ArHi : |{OS: Rain Fantasies}| Part 2 page 12 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: saucechips

So i am back!!Finally..

and i am first!🥳

Your OS was such a pleasant read. You know, in the first half, i was like, how is ASR being so sweet to her in the first go. From a man like him, i would expect a 'mind your own damn business' when she asked if she could lean against the car..As the end was approaching i got this feeling like perhaps he knows her from before and bingo! the end was just beautiful! Kudos to you for having the interest piqued and maintaining it right till the end. 👏

'Why don't you go to her and make her remember or start fresh yourself?', Khushi found herself asking. She heard him look down towards his feet as if trying to hide the pain. 'I don't want to trouble her that way. You could say I'm scared', he chuckled but continued. 'I always believed that if we're meant to be, she'd come across me herself one day'. Khushi stared at his face, his face which showed nothing but emotions. All sorts of emotions. Pain, happiness, she could also make out he was scared. It all confused her. She couldn't help feel her heart aching along with his. She kept staring at him and Arnav could tell she was trying hard to recall something. Anything.

That was truly touching😳lovely one shot!

a big 🤗for the pm.



Hahahaha kuddos to you for guessinnnggg! 😆 Im so glad you liked it. It feels so good to be appreciated by one of your own favourite writerss! Thankyou so much, you made my day! A big 🤗For your amazing commennntt! 😳

Thankyouuu so much😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

This was beautiful. So his girlfriend was Khushi after all. Very very nice :)

I am touched

Keep it up :)


Thankyou so much for the encouragement Lazy, it really means alot when it comes from you!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

THATS NEW BEGINNING WITH NEW THOUGHT...

LOVED IT..
KEEP UPDATING ITS GOOD
GUESS U CAN TAKE SOME FROM MOVIE THE VOW


Awww thankyouuu sooo muchhh ! Im so glad you liked it 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: reallyhappy

wowtooo cute..it was lyk dey ol ova gan strtd wid a new lov stry...agta she lost her memory..:)loved it..do pm me wen u update more./😛thnxxx😊


They sure have a long way to go noowww! Im so glad you liked it 😳

Will do 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: darksydeangel

awesome OS 👏👏👏 you stoped it at a very wrong time 😡

you have to HAVE to continue...
i loved the last part 😃
thnx for the PM 🤗


Hahaha ooo the angry face !! 😲😳😆
Hahaa il try my very best, i wasnt planning on to be honest im sacred continuing cuz its quite tricky. It was meant to be a one shot but il give it a try for sure 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: nazibah

I was eating chocolate while reading this and then I read the last part and I choked on it!! Wow!! what a twist!! Loved it!! Thanks for the PM!!!


Hahahaha im s sorryy for that 😆 But im really happy you liked ittt! Makes my dayyy when people like it 😳 Thankyou so much 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: redwine1

Very Very Nice .. but u cant let this end here .. pretty please .. it has all the makings of a wonderful story . pls do continue ...


Loved it ..


Awww chalo il try my best to continue. Its quite tricky from here but il try for sureee thankyou for your encouraging feedback thankyou so muchhh🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mishti_17

A total fairytale.. I was smiling so much by the time I finished reading. .

Hehehe im so glad i managed to bring a smile across your face 😃 Thankyou fso much for a beautiful comment 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
hey! this was a good one .. nicely built up story. There was no way to infer what was to come and the last paragraphs concluded the story so well..
Good job as always. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Wow yaar... this is brilliant dear👏
The starting itself is beautiful, in the rain...
Ending is just perfect dear👏
Beautifully written... Loved it yaar🤗

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