Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye2 NOTE PG 130 - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was cute - luvd shazmins speech n hehe to prithvi
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Episode 59

Angad and kripa head home in the car,when they get to the house they see it decorated in roses but noone there.angad guesses what the situation is while Kripa is confused,Kripa spots a letter,she reads it aloud.

Kripa-dear jeejs and di,me and josh thought you might need some time alone you know what we mean so we left the house nicely decorated for you have fun and be thankful to me and josh.

Kripa puts the note back on the table angrily.

Kripa-yeh shazmin bhi na bahut shararati hote jaa rahi hai.how stupid of her.

Angad comes and places his arms around her waist.

Angad-kripa shes right we need some time alone anyway.

Kripa blushes and lower her eyes Angad comes closer to kiss her when it starts raining,Kripa pushes Angad and goes to play in the rain.suddeneley music is turned on,Kripa turns and sees Angad coming forward passionately looking at her.

Barsaat ke din aye hai mulaqaat ke din aye hai

Now Angad and kripas eyes are locked.

betaabiyon ke sharaare beetche hain yeh saawan ki rimjhim jhadi hainKripa looks towards the ground,Angad smiles and lifts her face up with the support of his finger.kadam bekhudi mein behakne lage hain yeh madhoshiyon ki ghadi hainKripa turns and is about to go but Angads not willing to let her go that easily,he grabs her handbarsaat ke din aaye. mulaqat ke din aayehe moves his hands up to her shoulders and pushed her close to his body.so close she can hear his heartbeat rhythm.jalte rahe hum khayalo ke lau se, sahi humne barso judaaihe starts to kiss her neck,Kripa gets shy and hugs him to hide her shyness.cham cham barasti suhani ghata ne, ajab si agan hain lagaiAngad sees a tear fall out of kripas eye,he nods his head to her gesturing her not to cry,he then comes forward and kisse her tear.barsaat ke din aaye. mulaqat ke din aayeAngad also has a tear on his cheek,Kripa places her hand on his cheek and leans forward and kisses his tearbarsaat ke din aaye, barsaat ke din aayehe picks her up and carries her towards the bedroom.hum soch mein the jinke, us raat ke din aayehe lays her on the bed,Kripa closes her eyes.na tum hosh mein ho na hum hosh mein hain he kisses both her eyelidsbehak jaaye na tum sambhalo hameinher cheeks start to turn pink,he leans in and kisse both her cheeksgujarish yahi hain tamannao ki sanam baajuo mein tha lo humeinher lipos start to tremblejasbaat ke din aaye mulaqat ke din aayehe kisses her lips softly which eventually turns passionate.hum soch mein the jinke us raat ke din aayeAngad then switchs off the lampbarsaat ke din aaye barsaat ke din aayethe screen goes black the next morning Kripa woke up and saw Angad sleeping peacefully,she smiles and gives him a kiss on the cheek.she then was about to go but a strong arm pulls her back down,she turns and sees a grinning Angad. Angad-tum kaha jaarahi ho mughe akela chorkar Kripa-shut up Angad and let me go Angad-nahin Kripa-angad mughe nahane jaana hai Angad-great idea mughe bhi nahane jaana hai Kripa-you wait 5mins and imein abhi atti hoon She was about to go when Angad pulls her back down again. Kripa-angad ab kya Angad-kyun na hum saath shower kare Kripa-angad u dog She starts hitting him,Angad then grabs her two hands and looks at her eyes and starts to come closer,he is about to kiss her when Kripa bites his finger and runs to the bathroom leaving a angry angad. Angad-u wait Kripa ill get you back

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice romantic part memze and unum 😳 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
great part! very cute! cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
pleaseeeeeee con.. and don't make privthi evil 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
very good. i finally caught up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Excellent part 😳 ... I guess more romantic parts comin up soon 😳 😳 .. Good Luck ... Bye
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Originally posted by: girlie18

Fab part
continue soon



Thanks a lot 😃

Originally posted by: del_geo

nice romantic part memze and unum continue soon



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Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

great part! very cute! cont. soon!



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Originally posted by: khazeer

i must say memze very good part,im sure you can tell me tommorow how you managed to write the part.oh yeah good luck for tommorow and i am not a bandar,im sure you had fun today in the party without me,i cant believe my coz zyada went and didnt tell me.



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Originally posted by: muqualp

great part memze, unum!



