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😃 loved the update. Superb

nice update

I rly loved this theme.I've always liked d stories of twins.in fact even i've written such ff.Maan loves Madhu,not Geet.But he is willing 2 giv her d happiness she deserves if their marr happens.I'm confused how Madhu feels 4 Maan.Liked how Rishab stands by Madhu.if u can,plz use Rk-mADHU PICS too.Maan told d truth 2 Geet.Duno how she'll react.but after reading d teaser i feel its not geet,but madhu only heard wht maan said.plz update soon

awesome update yar.

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awesome update yar.
eagerly waiting for next update.


thanks... i hope u like it 10 part also

Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu''''.

Part ' 10

Maan: Geet'. Ab tum job hi fasla lo'.mein tumhare sath hu

Tum ye shaadi''.krna chahti ho ya nhi''..

Ye bs tumhara fasla honga

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Geet koi bhi fasla lene se phle mein tumhe kuch khehna chahta hu'..

Ydi tumhara jwab HA huya''..to mein tumse wada krta hu'..

Mera atit kbhi bhi hmare rishte ke bich nhi aayenga'

Mein tumhe saari khushiya dene ki koshish krunga Geet'.

Jinpe tumhara''.bs tumhara hq honga''.

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He paused for few minutes for knowing her answer, her reaction.

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But she not said any word.

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Maan: geet tum kuch khti kyun nhi'''.

He turns towards her ''. But''

Maan: geet kha gyi''

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Na jane geet ke mann mein kya chl rha honge

Uske mann mein kitne sawal honge

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Sayad unme se kyi swalo ke jwab mere pass bhi na ho'

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Geet tum bina kuch khe kyun ase chli gyi'''

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Mujhse jo khehna hai..tum kh sakti thi geet'

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I know, I hurt you so deeply in your heart.

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Pr mein kya krta geet''

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Annie: bhabhi aap kha khoyi ho

Geet: asa kuch nhi h annie

Annie: mujhe pta hai bhabhi'aap bhai ke baare mein soch rhi ho na

Geet: nhi ' w..wo ..Me'mein

Daadi: koi hmari beti ko pareshan nhi karenga ' ab

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Rano: geet ki dress to final ho gyi''

Par maan bte ki dress

Annie: aunty apne bilkul shi kaha

Maan bhai ne ab tk kuch bhi buy nhi kiya honga'..siwaye office shirts ke

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One voice came from behind "lo mujhe toh bhul hi gye"

Rano: madhu tu yha

Madhu: apni geet ko akela kaise chodti

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Geet: kha rh gyi thi tu

Mujhe '..

Rano: tujhe pta tha

Annie: bhabhi ko kya..mujhe bhi pta tha'madhu yha kbse aayi huyi hai

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Rishabh: aur mein bhi hu sath mein

Rano: rishabh bte

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Daadi: acha huya tum dono bhi aa gye

Puri family sath ho...Toh shopping mein aur bhi mja aata hai'..

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Annie: par ya bhai kha rh gye

Risabh: lo maan bhi aa gya

Risabh: hey buddy

Both hug each other.

Maan: hey

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Madhu: mujhe ye pasand hai

Annie: nhi ye wali

Rano: ye jyada achi hai

Daadi: ye jyada stylish hai

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Rishabh: dekha maan'.

Jisse phnani hai' uss se koi nhi puch rha

Bs sb aapni choice bta rhe hai

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Maan:

He was busy in drooling of geet.

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{Geet ki is khmoshi ko'is hassi ko mein kya smjhu..}

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Geet also secretly glances towards him.

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Geet : {ye maan baar baar yha kyun dekh rhe hai'.}

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Rishabh: maan

Maan:

Rishabh: uff'.ye ladka kha khoya huya hai

He also sees in same direction in which he lost.

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He shook his shoulders.

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Maan: ha...tu kuch kh rha tha kya

Rishabh: maine to bhut kuch kaha'pr tune meri ek baat pe bhi dhayn nhi diya

Kisse dekh rha tha

Maan: asa kuch nhi hai

Risabh: really

Maan: hmm

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Annie: bhabhi aap bolo na'aapko ye wali pasand ahi

Madhu: nhi

Ye wali

Annie: kha na ye wali

Madhu: ye wali

Daadi: ye jyada achi hai

Rano: nhi maaji'.ye jyada achi lagengi

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Maan: yha pe ye kya ho rha hai

Rishabh: whi to mein tujhse kh rha tha

Pr tu to'.

Chl chod

Inki problem solve krte hai

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Maan: aap sb chup honge ya nhi

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Annie: hum to bs

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Maan: jisse ye ring phenani hai'wo khud pasand kre to jyada acha honga

Annie: bilkul shi kha bhai apne

Bhabhi aapko pasand ha na ye.

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Maan: annie maine kha wo khud choose karengi

Aur koi kuch nhi kahenga

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Annie: very good bhai

Abhi se '..

He glares towards her.

