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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) ,.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Swayam looks so innocent and cute:-):-):-)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-) Love Swayam:-):-)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Yaiiy:-) 8 pages are complete:-):-) now waiting 4 the update:-):-):-):-)

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: idiot_box
Read Chapters 4 and 5 together..and I loved them!!Especially Chapter5!I absolutely loved the Nimmi confession...It was really sweet..But what is Sharon going to do now??I am really excited to know!!I hope she says no..So please update ASAP!!

I am really glad to see that you liked my update! 😃 Thank you for your overwhelming comment. 🤗

As far is what Sharon's reply would be, you will have to wait for the next update! 😉 And I am going to try to post the next part soon!😆

_Nivriti :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Girl u r an awesome writer
I really like how this ss become interesting after each update
swayam is really a sweet bro,he make sure that sakshi also get love from his dadisa.i really liked gunjan-swayam bonding...
Did swayam still love sharon because sharon start feeling for swayam n.i thing swayam have some problems which he do not want to share with his friend
update it soon n pls pm me

I am glad that you liked my update and also my writing style! :)

And I am also glad that you liked the alterations I have made! 😃

And as far as Swayam loving Sharon, I am not very sure I can disclose any of it now! 😉 You will have to wait for few more updates to come for a proper clarification! 😆

I will update the next part soon and for PMs please add me in your buddy list! 😳

_Nivriti ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: pratik54000
Nivriti it was perfect update in every sense...at it was fair in legnth...

it covered all the characters so perfectly and everybody had perfect role to play in the update...loved the way you described the dressing whole 5 people gunjan, swayam, rey, kriya and sharon...

after that whole pub sequence and dancing was very gracefully descripted i loved that...than came out and out nilesh simmi part which was so pleasure to read and nil confession was just superb...loved the update...

thanks for pm...enjoyed reading the update...

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pratik

p.s. enjoy the outing to bharatpur bir sanctuary...its a rocking place...try to cover whole place there and see all the amazing things there...have a rocking trip...have funfilled three days nivriti...

Hey Pratik!

I am very overwhelmed seeing your response! 😃

And I am glad you liked the NiMmi Confession, I was pretty hesitant in posting it! 😳

I will update soon! 😉

_Nivriti :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: pooja123456
waiting to knw sharons answer to shivam...the track ahead seems very interesting!!!!
thanks for the pm and do conitnue to pm me!!!

Hey! 😃 I am very glad to hear that you liked my update and also the track! :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Both parts 4 nd 5 were awesum dear.lovd the confesion of nimmi.lykd the brother-sister bond of swayam nd sakshi.aww.nd yup w8ing 4 sharon answer to shivam.thanks 4 pm.

I am very glad to hear that you liked my past two chapters! :)