FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99] - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

Thanks for the update.

I am soo glad that Kushi did not give in so easily. I feel really awful for Arnav and my throat has a humungous lump in it. But he must realize what he has done is wrong. I feel sooo bad for him. He is actually like a little kid, you know, seeking approval from her. He can't do without her, that we know, but he's going about it all in the wrong way! And, they do say, if you love someone, you should forgive them since life is too short. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update. But yeah, they are both suffering. I feel so bad for them, both! When will Dadi and Shyam get their due? I can't wait to find out what Dadi will do when she realizes she has been taken for a ride!!
Please update quickly! tfs, love your scenes.😃


OMG! first of all.. THANKS kbtr for a beautiful feedback!

Aww dear! Don't feel so bad, abhi to kahani shuru hui hai 😉 you're right.. he needs to realise the amount of pain he has given to Khushi.. I don't intend for him to suffer as much as she did (that will take another year's worth of scenes if you know what I mean hehehe) but he should suffer a little nevertheless.

Nope, he can't do without her and he has no clue what to do to get her back.. remember his efforts during her birthday? with all his expensive gifts and big gestures when all K wanted was a simple birthday wish.

Shyam and dadi will get their due darling. No evil can sustain for long. But then without any complications and evil, IPK can't survive too long, can it? I'm interested to see how Dadi will react too (I haven't thought that much in advance hahaha)..

well as of now.. hold tight.. the ride is going to get a little rough.. 😊

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nazibah

I'm glad Khushi didn't give in easily I mean did he seriously think helping Akash chose a house will get her back?! Loved the update!!!! Thanks for the PM!!!


hahaha, i think we all know, Arnav has a different idea of wooing K.. for him it's all about money and expensive gestures.. remember K's birthday? 😊

glad you liked it

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VasantiLad

Loved it - great up-date - love the way that you use the monologue - it really carries the story really well- please update soon & thanx for the PM. Poor Arnav he really has it bad


Thanks dear! And I love your diligent feedback after every chapter 😊

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seven_stars

i m loving the way you are punishing arnav !! <3

loving this story!! it remind me old tyms !!! <3
cont soon:)


Originally posted by: asr13

Awesome update smitzy, and I have to say I love your not-so-forgiving-Khushi ...beautifully written !!! More more more puhleeej :D😛😛😛


Thanks ladies! I'm glad you like this side of Khushi 😊

Cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -kitzdoll-

oh man dadi is really set out to destroy the guptas's and looks like shyam is helping her...she is sooo evil...and arnav got hos worth now from khushi...wow good on her for standing up to her family...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...


aha! You did notice that didn't you 😊 well, i don't want to digress too much from the way the serial has gone.. i mean of course I don't want to write about the scary-show of anjali's miscarriage n all, but I intend to show Dadi and Shyam fraternizing.

Khushi will stand her ground as long as Arnav doesn't go through the same pain as she did. The K in my story ain't weak willed or weak hearted esp when someone tries to threaten her family's happiness (frustration with the serial is reeking out here 😛)

cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: babli0204

Good job Khushi. Arnav MUST realise his own follies! So now both are in pain, which I hope would be over soon!!
But what are these two creeps upto??? Cannot believe it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Waiting for the next update to know more about their evil plan.
THANKS a lot for the PM.


Uhmm.. not THAT soon 😉

See Arnav needs to realise a lot of things.. all the pain he has caused her for over a year, it can't just disappear within a few days.. he needs to apologize to her properly but not before feeling some pain himself.. As much as I love Arnav, I thought his apology scene was nothing less than shitty (just 3 mins are you kidding me?!).. he had to beg K to have her back!

Dadi and Shyam.. oh man.. what can i say.. both are epitomes of evilness.. But Shyam ain't going to return right now.. he'll remain behind the scenes..

cheers for the comment hun! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
okk dat was rude on khushis part wen arnav is apologisin she shud hav accepted!!!
well loved dat buaji arnav nd khusi scene..
dat creep dadi..i feel lyk killin her
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderfull... this is how it should have been -- hope it improves and becomes this soon!!
Love it -- love the fact that sankadevi is back again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really love your take on how IPK should have been...it seems so natural and progressive. 👍🏼
Plus points: your writing style, word usage, descriptions and flow of emotions. Very few writers can write in a manner that places the reader in the story...I feel as I am in Lucknow in the Gupta house as I read the sister's scene. I feel the anger and disbelief during the revelation in RM.

Great use of monologues too and the pace of the story is forward looking. It's not too fast or slow and each character have a part to play. I love how you uses Akash and Payal properly...I hope to see more of NK too, if possible.
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Thank you for introducing a parallel world I love...like old IPK ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
so glad you didnt make it easy for him he cant just flip his decisions like a switch and i do hope in the show if he does sumah like this for example, she better stand strong like this story and not take him back, especially not that easy anyways

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