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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

fabulous update

amazing
liked a lottt
continue soon
waiting
happy new year


happy new year and thankss
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Maan is trying 2 get Geet's reply.U stopped at d wrong place.cant wait'precap is not pkeasant.feel like crying.plz get them engaged soon


dear engagement ke liye thoda aur wait krni padengi...

oh so sorry galat jagh rok diya...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

jaane dil mein kbse hai tu''''.

Part ' 11


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Annie: bhai bhabhi'..ye baki puchna'kehna baad mein krte hai'..

Maan: tu thode der hume akela nhi chod sakti

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She denied and gives smile to both of you.

Annie: bhabhi , hum chle

Geet: hmm

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Annie: bhabhi kya huya

Aap ruk kyun gyi'

Geet: annie tum chlo mein bs ek minute mein aayi.

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Annie: bhabhi suno toh'

Geet: mein aati hu bs

Annie: ye bhabhi ko kya kaam aa gya

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He is roaming in free space in mall like side corridors.

Maan: {ye geet kuch smjhti kyun nhi'yha mein usse baat krna chahta hu'.aur wo'..
usse sbki fikr'..siwaye meri chodke'..mein yha uske liye pareshaan hu'aur wo'.}

He was busy in talking own self.

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Geet: aap mere liye kyun pareshan hai.

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Her sweet voice stops him.

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Maan: geet tum ab yha kyun aayi ho'

Tum jayo'.

She placed her index finger on his lips, she stop him for saying further.

Geet: sshhh

Kitna bolte ho aap

Mujhe to khte the'geet tum ek baar bolna shuru kro''to stop hone ka button kha hai..tumhe pata hi nhi hai'..

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Aur khud..

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.

Sorry'.

Maan:

Geet: aap ab kuch nhi kahenge

He says to her with eyes "your finger placed on my lips, so how I talk"

She instantly removes her finger.

Geet: oh'wo mein

She looks down, feel shy.

Maan: it's ok geet.

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Maan: geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: tumne mere swal ka jwab nhi diya

Tum kya ab bhi'.mujhse

Her phone buzzed.

Geet: maan sorry'..maa ka phone hai''bye '..mein chalti hu

Maan : geet

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Geet.

.

Gyi''

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In Maan room

He stands near window and look towards sky.

Maan Monologue

In kuch dino mein kitna kuch badal gya'..kya socha tha '.aur kya ho gya'.

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Kya pata tha jiski maine phli mulaqat mein help ki'.wo aaj humsafar bnane jaa rhi hai'.aur jisse fight huyi'.wo pyaar bn gyi'.

Kbhi nhi socha tha' mein Madhu ko pasand krne lagunga''hmari to bnti tk nhi thi'..par in saalo ki duriyo ne'.dilo ka fasle mita diye'

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Flashback in

Four boys circle the girl' in this one boy pulled her hair'

She : aahh

Leave my hair'.

Boy: ok

Chlo ab ek gaana sunao

She: no

Ab mujhe pareshan kiya toh mein tum sbki complain kr dungi teacher se

2nd boy: oh really

Hum to darr gye

Phle koi geet sunao fir jayo''

She: mujhe nhi aata

3rd boy : tumhara to naam hi geet hai ''aur tumhe geet hi nhi aata

One boy came here and said " ye sb yha kya ho rha hai"

Tum sb isse kyun pareshan kr rhe ho

4th boy : ek aur new admission

Hmm'.

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Kya naam hai tumhara

He : Maan

Maan singh Khurana

He held her hand''

Maan: chlo yha se

1st boy: ye khi nhi jayengi'..

Phle geet sunayi gi'..

Maan : tumhe geet sunana hai

Abhi sunate hai

He slapped him.

1st boy: tumhari itni himaat apne senior pe hath uthaya tumne

He also raised hand for slapping but stop'due to teacher came.

Teacher: yha ye sb kya ho rha hai

Maan: madam ye hume pareshan kr rhe the

Teacher: tum sb kal school tbhi aana'..jb parents tumhare sath aaye

2nd boy: Madam hum to bs

Teacher: keep quiet.

