SwaRon OS :Not just another day

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tejukor
Hey...hi...
first of all thanks for the pm. and nw talking about ur os it was awsome ...i just loved it.👏i was enjoying each n evry expression of swaron...☺️.
and that pehla nasha ring tone n sharon turned in red was so perfect...well written...but it is so so short.plz next time thoda bada likhna...plz...am waiting for next part plz update it asap...

thanx a lot ... m glad u liked it ...

i have updated the 2nd part ... this time ...badawala post ...kuch jyada hi lamba he..hehe...hope u ll like it ...😊😊
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Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

amazing part👏 i didn't feel it was long😳 bcoz there was flow in ur writing 😃 i didn't realize when it come end😆

all girls teasing sharon & she gave lame excuses😆

loved simmi's plan😎

ending was superb👏

loved swaron dance❤️

thanks for pm

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

It was Just amazing... Sharon taking care of Swayam.. So sweet !! She was so lost in Swayam that any question on him put by gang was answered by her...

Lovely OS... Loved every bit of it

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

This was such an pleasing OS. It really lightened up my mood. Taang khichai of Sharon by the girls and later by the gang was just hillarious and so were her so many of her excuses. But the best bit was how without meaning Sharon kept on spilling her own secret like when Swayam slept and all. This OS was really a fun read. You have really some awesome skills. Do write mor and don't forget to PM me.

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

And yeah I forget to mention. Don't worry about longer updates. I would say longer the update more better it gets.

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

WOW...it was so LONG and Wonderful...kash baakike writers tumse kuch sikle deep..humhe aise bade bade update mil jayenge😆

coming to the content of the update...

Loved the way sharon was blushing at the thoughts of Swayam😛

Girls were hilarious...and the questions that they shot to sharon were phew...

Smmi is smarter than sharon😆 SwaRon ki pole khole di😛

Loved the way sharon was confident enough of swayam knowing to handle the situations well...

and finally the way swayam said "i want ur exclusive time" was awieee😳

and then the evening😳

the Start where swayam was keeping his head in sharon's lap and kissing her palms was beautifully written..loved it😳

Sharon wanting Swayam to ask her for Dance and the way Swayam did that was nice...

than the Dance with Pehla Nasha was Cherry on the Top and Surely "The Prefect Ending" for the day...

Lovely OS...

Thanks for the pm...

PS: i wish we get atleast 0000000000.01 % of something like this in the show *sigh*

PPS:long update ke liye long comment banta hai😛

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hey deeps ..😊
sry for being late..
Os is perfect😃
spsl wo phon wala part i just loved it & sharon blush😉 all just amazing 👏
thanx for PM😊

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Dips this update of urs makes me wish ki kaash teh CVs culd even muster up to an outline of how u hav written this part...u fulfilled the dream and desire of so many Swaronians as to how their actual confession shuld b in front of their friends and not for a moment I thought ke this was not happening in front of me...Sharon and her classic blushes, Swayam and his naughty dialogues to her, the sweet friends who first discover there is sumthing fishy and then are so happy to see the two of them together and finally sone pe suhaaga the dance and the romantic way Swayam asks her...a couple immersed in luv for each other...thatz how we want to c our SwaRon and thatz how u gav it to us...thank u and write more!!!!

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Loved this update. Such a pleasure read to see Sharon blushing and Swayam being happy knowing he is the reason behind it. Poor Sharon was trying her best to avoid the questions from the girls but in vain, i loved her imagination, to how the girls will react if she is going to tell them about her relationship with Swayam. Simmi is one smart gal, loved the idea the gang comes up with. I couldn't stop but think if we could see awesome cute moments like this in D3. Loved the ending the most, its perfect how you show them dancing on Pehla Nasha song.

I loved it for being one long read, so no worries in thinking it was big.