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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

superb update

it sh0w h0w much maan I0ved her and h0w geet was fighting with her 0wn feeIings

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

ossum dear
loved the love between them dear
waiting for there consummation dear

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

That was too awesum...
Their relation s progressing and geet's feelings r increasing..
but she dont want to realize it..
their first kiss was so cute..

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Beautiful update.

Loved the care n concern which Maan shows to

Geet.

Maan making the dituation less awkward.

Maan fed up of asking to stop feeding Jaanvi.

Lol. That part was cute.

Jaanvi bday. Geet was not sad like earlier.

She too feels for Maan. Hope she realises soon.

First kiss was awesome.

I liked u included the present.

Pls dont get demotivated. We are all here for u.

Dont end this ff so fast. I Like it very much.

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meettu

@meettu

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Loved the update i read it twice
great update
loved the way both r taking care of each other
nd becumg comfortable wid each other nd jaanu ne indirectly maaneet ko kiss karva diya
lolxzzz
nd jaanu becumg naughty nd making maaneet blush
yaar tooo good
nd everyone r hsppy
update next soon

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NH1971

@NH1971

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome loved it thanks alot

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

hey nice to see you back with this ff

it was superb part

liked the way maan cared for geet

jaanu was eye candy...

sweet innocent and cry baby...

rahul repenting .. good

the dance and the feelings were wow

loved the update a lot

do cont soon plz

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

wow lovely lovable update didi.. why i said lovable, te way my maaneet cuming close and realizing they feelings and talking freely as they both belongs to eachother was lovely.. they heart started to crave for eachother but still som hesitations are there geet cum out of ur wall.. naughty jaanu wont leave her maa till which age ? and she is proving she is my maan ka beti, helping his dada to kiss his maa, . see didi jaanu is helping 2 years kid is helping my maaneet to kiss but u didi making them to drink lots of water.. i love te way geet massaged my maan's legs.. i love te update so much didi.. precap sounds lovely i want it didi

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

di frist of all dont make end of your work because of other ur a fantasic writer ur evrry story has some deep meaning hidden inside ur making socially awaere the teens through ur work wat is gud or bad.this is nt only my request but also ur loyal readers to continue ur work with same antogiasum we all love u 😃😃😃😃😃

Now back to d part it was fabulous ❤️ 👍🏼 maneet r building dare relation slowly n stadily they r climbind each step with hidden love, respect towards each other.n naughty princess janvi had big hand in proceedind dare relationship.

AND DI WAITING FOR UR ALL OTHER WORK ALSO GEETANJALI,INSANE LOVER,U ME AUR..? AND STRANGLY IN LOVE

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