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Maan: tum ro kyun rhi ho

Geet : unhone mere hair pull kiye

Maan: us waqt to tum nhi royi

Geet : aap mujhe dekh rhe the

Maan: hmm

Geet: mujhe dard huya na

Maan: us waqt to nhi huya

Us waqt to tumne pure josh sa kha tha "leave my hair"

Aur ab

Geet: oh ho

Us waqt bhi huya tha

Pr madhu aur mom khti hai'kbhi kissi anjaan ke samne roke mt dikhayo'.wo tumhe kamzor smjh lenga'.aur tumhe aur dard puchayenga'..

Maan: very nice thought

Pr tum fir mere samne kyun royi

Geet: aap anjaan thode na ho

Maan: pr mein to tumse aaj hi mila na

Geet: pr apne meri help ki na

To phir''

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She : kha hai wo sb

Girl : wha

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..

He pulled her cheek softly and said "you are so cute"

Suddenly he falls on floor''.

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Maan: aahh

Due to the she punch hard on his nose'

Maan: blood

You idiot''

Geet: madhu ye tumne kya kiya

Madhu: ye tu mujhse puch rhi hai

Isne abhi tumhare cheek pull kiye aur tumhari aankho mein ye aansu''

Mein aaj isse chodungi nhi

Isne meri geetu ko rulaya

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He: oh god maan tumhe ye kya huya

Maan: koi is pagal ladki se pucho

Madhu: tumne mujhe pagal kha

Maan: ya

Mad girl

Madhu: tu toh gya

Geet: madhu meri baat toh sun

Madhu : tu meri baat sun

Koi tujhe hurt kre 'teri aankho mein aasu aaye'I don't leave him'

He: madhu ye tune kya kiya

Maan ne asa kya kr diya''

Madhu: rishu to bich me se ht ja

Maan: risabh side ho yaar'.

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Geet: chuppp

She screamed.

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Madhu : kya huya geetu

Geet: risabh Maan ko aap yha se le jayo

Madhu: rishu tujhe jana hai to ja

Pr isse yhi chod

Mein isse principal madam ke office mein leke jati hu

Maan: is pagal ladki ne bilkul shi kaha

Chl dono chalte hai madam ke pass

Dekhte hai madam kisse punishment deti hai

You hit me''.na

Ab to tum rusticate hoke rhongi''

Madhu : oh really

Dekhte hai

Geet : madhu

Madhu: geetu

Geet : chup

He helped me''

Madhu: what

Geet: yes

Wo koi aur ladke the''.

Inhone to meri help ki

Aur tumne

Madhu: tune mujhe phle kyun nhi kaha

Geet: tu sunti kha hai kissi ki

Mein kbse kh rhi hu

Chup ho ja'.meri baat sun

Madhu: sorry geetu

Geet: sorry tum inse kaho

Madhu: is..se

She looks him up to down'.

Geet: madhuuu

Madhu: tu mujhe gusse se mt dekh

Khti hu

Madhu: sorry

Maan: kya kha tumne''

Risabh: maan sorry kh rhi hai wo

Maan: tu chup ho

.

.

You mad girl'.tum kuch kh rhi thi

Madhu: youuu

Geet : maan am sorry'. Meri wajh se aapko chot lag gyi

Flashback end

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'maine geet ko sb sch isliye btaya ''jisse wo apni zindagi ka fasla shi le seke'

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.

Meri zindagi ka fasla to kismat le chuki hai'.

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Pr geet ko to saari khushiya milne ka hq hai'wo apna humsafar khud pasand kr sakti hai'

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Pr usne to mujhse na kuch pucha ..aur na hi kuch kaha'.

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Usne apna dard bhi mujhse share nhi kiya..wo to ase muskura rhi thi jaise kuch huya hi nhi''..

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Khi ab mein uske liye Anjaan to nhi bn gya hu'..

Khi usse ye to nhi lagta'jb mein kissi aur se pyaar krta hu'toh usse shaadi ke liye HA hi kyun khi'

Us se itni der tak sch kyun chupaya''.