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Originally posted by: geeri

pleaseeeeeee con.. and don't make privthi evil



Memze will continue later keep reading 😃

Originally posted by: sgokli

very good. i finally caught up.



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Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Excellent part 😳 ... I guess more romantic parts comin up soon 😳 :$] .. Good Luck ... Bye
Divjot



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awwww lovley part memze



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Edited by unum ali - 19 years ago
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Episode 61

Kripa is downstairs making breakfast. When Angad comes form behind and hugs her.

K- Angad yeh kya karehay ho dekho I am making breakfast so stop it

A- Kripa tumhe yaad hain ajj kausa din hain it's something special today

K- What special day ajj na he mera birthday aur na he tumhaara aur na he kisi hur ka aur na he koi religious function toh kya hai ajj

A-Kripa apni aankein band karoh

K- Kyun

A- Aankein band karoh pehela

K- Tikke hain (Kripa closes her eyes)

A- (Angad gets a beautiful Gold Heart Pendent and put it on Kripas neck) Happy Valentines day (he kisses her on her cheek) now you can open ur eyes

K- (Kripa opens her eyes) Necklace it's really beautiful Thanks

A- Kripa it's special too. It has a picture of me and you in it

K- (She opens it, and it has a picture of Angad and Kripa in it) it's so sweet

A- I cant believe it you actually forgot Valentines day

K- Angad I didn't forget

A- What do you mean? So when I asked you why didn't u say so

K- Angad I also have a surprise for u (Kripa goes to the oven and takes out a heart shaped chocolate cake which say on there for the one I love happy valentines day) heres ur favourite chocolate cake

A- Thanks Kripa

K- You are always welcome (she hugs him)

So they cut the cake and eat it.

Then after a few hours Shazmin comes back from Joshs house

Shaz- Hi Di Hi Jeejs

A/K- Hi Shazmin

K- Shazmin do u want breakfast?

Shaz- Nahiye Di I had breakfast (Shazmin phone rings) Hello

Someone- Hi Shazmin mein Priya bhol rahiye hoon ajj mera ghar mein Valentines day ki party so please come and tell ur family to come also and ur friends

Shaz- Hi Priya I can't come I am busy

Priya- Shazmin u have to come all our friends are gonna be there, they haven't seen u for long they all want to meet u and u have to come ok

Shaz- Lekin Priya

Priya- No Lekin u have to come (Priya puts the phone down)

K- Kya hua Shazmin whos phone was it

Shaz- Di it was my friend Priyas phone. Shes having a Valentines party in her house she invited all of us to come (Shazmin has tears in her eyes) Di app aur Jeejs chaleh janah please (Shazmin goes to her room in tears)

K- Shazmin meri baat to suno

Then Josh comes

J- Hi Kripa Hi Angad

A/K- Hi Josh

J- Shazmin ko kya hua why did she go like that

K- Josh Shazmin ki friend Priya ka phone aiya tha ajj Valantines Day hain to ause keh ghar mein party hai toh auseneh Shazmin aur hum saab ko invite kiya lekin Shazmin ko Rishi ki yaad agayi woh sari purani baatein and she got upset toh isliye woh chali gayi tum behetoh mein Shazmin ko dekhkar athi hoon

J- Kripa mein dekhkar atha hoon

K- Lekin Josh

J- Kripa its ok mein dekhkar atha hoon

Josh went to Shazmins room seeing Shazmin cry made him really upset he couldn't see her cry what was it is it just coz they are friends or is it something else

J- (Knocked on the door)

Shazmin saw Josh

Shaz- Come in

J- Shazmin whats this why are u crying? Its no use crying

Shaz- Josh I just remembered the past me and Rishi and (she cries) I know I hate him but……. (She hugs Josh)

J- Shazmin please don't cry it's not worth it crying for a person like Rishi he doesn't deserve ur precious tears (he wipes her tears) Shazmin tumhaari aankoh mein ansoo ache nahiye lagteh tum muskorathi hui achi lagthi ho. Promise u wont cry now

Shaz- I promise Josh

J- Shazmin tum Party mein chal rahiye honah

Shaz- Nahiye

J- Kyun Shazmin waise mein soch raha tha why don't u come with me as my valentine as a friend ofcourse coz I also have no one to go with

Shaz- But

J- Shazmin you have to come please

Shaz- Ok I will come

J- Thanks Shazmin

Preview- THE VALANTINES DAYPARTY

Edited by unum ali - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kool!!!cant wait 4 the next prt!!!!!! 😳 ...cont soon!!! 😃

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