SwaRon OS :Not just another day - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
very cute part
sharon blushing hard😳😆
loved it pls pm me next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
it was a cute one..
your writing skills are really good..loved the fact that you gave importance to *pehla nasha*...and also sharon going all blush with her hot blood rushing up her cheeks was really cute..
update the next part soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Start...loved how u co-joined the last OS with this one...
Loved Blushing sharon😳
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOL, Poor Sharon getting bombarded with so many questions from the girl but she can't help blushing at the mere thought of Swayam !! I can't believe her Pehla Nasha ringtone rang in front of everyone !!! Can't wait for the next update...I'm sure it's going to be real interesting !! Do PM me when you update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...This is the 2nd and last part of this OS...hope you all like it ...and thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging ...😊😊😊


Within few seconds ...another call ..this time caller "SWAYAM"

And her ring tone ..pehla nasha ...pehla khumar... she is again turning red ...😳

All the faces in front of her are looking at her with question mark in their expressions' 😲😲😲

Sharon (takes the call): hey ...(smiling)

Swayam :hey Sharon ..sorry m late ...I was stuck in some important work 'sorry for making you wait for so long ...it was really imp ...

Sharon :its ok .. I know ..u wont make me wait with out enough reason ...

Swayum : aww...that's like my Sharon .. thanx for understanding .. I will be there in 20 mins ... Luv u ' ❤️

His words are making her red again ...her face has become red like a tomato ...☺️

During the call ..other girls talking to each other '

Simmi :Girls...correct me if m wrong ... did I hear ...different ring tone on Sharon phone for swayam ...when Rey called it was her usual one ...

Neha :Neha thinking same to same ...

Vish : I think there is something fishy ...and why is she blushing so much ...lost in thoughts ?

Rinni :umm..so wat is the problem ringtone or blushing...??😕

Simmi:Rinni ...just keep quite .. (to others) ...shar is behaving very different these days 'soft , caring .. no tantrums ...no fights...no attitude ...

Meanwhile Sharon finishes the call with swayam ...but still recalling his words ..thats like my Sharon 'luv u '.😳😊

Simmi:look at her ..she is still lost ...something is happening ...we need to find out...

And all of them discuss something ...

Vish :hey neha..where is this swayam yar ...we have to rehearse...Wo late kyu he ...he has become so irresponsible lately

Sharon(talking to herself) :wo kal kafi late soya tha na ...subah utha bhi late ...

Neha :kya kaha Sharon ?how u know ..swayam late soya ...late utha ...

Sharon :umm ...not able to gather any answer 'looking at them helplessly

Simmi:tell na shar ?tum kaise janti ho ..swayam kab soya ?

Sharon(in her mind): recalling last night phone convo...

Flashback(last night):

Swayum : princess 'lets sleep now '...its quite late...

Sharon:umm...aur thodi der baat karo na ...I never get your exclusive time ...when I can have you all to myself (bites her tongue)...'OMG'...mene kya bola ..

Swayum (smiling at her innocence) : of course princess...we can talk ...jab tak tum chaho.. m all urs...n u r mine ...

Sharon: smiling 'blushing hard😳

Swayum: I wish me abhi tumhare paas hota.. ...tumhe blush karte huye dekh pata... 'wo bhi mere liye '😊😊

Sharon: shocked ...tumhe kaise pata ... r u here ..in my room?😲

Swayum: no... 'but I know u ' ...I can tell about your each n every reaction

Sharon:swayam..

Swayum: haan...

Sharon: thanx for knowing me so well...knowing me more than myself...luv u ...

Swayum: luv u too princess ...u hv made my life so beautiful ...

And they spoke about all those sweet nothings till late night'😊😊😊

Morning:

Sharon woke up...checked time ...its 8 am...they were talking on phone till late night ..

Sharon: swayam ..uth gya hoga ? uth gaya hota toh ek call toh jarur karta ...satyad abhi tak so raha he...nhi uthega toh college ke liye late ho jaega ...'me utha deti hu'..

CALLS...

Swayam(still sleeping): opens one eye ...checks the caller name... 'its his princess'

Answers phone.. eyes still closed...a cute smile on face ..