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Geet ''ha to krdi thi'.pr mein khud nhi smjh nhi pa rha tha'.ek raat me sb kuch badal gya tha'kash mein tumhe sch phle kha hota'meri "ha" khni ki wajh phle btayi hoti''I know I am so selfish person'..isliye to ek baar bhi "ha" khne se phle tumhare baare mein nhi socha'aur jb ehsaas huya apni galati ka'to bina ye soche tum kitni khush ho'tumhare dil pe kya bitengi sb kuch bta diya''

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He wipe own tear self'..

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Pr ab nhi geet'.tum best deserve krti ho'.tumhe jha ki saari khusiya milni chaiye'.sayad mein wo sb khushi tumhe kbhi nhi de payu'..jo tumhe milni chaiye'..

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Tumse kh to diya maine'..pr khud abhi tak apne dil ko nhi smjha paya'asa nhi hai'.mein aage nhi bdna chahta'.chahta hu'.sb kuch bhool jayu'mere apno ko har khushi du'.pr nhi kr pa rha'.

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He punch hard on window mirror''mirror broke down'.some pieces stab in his palm.

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Mujhe abhi daadimaa ko sb kuch btana honga''

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Madhu : kya soch rhi hai geetu

Geet: kuch nhi madhu'..

Madhu : chl bta na

Geet: kal sb kuch badal jayenga

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Madhu: geetu itni senti baatein mt kiya kr yaar'..

Geet: hmm

Madhu: sochna hai to ye soch shaadi ke baad honeymoon pe kha jane ka plan hai tum dono ka

Geet: what?

Madhu: common geetu'tune abhi tak nhi socha

Geet : nhi

Madhu: to soch yaar'kuch hi din bche hai'

Jo sochna chaiye..wo to sochti nhi hai''ye ladki'..

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Geet: tujhe bhut mja aa rha hai na

Madhu: hmm

Geet start tickling her'

Madhu: stop geetu''

Geet: kya huya'ab

Tujhe masti suj rhi thi na

Madhu: acha baba sorry'.ab ruk ja

Geet: good

Madhu: shaitan

Geet: tu

Madhu: nhi tu

Note: sorry for delay in updates''

Friends aap mein se kuch past ke baare mein aur janana chate the'.so I hope kuch swalo ke jwab mil gye honge''.

Sorry for mistakes'.. if you like the update please hit like button and do comment''

Precap: same as previous


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Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
so confusing
well not the past but the present time
as in maneet are married right
but he still loves madhu only
toh phir yeh geet kahan se aa gayi
ufff yeh toh confusion hi confusion hai
awww he saved geet haan
and madhu hit maan thinking he made her sister cry when that wasnt the case
am guessing he isnt able to tell dadi as they are married
when will it come to the present time then
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

<font color="#990033">so confusing
well not the past but the present time
as in maneet are married right
but he still loves madhu only
toh phir yeh geet kahan se aa gayi
ufff yeh toh confusion hi confusion hai
awww he saved geet haan
and madhu hit maan thinking he made her sister cry when that wasnt the case
am guessing he isnt able to tell dadi as they are married
when will it come to the present time then
cheers for pm
</font>


Dear maaneet married nhi h. Both families fix this marriage... Geet is shaadi se happy hai par maan nhi. Maan apni family ke khushi ke liye mana nhi kr paya. He feel he hurt geet due to own behaviour. Uske dil me bhut dard hai. Jo wo kisi se share nhi kr sakta... I hope ur confusion now solved
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am confused
if he loves madhu
then y geet came
plz reveal soon dear
thanx for the pm
nice update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

like it awesome 👏


thanksss
priya_21 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

i am confused

if he loves madhu
then y geet came
plz reveal soon dear
thanx for the pm
nice update
cont soon



geet always there yaar... he love madhu ...but madhu not love him...so he decide to marry geet apni family ki khushi ke liye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part yar
when geet will know the truth n maan too that usne geet se nahi madhu se keh dia h sab waiting for next jakdi dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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