ArHi : |{OS: Rain Fantasies}| Part 2 page 12

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utthra1208

@utthra1208

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

loved it...sooo emotional...

loved ur way of writing...

why dont u continue this may be as a ss and complete it after she recognizes her love...

really it wud be so gud if u continue...

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Lovely And Sweet OS...Loved it...

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

hey can this have another part
do pm me

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Loved the part but I want her to remember him.. Can we have another part please..?

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Fari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Ohhh Emmm Geee!! You're awesome girl!! As simple as that!! 😳

Ahhh! Arnav's pain was so wonderfully penned down!! And I loved the scene with Garima 😳 how he cried his heart out! It actually made me what to cry as well! And then his decision to leave Khushi... It was all sooo fabulous!

I loved it! I'm totally in love with this! You know what I'd love now?? I'd love if you convert this into an SS and show us how Arnav will win his Khushi back!! 😉 somehow the way you've written it makes me want to read more and more and more of it! 😳 awesome piece of writing girl 🤗

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Double whammy!!!! 😛

That's was absolutely beautiful, very different but a lovely concept!!! I really loved the first part, the ending, personally, was terrific!!!

I'm really not a fan of rain (we get too much here in the UK) but after reading your OS, I am in the path of slowly changing my views 😛

Loved this one as well Faiza 😃