Swayam:hey princess( sleepy tone)

Sharon:tum abhi tak so rahe ho ...utho na ..College nhi jana

Swayam:nind aa rahi he ...tumne raat ko sone hi nehi diya (teasing)

Sharon: (recalls last night conversation)'blushing...utho na swayum... late ho jaoge

Swayam: me tumhari dream dekh raha hu ..mat jagao na

Sharon: mujhe real me dekh lena ...ab utho

Swayam: baby thodi der aur ...plzzz ..

Sharon:tumhe real Sharon nhi pasand ?bas dream sharon pasand he ??

Swayam: meri dream Sharon mujhe kuch bhi karne se nehi rokti ...abhi usne mujhe cheeks pe kiss kiya (teasing tone)

Sharon: kiss ...(thinks about all those moments of almost kiss ...but it didn't happened in reality till now')😳

Sharon: Acha thik he ... so jao ... lecture miss karo...(angry tone)

Swayum:aaj humari pehli class free he...me tab tak aa jaunga..

Sharon ..thik he ..par tab tak me akeli kya karungi(sad)

Swayam (naughty) mujhe miss karna 😊

Sharon: blushing ☺️

Swayam: 'I love u baby ' 😊

Sharon : smiling ...luv u tooo ...ohk bye...jaldi aana ..i ll miss u..

Sharon opens her eyes'... all of them are sitting in circle around her ..looking at her ...

Simmi: shar ..u don't consider us friends...is liye apne secrets nhi bata rahi..(sad face)

Sharon :no sim ...aisa nhi he '😲

Sim:fir batao 'swayam ke naam se itna blush kyu kar rahi ho..uske liye itna romantic special ring tone'

Sharon: shocked...oh no ...(in her mind) that stupid ring tone n this stupid blush ..😡

Sim: still looking at her


Sharon:umm ...i don't know girls ..tum log kaise react karoge ...me aur swayam...we have decided to give a chance to our feelings for each other...

We are in relationship since charity event' .

All shocked '..

All the girls staring at Sharon' sharon is waiting for their reaction'

Tanni and Rinni fainted... other girls are still in shock ...

Suddenly she came out from her thoughts...

Oh No...no...no ...no ...I cant reveal this to these poor girls now...They wont be able to handle the fact that me and swayam are finally together now... It will be big shock for them ...better I will leave this tough job to HIM...he can handle them better ...But I need to handle this situation now'


Sim:Hey babe...we are asking something...waiting for your answer...

Neha:Answer us Sharon...

Sharon(smiling nervously ): hey girls...u know na ...how stupid these boys are...Rey and me ...we had a bet about a new dance form ...the winner can give a dare to the other one ...he won ... he gave dare to put some idiotic ring tone for Swayam on my phone...sooo .(in her mind...'oh gosh'...the story I just cooked for them sounds so lame...hope they wont question it ...as I don't have any other answer)😕

Sim:Ohh ...like that ..ya u r right 'boys are so stupid'😃😉😆

Rinni :aww... .thats such a cute dare (n all girls glared at her)

Sharon:Lets go to canteen girls ...'I am hungry '

All:Ya ..lets go ... all the guys will be there ...

Sharon (in mind): thank god ..they didn't question further ' bach gayi '😉😊

And she starts leaving the RH...all girls follow her... but

Simmi checked if Sharon is out of RH and she told other girls to stay back...

Sim:Girl..there is something wrong ...Sharon is hiding something

Neha:But how to find out ?

Vish: think girls.. think...🤔

Tanni :socho ..socho ..🤔

Sim: Bingo ..i have an idea ...(she explains her plan to all of them)😈

And they leave for canteen' all the boys are in canteen .. having fun ...girls joined them...

Guys:hey girls...😃😃😃

Girls:hey boys...😊😊😊

Rinni:So all are here...

Simmi:No Rinni... swayam is not here ...n looks towards Sharon...

Sharon: umm..he will be here ...in some time...

Bharath:tujhe kaise pata ki wo kab aayega...?

Amar:Tumne baat ki thi kya usse ..wo toh subah se phone hi nehi utha raha ...😕

Sharon:No ..no I thought...1st lecture was free...so he will be here for 2nd lecture'...wo waise bhi classes miss nehi karta na...

