SwaRon n do pm me d next time wenever u vil wite on SwaRon...I hav sent u a buddy req do add me...😊

P.S: May i know ur good name...??

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gayatri agarwal

@-swaron-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

love it
I like. simmi's plan
Sharon blushing aweee
os ending in Sharon's room perfect
awesome os

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream
It was Just amazing... Sharon taking care of Swayam.. So sweet !! She was so lost in Swayam that any question on him put by gang was answered by her...

Lovely OS... Loved every bit of it

thanx 😊 ..m glad that u liked it ...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: marauder
This was such an pleasing OS. It really lightened up my mood. Taang khichai of Sharon by the girls and later by the gang was just hillarious and so were her so many of her excuses. But the best bit was how without meaning Sharon kept on spilling her own secret like when Swayam slept and all. This OS was really a fun read. You have really some awesome skills. Do write mor and don't forget to PM me.

thanx a lot for this nice comment ... 😊