FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

thanks for pm

loved the update

wish the show had shown this only not the crap🤢

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sunny_sarun

@sunny_sarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Great..arnav shud soon find out the truth

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kaymail

@kaymail

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Love this...I so wish u were writing the serial...

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
I really love your take on how IPK should have been...it seems so natural and progressive. 👍🏼
Plus points: your writing style, word usage, descriptions and flow of emotions. Very few writers can write in a manner that places the reader in the story...I feel as I am in Lucknow in the Gupta house as I read the sister's scene. I feel the anger and disbelief during the revelation in RM.

Great use of monologues too and the pace of the story is forward looking. It's not too fast or slow and each character have a part to play. I love how you uses Akash and Payal properly...I hope to see more of NK too, if possible.
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Thank you for introducing a parallel world I love...like old IPK ❤️

Wow! I saw this now (pretty late, I know) and I've been smiling ear to ear.

thank you thank you soo much! 😊

I intend to make IPK a happy place once again (even if it is just another alternate universe).. thanks for taking the time to read the chapters and for giving this wonderful feedback! Hope to see you come back for second helpings 😊

cheers!

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: kaymail
Love this...I so wish u were writing the serial...

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gee thanks dear!

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

jus read d latest updates...

i cant control my laugh...🤣...

arnav sweetheart woo her bk b4 its tooo late

he seriously needs to find d truth soon

awsum updates...

tanx 4 d pm...

Edited by kamalapushpa - 13 years ago

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

You are a great writer!! Loving this story!! You should be a CV on the real show!! I read all the chapters till page 31 in one go. Amazing!!!

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Oh wow!

Just read all the chapters and hats off to you! It's so realistic and amazing!

URGHHH DADI!! -_________________- SO MAD AT HEERRR! :@

Please PM me when you update! :)

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sne0

@sne0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

Just started reading your post..I have read about half till now..You are a really amazing wirter.The story also feels so true to their characters. I have not read till your last chapter,and this may come a lot later.. but I keep wondering about Arnav's reaction on rediscovering that his father was ready to leave his family. Even though it is not Garima's fault, his family did suffer. He will always be destined to have some sorrow as the past cannot be erased. Only when he reconciles with his past again, he can move forward with Kushi or viceveersa that Kushi can heal him..Cant wait to read the rest of your story.

I also wanted Arnav and Kushi to sort out their past before a marriage (not sure if it will happen), and you have written the story really well. I too felt that Arnav would not come between Akash and Payal but it is a tricky situation. I hope you willl be able to pm me with your updates. Thank you and will try to read the rest of your work soon..

Edited by sne0 - 13 years ago

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

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OMG! first of all.. THANKS kbtr for a beautiful feedback!

Aww dear! Don't feel so bad, abhi to kahani shuru hui hai 😉 you're right.. he needs to realise the amount of pain he has given to Khushi.. I don't intend for him to suffer as much as she did (that will take another year's worth of scenes if you know what I mean hehehe) but he should suffer a little nevertheless.

Nope, he can't do without her and he has no clue what to do to get her back.. remember his efforts during her birthday? with all his expensive gifts and big gestures when all K wanted was a simple birthday wish.

Shyam and dadi will get their due darling. No evil can sustain for long. But then without any complications and evil, IPK can't survive too long, can it? I'm interested to see how Dadi will react too (I haven't thought that much in advance hahaha)..

well as of now.. hold tight.. the ride is going to get a little rough.. 😊

cheers!

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Thanks for the reply.

I'm glad to know that he's going to suffer some more. Thank God, your Kushi is like the old Kushi from reel life! I love how she said no to him, and he was expecting her to bow down [lol😆] (like she does in reel life, damn the CVs fro ruining her character and making her into an idiot! btw, I have stopped watching the show, yes miss ArShi and going through withdrawal symptoms! So I'm glad I have your scenes. btw, I wouldn't mind reading them forever, you're soo good! So a year's worth of scenes that you could have are fine with me!!!)😃😃😃😃]