Swayam enters...

Sharon :takes a sigh of relief (finally he is here.. he will take care)

Swayam:Hey guys... 'sorry m late'

Rey :Ya...we can see that...waise tu late kyu he?

Swa: wo raat ko late soya tha... (Looking at Sharon...smiling naughtily)😉😊

Sharon: glared him 😡'(in mind...Mr Swayam Sekhawat...u don't have any idea...ur smile can lead to another 100 questions')

Swa(in mind): why ...wat happened?

Yes ...they are talking through eyes'...(just like the day before face off scene )

Rey : hey guys ...hum sab yahan he... Points towards the gang...

Swayam n sharon... 'back in sense'

Rey:late kyu soya ?kya kar raha tha ? girl friend?? (teasing)😉

Swayam: Haan ...girl friend ...tujhe kyu batau ...m hungry ..lets order..

Sharon:I already ordered sandwich and orange juice for u...(wanted to tell only to swayam..but it was loud enough for the whole gang')

Rey :You already ordered for him ... Good ...good ...kisi ka khayal rakha ja raha he'

Sharon:Shut up Rey ...He is my asst...khaega nehi toh kaam kaise karega ...hume report ready karna he... Lots of work ..u know...(in mind...OMG ...that sounds so stupid)

Swayam :(smiling at her excuse )

Rey :ya ya ...'I understand'...(winks at Sharon...)..tanni kuch sikho ...aise khayal rakhna chahiye ...tum meri asst. ho...

Tanni:par Sharon bha..(stops) ...toh bhai ka khayal rakh rahi he ...jo asst he...aap ko mere liye order karna chahiye tha' (smiles)

Simmi manages to get a seat near swaron and quickly takes swayam mobile(swaron are busy looking at each other ...didn't notice)

Simmi calls Sharon from swayam 's cell...and...

Pehla nasha...pehla khumar ...

The romantic song catches the whole gangs attention...

Amar :Kiska cell baj laha he?

Bharath:ye kya bakwas gana laga rakha he...romance wala ...

Girls:WOW...pehla nasha ...no doubt ..its special ring tone for someone special..

Rey :ye toh Sharon ka cell baj raha he...he takes the phone...caller ..SWAYAM(all are looking at swaron )

Swayam: checks his phone ...its not there ..

Sharon :all red ...embarrassed ☺️

Rey: so shar ..ye special ringtone he..only for swayam' ??😉

Rinni:Sharon ne toh bola ki tumne use ye ringtone rakhne ke liye challenge diya tha' 😕😕

Rey:confused'😕...mene kab ??

Sharon(trying to manage the situation) : guys ..wo ...ye 'ringtone ...(not getting good enough excuse)

Rey :calls Sharon..

Sharon's ringtone is different this time..

The whole gang is looking at her ... she looks at swayam ...help...

Swayam: (calmly)...lets tell them...if you are ok with it..

Sharo: ya ...I cant answer their questions any more.. lets tell them..

Swayam:guys ...hum dono ek saath he... 'we are together '

Gang:matlab?😕

Sharon: we are in a relationship...

Simmi :yipeee ...I knew it ...i knew it (all girls start dancing)

Swayam :confused...inhe kya hua...😕

Sharon:u don't have any idea...subah se kya ho raha he

Nickey : (to swayam )...saale tune bataya nehi..

Amar & bharath:hume bhi nehi bola tune'

Rey :smiling(he knew about the whole thing)'😃😉

Guys starts hitting swayam (playfully)...girls hug Sharon'...heyy mission SWARON successful...(shouting)

SWARON:kya ..mission?

Sim..shar hume RH me hi pata chal gaya tha ki tum kuch chupa rahi ho ..is liye ye sab kuch karna pada'😉😊😃

Rey :Hey guys ...this calls for a party ...to the cutest couple of St Louis...tonight at Hard-rock(club name)

Swayam:hey guys ..thanks..par aaj nehi ..kal ...aaj kuch kaam he...

Sharon :looks at him...

