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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update

maan helping rahul to make him win without his knowledge only for DC

maaneet helping pari come out of her shell...both r longing 4 each other...update soon di


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part

rahulk in guilt... but jaanu is angry ...

maaneet moments cool

loved the part

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...maan loves his dc's family...pls update next chap soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx 4 d updat dear..now waitng 4 d hnymn n abhi 2 born n also waitng 4 d presnt,when geet wil b back frm hospital..do continue soon..plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 39
nice part...
this Rahul wasted his whole life and troubled the Khuranas too...
now will he get back his past life...
stupid...
Maan Geet scene was so lovely...
such a transition...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooowww!!!!
u make me awestruck with each one of ur stry akka!!!
i really really go mad reading t!!!!
jus completed t n am desperatly waiting fr an update ..
i kno ds s so soon ystrdy oly u gv us an update but then tooo am
suprb stry n a nice plot...
ur such a versatile writer...
the way u carry out past n present s tooo gud!!!
awww ill go on blabberng nw lemme stop here n giv othr praises n upcoming updates 👏 👏 👏
👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think hm fr pinky n adi rather dan maan n geet...

awesome n beautiful updates...

loved it very much...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃
PART 40

Maaneet,dadi,pinky,adi,vicky priya n jaanu..all were settled in their places in their private jet.it was huge with several rooms which had all facilities...priya n jaanvi were so happy to travel .the plane took off n when it was flying flat,.the kids were running around the plane n making the airhostess to take the tour inside the plane..they asked them for choclates n play items,which they gave them with the smile..vicky saw the two pairs ..adi pinky n maneet..both were quiet..he thought its better to join the kids itself..he wont get bored..dadi was taking rest as these days made her depressed..when all are around she thought to take rest..

Vicky went to the kids n sat with them..they too enjoyed playing annoying n irritating him..vicky turned another kid with them..he then told them stories n helped them to make buildings with blocks teaching rhymes n etc..

Maan was watching pinky,who was looking the clouds passing by..she never talked to anyone..her habit has not changed..she touched her flattened stomach now n then n sighed feeling it empty..geet was also sad looking at her..

Adi:maan,we will take rest in room..come pinky..

Pinky looked at adi once n then maneet..she silently followed adi to the room..adi made pinky sit on bed n he sat next to her..

Adi:pinky,i know its hard for a mother to come out of the loss..i wont say u r wrong..but can u see ur brother n geet..

Pinky looked at him..

Adi continued..

Adi:pinky,we have seen both struggled a lot..how much we tried to make them happy..when they started the new life.they are stopped...they are not moving becoz of us..i can see them worried thinking about u n me..pinky,not for us..for ur brother n geet.n priya...try once..try to forget that u were pregnant few days before n we lost it..say thanks to god that our priya n jaanvi are safe..booljao us bache ka jo tumne dekha nehi..see the childrens safe n sound which we brought up..thinking about the lost child u r not spoling ur health..u r taking the happiness of others too..dadi is worried seeing u like this..do u want her to fall ill..

Pinky started to shed tears..adi hugged her tight ..he was also in tears..he cant see his bubbly wife shrinking like this..it kills him a lot..

Adi:how much u want u cry pinky..let ur tears fell down n make ur heart feel light...but i dont want to see tears in ur eyes after this..we will get our baby back soon..trust me..

Pinky cried her heart out..adi kept on rubbing her back..her cry subsided n slowed down..adi looked at her she was sleeping..he settled her on bed n went to check babies..he laughed seeing them making fun of vicky..riding on his back..chal mere gode chal..kids has made vicky as horse n riding on his back.it was worth watching..

After pinky n adi went geet leaned on maans shoulder..

Geet:maan..

Maan:hmm..

Geet:when will pinky di be fine..

Maan:time heals n we are there na..we will make her come out of her shell soon.we are trying to make her happy...this trip will make her back..i m sure..

Geet:really na..

Maan:hmm

Adi came to maneet..

Geet sat straight..

Geet:di kesi hai..

Adi:dont worry she is fine..

Maan:where is she..

Adi:she is sleeping..im also going to take rest..will see u later..

He want maneet to spend time with each other..so he went giving them space..

Maan:geetu..

Geet:hmm..

Maan:i think we can go n take some rest..still there is 9 hrs for us to reach..

Geet:ok..

Maan told vicky to take care of kids n both went to take rest..

Maan has his naughty plans to make his wife's mood gud..as they entered the cabin,maan took off his shirt n vest making geet drool his toned body..

Maan smirked..

Maan:geetu darling dont think im going to take my lower dress too..

Geet:chi chi babaji..

She turned crimson red hearing his words..

Maan:wo kya haina..i want to sleep free..do u want to join me..

Geet:no..i dont feel sleepy..

Maan:then ok do a work for me..

Geet:kya..

Maan:see that oil near u..im having body pain..apply on me..

Geet :maan..u..u..

Maan layed flat on his stomach..

Maan:geetu,common dear..ur husband is waiting for u ..

Geet:u r lying u r in pain..

Maan:then how to prove ..sachi geetu,i need a massage from u..pls..think i work so many hrs..travel for so many places..wont i have back pain n body pain..then its ur wish.if u r not ready ,.i will call some other to do my massage..what about that beautiful AH..

Geet opened her mouth wide making a big O..she was jealous..how this maan was shameless..she cant think about the ah doing massage to her husband...she gritted her teeth..n took the oil n went to maan..she started to apply on his spine..he showed his hip..when she applied there he showed his upper neck..maan was enjoying her touch.she was doing sincerely without knowing the real fact..that he was faking pain.

