SwaRon OS :Not just another day - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

81

Views

15.6k

Users

43

Likes

212

Frequent Posters

_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Sorry for commenting soo late!

Thanks for sucha long update!!
It was awesomee!! 👍🏼
sharon blushing soo sweetly! 😳
and the convo's between them was super adorablee! 😃
i really lykd that part wen sharon thought of announcing them as a couple and taani and rinni fainted...lol! 😆😆
The ending was lovely..their dance! 😊
Keep writing more! 😃

hey surbhi ... thanx for this cute comment...😊😊😊
_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mrash

Cute... Sharon blushing hard 👍🏼


And Swayam asking her for dance in such a cute manner...☺️

Awesome...⭐️


❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this!
☺️


thanx... 😊😃😛
_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: amruTa_SWaRon

Hey it was so beautifuulll...👏 🤗

So Romantic...so simple yet beautiful nothing overdone...😳
N a perfect ending...SwaRon dancing on pehla nasha n swayam's cheesy lines just made it perfect...had tears in my eyes while read the end...its just so beautiful to see Swaron all happy...😳
n pehla nasha is d perfect song for Swaron...😳
Sumtimes i feel pehla nasha is just made for our Swaron...😊
I really hope CV's show us sumthng lyk dis..🤔
U've penned it beautifully...😊
Keep up d good work...😃
Keep writing on SwaRon n do pm me d next time wenever u vil wite on SwaRon...I hav sent u a buddy req do add me...😊

P.S: May i know ur good name...??

thanx amruta...for this sweet comment ...m glad u liked this post ... 😊😊😊
my name is deepika 😊 ...
_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: honeyangel

An Awesome OS LOVED each and every part.. Specially the last part of dance 😳 lovely ❤️

thanx a lot 😊😊😊
sky_fighter thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#65
great OS
the beginning
Sharon Blushing hahaha
i like taani for the sole reason that she calls Sharon BHABI and that too in such a cute way
imagining if the CV's would give us such a SwaRon scene is just a dream now
but u did a great job writing it
keep it up
nature2 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#66
loved d blushing sharon soo much nd ofcourse teasing swayam😳
Satluvsd3 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#67
i know i am very late...as i told u..i read!!😉
deeps di!!
super awesome OS!!!
from the very title it made me attract towards it!!...
this OS was completely Swaron-ish with lots of awww's n super entertaining moments!!
the 1st part ..it was random but the random-ness did include the SwaRon-ness!!😳
oh!!gosh!HOW MANY TIMES did sharon blsuh!!
sometimes at the thought of HIM sometimes even listening his name sometimes her ringtone!!😳😆
and girls doubting !!😆n part 2 was amazing!!
i will start from the FLASHBACK!!😳
wooww it was super nice!
in the morning when he recieved sharon's call it reminded me of the monsoon special ka scene awww 😳

Swayam: me tumhari dream dekh raha hu ..mat jagao na
awww 😳
and filled with lots of teasing by swayam! 😆
Sharon(smiling nervously ): hey girls...u know na ...how stupid these boys are...Rey and me ...we had a bet about a new dance form ...the winner can give a dare to the other one ...he won ... he gave dare to put some idiotic ring tone for Swayam on my phone...sooo
hahahahahahahah loved her reply 😆😆😆
gosh!!the girls ask so many questions!!!!!! 😆 n doubt a lot!!especially simmi!!
the epic moment when simmi calls thru swayam's phone on sharon's!! 🤣
and SwaRon confused n blushing...
everybody discussing...objecting the song 😆 and then finally they confess about their relationship to the gang!! yipeee

Swayam: (slowly) I need ur exclusive time ...I want to have you all to myself (smiling)❤️
awww 😳
and then Sharon's punishment which lead to a beautiful SwaRon dance 😳
and the way he asked her for a dance!!OMG!loved the description!
and they way you described the lyrics with the movements!!!❤️
this OS WAS AGAIN COMPLETELY SwaRon-licious! 😳great job di!!! KEEP WRITING!!



Edited by Satluvsd3 - 13 years ago
_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

i know i am very late...as i told u..i read!!😉
deeps di!!
super awesome OS!!!
from the very title it made me attract towards it!!...
this OS was completely Swaron-ish with lots of awww's n super entertaining moments!!
the 1st part ..it was random but the random-ness did include the SwaRon-ness!!😳
oh!!gosh!HOW MANY TIMES did sharon blsuh!!
sometimes at the thought of HIM sometimes even listening his name sometimes her ringtone!!😳😆
and girls doubting !!😆n part 2 was amazing!!
i will start from the FLASHBACK!!😳
wooww it was super nice!
in the morning when he recieved sharon's call it reminded me of the monsoon special ka scene awww 😳

Swayam: me tumhari dream dekh raha hu ..mat jagao na
awww 😳
and filled with lots of teasing by swayam! 😆
Sharon(smiling nervously ): hey girls...u know na ...how stupid these boys are...Rey and me ...we had a bet about a new dance form ...the winner can give a dare to the other one ...he won ... he gave dare to put some idiotic ring tone for Swayam on my phone...sooo
hahahahahahahah loved her reply 😆😆😆
gosh!!the girls ask so many questions!!!!!! 😆 n doubt a lot!!especially simmi!!
the epic moment when simmi calls thru swayam's phone on sharon's!! 🤣
and SwaRon confused n blushing...
everybody discussing...objecting the song 😆 and then finally they confess about their relationship to the gang!! yipeee

Swayam: (slowly) I need ur exclusive time ...I want to have you all to myself (smiling)❤️
awww 😳
and then Sharon's punishment which lead to a beautiful SwaRon dance 😳
and the way he asked her for a dance!!OMG!loved the description!
and they way you described the lyrics with the movements!!!❤️
this OS WAS AGAIN COMPLETELY SwaRon-licious! 😳great job di!!! KEEP WRITING!!





OH GOD...sats ...m speechless ...after reading ur comment ...such a sweet comment yar ...one of the best comments i hv got till now...the way u analyzed my OS...m really glad u liked it ...m smiling like an idiot ...reading ur comment ...luv u swthrt🤗
Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago
Destiny_015 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Hahahahaha...swaron Kya mast pakde gaye...swaron kitna blush karti rehti...aur kare bhi kyun na...its Swayam afterall😳..Luvd how d girls wre tryin to gt d truth out of d bag...😆swaron's ni8 tok ws nyc..Kya plan banaya girls ne...gr8...Luvd rey's dialogue "kisi ka khayal rakha ja rha h"...d way Swayam requested sharon fr a dance ws sooo Swayamish...😳 swaron dance ws beautiful...gr8 wrk..keep it up.👍🏼

Anonymous-- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Wow amazing amazing OS! The SwaRon phone convo n last scene was too romantic! I loved how Sharon was blushing in front of the girlss..Loved it..Im glad u used Neha,Bharat n Rinni's behaviour from.the show..it made it funnier :)

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 4 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".