Swayam: (slowly) I need ur exclusive time ...I want to have you all to myself (smiling)❤️

Sharon:blushing (LLHH)😳

Rey :Ahem ahem..back to earth guys..😉

Swayam:so kal party pakka'.😊

Gang :partyyy '.🥳🥳

Evening :

Sharon's room ...Sharon is sitting near her bed ..swayam is resting his head on her lap...holding her hand...kissing her palms..

Swayam:Finally ...I can hold your hand in college '😊

Sharon:ya ..u can do that ..(Smiling)😊

Suddenly ..she pushed him ...he sits near her ...(shocked)

Swa:wat ?😕

Shar:aaj ..tumhari wajah se girls ne mujhe itna tease kiya...u deserve punishment for this...

Swa:mene kya kiya...waise subah hua kya tha?

Shar: looks down...wo ...me ..tumhare bare me soch rahi thi ...

Sway:aur ?(smiling)

Shar:aur un sab ne mujhe blush karte huye dekh liya (blushing)☺️

Swayam:kaise blush kar rahi thi '??

Sharon:looks up...confused'

Sway: jaise abhi blush kar rahi ho ...waise kar rahi thi??'(teasing)..tumhare cheeks abhi bhi pink ho rahe he( proud of the fact that he is the reason behind her pink cheeks)😎

Sharon..(acting as if angry) ' whatever'...now ...u will do something special for me...ur punishment

Swayam: special ...as in ?(smiling)

Sharon:ask me for a dance

Swayam:why ...cant u ask for a dance ?

Sharon:tum puchoge ya me jau😡 (poor Sharon ...bhul gayi ke uska khud ka ghar he)

Swayam :aree baba...ruko... 'puchta hu '

Swayam goes on his knees...stretching his hand towards her ...

Hey princess ...dance was the 1st thing which got us together . ...The chemistry and connection we share now..is the contribution of dance to our relationship...when the strands of your hair ..disturb you ...and I run my hands in your hair to caress them...it feels so good...when u are in my arms...close to my heart ...my heart starts running in unusual pace ...when I hold your hand for dance ...our fingers intervene...your small palm fit into my big ones so perfectly ...as they are designed to be together ...destined to be together ... ur head near my chest ...listening to the love song my heart sings for u...ur heart beats with mine ...creating a heavenly melody ...when you are with me ... it feels so perfect as if ..WE ARE MEANT TO BE '

Sooo...just to make this moment more special ...as its already special ...to have me and you in it ... May I have the pleasure of having this dance with you ?


Sharon:smiling ...gives her hand

Swayam,:takes both her hands... 'kiss them'

And they dance '.

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

he holds her waist ..she keeps her hands around his neck ...

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

She rests her head on his chest ...she can hear his heartbeats ...which is chanting her name... ...

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar '

He kisses her forehead and holds her protectively ...telling the world ...she belongs to me ... ❤️


They dance ...Giving the perfect day... "a perfect ending "...It was an eventful day ...Not just another day ... 😊😊😊


hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment.. i will wait for your comments and feedback

sorry ...this part became very long ...

plz add me to your buddy list ...

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
i loved it...loved it how portrayed sharon's excitement...the girls lil taang kheechaayi...i want to see sharon in this avtaar...cvs cannot miss on this...
loved this update...
sry that was for first update...didnt check you laready updated second part...let me read...excited
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Awesome update and nice ending
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛wooow...trust me dis os ws really amazing👏...u hav given a complete episode thru very simple words..i sincerely vsh if dis ws shown in d3 coz dis is spl nd cute...keep writing stuffs lyk dis...😃
i loved d blushing sharon soo much nd ofcourse teasing swayam😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome update...the lines vch you gave wre too too good...

that i want to give all myself to you...aaye haye...its awsome...loved how majnu boy is giving the majnu lines...blushing sharon is uber cute...

and the dance part is awsome...sharon forgetting that she is at her own house...hehehe...nice one ...do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a sweet update, while reading this i had this sudden thought that when we will get to see at least 0.01% of the same on the show 😳Sharon knows that Swayam can handle the situation if their bunch of friends get to know about their relationship. But Sharon's imagination was funny when the girls faint after hearing the same. The gang's way of letting Sharon confess their relationship was smart😎 And her excuses as well😆. The last bit was amazing, specially the mention of her small palm resting in his big ones, i loved it😳 .

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