Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye2 NOTE PG 130 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww thanks unum....thats really sweet of u....i will still post parts to my fnafic so keep checking while im gone! 😉
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greaat parts and thanks for not PMing me! JK! cont soonnn!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful part unum. kripa, everyone does mistakes 😡 u have to forgive him.continue soon
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Episode 58

Kripa goes to her room angrily. Shazmin rings Angad

A- Hello

Shaz- Hello Jeejs Di just came back home shes really angry the plan didn't work jeejs didn't u try to persuade her to go back with u

A- Shazmin I did I tried a lot but Kripa isn't listening shes being really stubborn its not her fault I didn't trust her and now when I have realized my mistake its too late. So Shamzin I have decided to go back to New York I am leaving tonight the flight is in 3 hours

Shaz- Lekin jeejs u can't leave without Di. Shes angry at the moment but she does really love u

A- I don't think she does Shazmin so I am leaving that's what she wants (he disconnects the phone)

Shazmin goes to Kripas room

Shaz- DI!!!!!!!

K- Kya hain Shazmin kyun chalah rahi hoon

Shaz- Di aapneh achah nahiye kiya u should forgive jeejs he really loves u. Di jeejs leaving in 3 hours hes going back to New York

K- So it's good if hes going (has a few tears in her eyes)

Shaz- Di please stop being stubborn Di aap meri baat mani hain aur ja kar jeejs ko roki hain Di he really loves u ajj agar apneh uneh nahiye rokah to woh chaleh jayengeh Di galthi insaan seh he hoti hain aur jeejs neh bhi galthi ki lekin uneh apni galthi ki maafi aapseh maagi thi kyunki une ko apni galthi ka ehasaas hogaya tha jeejs ko bahuth pashtawa hain apni galthi ka. He decorated the whole farmhouse only for u Di he love u so much aur app… Di aap bahuth lucky hain keh aapko jeejs mileh unkah pyaar mujhe dekiyeh maine Rishi seh saacha pyaar kiya aura ab……….. (she has tears in her eyes) ajj mein akeli hoon mera paas mera pyaar nahiye hain Di mein nahiye chahaati aap apni puri zindagi akeli rehay Di aap ja kar jeejs ko roke lijiye woh saach mein aapseh bahuth pyaar karteh hain agar aapneh ajj uneh nahiye rokah toh aap apnah pyaar hamesha keh liya kodaghi. Di aap please samjahneh ki koshish kijiyeh aap he kehti hain keh agar koi insaan galthi kareh aur baad mein uneh apni galthi ka pastawa ho toh humhe uneh maaf kardena chahiye hain to phir Di aap kyun nahiye jeejs ko maaf kardeti Di jeejs ko galath phemi hogayi thi yeh saab Rishi neh kiya tha aur isliye Di ajj agar apneh jeejs ko nahiye rokah to aap uneh ko denghi Di aap jaiyee hain

Kripa realizes her mistake

K- (Has tears in her eyes) Shazmin tumneh ajj mujhe meri galthi ka ehasaas dehlyah mein kuch zyadah he overreact kar rahiye thi mein ja khar Angad ko rokoonghi.

Shaz- Waise Di end of the day I am bigger than u 2 hours

K- I know aur aaj tumneh mujhe sahiye raastah dekayah hain aur tumneh prove kardiya keh u are bigger than me, aur tumhe sareh saanskar aur baatien yaad rakhi hain jo Mama, Papa neh sakiye aur meri sari baatein I am really proud of u Shazmin (she hugs her) Thanks so much

Shaz- Its ok Di ab aap jayaiee aapkeh paas sirf ek ghantah hain (1 hour)

K- Shazmin I am going

Kripa was about to go when Prithvi comes

Prithvi- Kripa kahaan ja rahi ho itni jaldi mein sab kuch tike toh hain na

K- Nahiye Prithvi mujhe janah hain mein baad mein tumhe saab kuch batoonghi

Kripa goes

Prithvi- Shazmin yeh Kripa ko kya hua itni jaldi mein kahaan gayi

Shaz- Prithvi ajj jeejs waapas New York ja rehay teh aur Di ko apni galthi ka ehasaas hogaya toh woh auneh rukaneh gayi hain (she explains the whole story)

Prithvi bes really angry

Shaz- Kya hua Prithvi tum itnah gusah kyun ho rehay ho

Prithvi- Nothing mujhe kuch kaam yaad agayah so I have to go

Shaz- Ok

Prithvi is very angry he goes out of the house he bangs the door

No we see Kripa driving really fast, she reaches the airport and asks the receptionist about the flight

K- Excuse me when is the flight to New York

Receptionist- I am sorry Mam the flight has just gone

Kripa is really sad and cries and goes to the bench

K- Maine tumhe ko diya Angad mujhe bahuth dher hogayi aneh mein (she cries)

Then someone comes and put his hand on Kripas shoulder. Kripa turns around its Angad

A- Kripa mein yahin hoon I didn't take the flight

K- Angad!!!! (She hugs him) I love u Angad

A- I love u too

K- Angad I am sorry for overeacting

A- Kripa its not ur fault. So Kripa ur coming back to New York with me

K- Yeah but not today after a few days is that ok

A- ofcourse its ok

Edited by unum ali - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww how sweet! Great part! cont. sono!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i love so much for making them get together and now do someting about privthre
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Posted: 19 years ago
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unum!!! omg that was sooo cute!! it was too good yaar...cotninue soon i loved it! 😉 gosh im seriously gonna miss this fanfic a lot in INdia!! and im gonna miss u
😭 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part finally kripa is coming back with angad
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nice part...it was cute!!!!!!
plz cont soon
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Awesome Job 👍🏼 Bye
Divjot

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