Maan:yahaan geetu..

Maan:yahaan bhi..

She was slowly feeling drowned in his muscles..without maans words her hands roamed everywhere making maan moan..though it started with fake ,both were losing themselves..he turned to his back facing her..he pulled her with such a force she laded on him fully..both eyes were locked with each other..maahiiimaahii..

His eyes were dark n she could read the desire in his eyes..without her own will her face lowered to his face n looked at his mshaped lips..maans hands went to her back of head n pulled her more close..his lips touched hers..soon both were tasting each other n lost in others passion..maans hands went on her back pulling her close to him.he slided her sari n.his hands searched the strings of her blouse n removed it..maan undid her bra hook..it hanged on her body giving his hands way under to her curves..maan flipped n geet was under him now..maan nippled her hard buds making her moan..

Geet:maan..pls..aahh..

Maan:i love you geetu..

He was making her week..

Geet:i love u too maan..

Maan was busy making her senses drown in his passion..

Geet:maan..k..o..i..a.a jayega..

Maan:hmm..

His hands lifted her sari up reaching her thighs..

Geet:maan..pls..no..

Maan:dont u want this..

Geet:haan..but..now..

Maan sealed his lips with hers..lets enjoy the time we get honey..

Geet:but maan..outside..

Maan:shh..

His hands reached his pant buckles..the knock stopped him..

Jaanvi:mama papa..chachu mama is there na..

Geet:i told u maan..now how am i to go out..n vicky is also there..

she was trying to fix the sari..n blouse..

Maan covered her with the duvet..

Maan:u be like this ill manage..he wore his shirt quickly n opened the door..

Vicky:bro ,she is crying for u both..

Jaanu jumped to maan..

Vicky chuckled n without saying anything he went locking the door..

Maan:isei kya hua..why he was laughing like that..

Geet sat in bed covering with spread..jaanvi jumped to geet..rubbing her eyes with back of palms

Geet:hmm phir bichara kya karega when he sees the sindoor on u..

Maan checked n saw geets vermillion on his cheeks n neck..how he is going to face his little bro now..

He turned to geet

U must have said to me before opening..

Did u gave me time to check u or myselves..

Geet was patting jaanu who was in her lap..

Geet did not realise her spread lowered ..jaanu:mum mum..she placed her small lips in geets buds making geet gasp..she started to latch n soon drifted to sleep..geet sighed after she slept..she placed her on bed n stood up to fix her dress..

Geet:if she forgets too na,u remind her ..

Maan:when she stopped that i remind her..

Geet:atleast she never needs me in day times..but today see what u did..

Maan:isme meri koi galathi nehi..

Geet:aapki galathi hai..

Maan:meinei mya kiya geetu..

Geet:aapnei meri dress uthar...

She stopped..he is smiling seeing her..

Geet:aapna bohut bada dusht dhanav ho..

Maan:hmm..phir bhi tumhara pati hoon...do u want another demo..he stretched his hands n body ..oh its paining...

Geet threw the cushion on him..he moved..

Maan catched the next one..

Maan:geet if u continue ur atchyachaar,our baby will wake up..

Geet stopped..n turned to see jaanu..

Maan took the chance n kissed geet cheeks n moved saying..i love u my hot angry geetu..ok u take rest ill call u later..for lunch..

Geet could only smile seeing the naughty maan..

She threaded jaanu's hair n kissed her forehead..

Geet:jaanu,ur papa has gone naughty..

She smiled in sleep like she is accepting what her mother said..

She layed beside jaanu n slept for a while..

After sometime all freshed up n had a family lunch..adi said why cant they all play cards..n all accepted..dadi was taking care of kids while all played..

Pinky tried to mingle with all..n others too tried not to talk about the topic of baby..

At night they landed in america..maans men was waiting for him with the limo..all settled inside..america was shining with colours at night..n kids were enjoying the ride a lot..the car stopped before a luxurious apartment..

Dadi:maan,have u hired this..

Maan:no dadi..ive bought it for own..

Dadi:great..nice choice..

The man opened the apartment n all went inside..

It was huge with 6 bedrooms ,kids play room,a big living room,library, dining hall n kitchen..

Man:sir ,the food u ordered is ready in dining..

Maan:ok..u may go..

Vicky:who is he bro..

Maan:assistant for me in london branch..i asked him to make arrangements n he did..ok all must be having jet lag..so freshup soon n join in dining soon..

Maneet ,pinky adi,vicky n dadi settled in each room..in 15 minutes they were in dining all chatting n having dinner..

All slept soon because of jet lag..

Maan was waiting for the next morning..

Maan:wait for ur surprise geetu darling..sure u n pinky r going to beat me up..he said smiling to himself seeing his wife n baby cuddled in his arms..but i love torturing u..becoz i love u..

1642 words..again short one..
i am not so happy..i think all lost interest in this ff
thought i will reach 50 parts n give epilogue..
but if this goes on i will finish in 45 parts..
like others i wont give u target of likes n pages..
i will end it sooner..

2.3.2013..9.40 pm

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first after sooo long
Cumg to the updaye
Lovef it
Missing naughty jaanu
But I like the way adi made pinky understand
Maaneet romance full on in the planr
Nd jaanu tooo much
Surprise kya hai maan ka
Waiting for that
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it..
now what is the next surprise...
continue soon

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