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Rishabh: maan acha to ye bhi honge'.tum dono ek dusre ke liye ring pasand krlo

Daadi: ye sbse best idea hai

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Annie held her hand and said "bhai aap yha baitho''bhabhi ke sath'.unke pass'..

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Rano: ab jaldi se pasand krlo

Daadi: ek kaam krte hai'hum in dono ko akela chod dete hai' ydi hum sb yha rahenge to dono shi se baat nhi kr payenge'aur na hi ring pasand kar payenge

Annie came near to his ears and said " bhai daadimaa ne to aapki bin bhole murad puri kar di''

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Daadi: annie chlo yha se'..tb tak hum maan ke liye dress le lete hai'

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Maan: geet mujhe tumse

Geet: maan phle ring pasand kr lete hai

Maan: hmm

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{geet tum mujhse kuch kyun nhi kh rahi'..kuch to kaho'mein janana chahta hu'.tumhare dil mein is waqt kya chl rha hai'.)

Geet: maan

He was lost in own thoughts.

She placed own palm on his hand and sweetly take his name "Maan"

Maan: hmm

Geet: maan aapko ye

Ye'

Ring pasand

Maan: achi hai

Geet: apko sch mein achi lagi

Maan: ha geet

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Maan: geet ab tum apne liye bhi ring pasand krlo..

Geet: nhi

Maan: kyun?

Geet: maan wo isliye' mere liye aap pasand karenge

Maan: par geet

Geet: maine bhi to aapke liye pasand ki na

Toh aap mere liye itna bhi nhi kar sakte

Maan: ok

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Rishabh: tu kha jar hi hai

Madhu: khi nhi

Mein to bs ase hi

Rishabh: mein janta hu Madhu tu geet ke pass jar hi thi

Madhu: nhi

Rishabh: jhoot

Jhoot mat bol

Madhu: jb tu janta hai..to swal kyun krta hai

Rishabh: madhu tu smjhti kyun nhi

Madhu: mujhe kuch nhi smjhna hai

Aur tu '..Please firse wo sb start mt kariyo

Rishabh: thik hai

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Madhu : { ab to mein wha bhi nhi ja sakti''.kya karu'kaise mein un dono ko'..baat krne se roku}

Madhu: idea

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Madhu: annie tumhe nhi lagta

Hume un dono ko

She gives questioning look'what she wants to say to me.

Madhu: mere khehna ka mtlab hai'.

Thoda to hume unhe tadpana chaiye

Milan se phle judaai ka mja to lene dena chaiye unko

Annie: hmm

Shi kha

Jb dekho bhai bhabhi se milne ke bahane dundte hai

Chlo hum dono wha chalte hai

Aur un dono ke romance pe thoda break lagate hai

Madhu: tum chlo ''mein aati hu

She left.

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Madhu: ye kaam to ho gya

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Geet: maan wo mein aapse

Maan: geet phle mein tumse kuch puchna chahta hu

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Annie: bhai bhabhi'..ye baki puchna'kehna baad mein krte hai...

Maan: tu thode der hume akela nhi chod sakti

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She denied and gives smile to both of you.

Annie: bhabhi , hum chle

Geet: hmm

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Annie: bhabhi kya huya

Aap ruk kyun gyi'

Geet: annie tum chlo mein bs ek minute mein aayi.

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Annie: bhabhi suno toh'

Geet: mein aati hub s

Annie: ye bhabhi ko kya kaam aa gya

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He is roaming in free space in mall like side corridors.

Maan: {ye geet kuch smjhti kyun nhi'yha mein usse baat krna chahta hu'.aur wo'..
usse sbki fikr'..siwaye meri chodke'..mein yha uske liye pareshaan hu'aur wo'.}

He was busy in talking own self.

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Geet: aap mere liye kyun pareshan hai.

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Her sweet voice stops him. He turn to see her.

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Maan: geet tum ab yha kyun aayi ho'

Tum jayo'.

She placed her index finger on his lips, she stop him for saying further.

Geet: sshhh

Kitna bolte ho aap

Mujhe to khte the'geet tum ek baar bolna shuru kro''to stop hone ka button kha hai..tumhe pata hi nhi hai'..

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Aur khud..

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Sorry'.

Maan:

Geet: aap ab kuch nhi kahenge

He says to her with eyes "your finger placed on my lips, so how I talk"

She instantly removes her finger.

Geet: oh'wo mein

She looks down, feel shy.

Maan: it's ok geet.

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Maan: geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: tumne mere swal ka jwab nhi diya

Tum kya ab bhi'.mujhse

part 11 on page 106

I hope friends you all like this update'''please hit like button and do long comment''

Jisse mujhe ye to pata chale aapko update mein sbse acha aur sbse bekar kya laga''.

Jisse mein apni galati thik kr saku'..

Sorry for mistakes''''.

For precap see below''.

Precap:

1)"dil smbhal se zara''.phir mohabbat krne chla ha ye'"

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2) maan: mein ye engagement nhi kr sakta