SwaRon SS: Summer School

gayatri agarwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awesome update

poor swayam and vicky can't play BB

waiting for next update

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

You are an outrage. I am mighty talented. We'll see. 😈

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Kanks I was under the impression that you were against spamming. And to see you yourself promoting it! What a shame! 😆 Pull up your socks lady! Let's see if I am more outrageous than you are talented.

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ABI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Truly, an enjoyable read and I loved how Sharon subtly tries to pull in Swayam into conversing with her !! And Vicky is Vicky, actually I like the Vicky in your SS !! Over all, a fun update and I'm looking forward to the next chapter !!

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Roger

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Awesome n fun filled update
I really liked how sharon pull swayam into conversation
Waiting for next part

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Meera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Ur rite Kanks indeed this one has more D3 elements in it than ur other writings...interestingly light and happy go lucky character sketch for Swayam...Sharon finds excuses to get Swayam talking to her, thatz also noteworthy...nice character ur Vicky...liked the way u drew in on references to the teacher & the classroom antics...as well as Vicky pulling off Sharon's hairband...see an easy comfortable bond there...most eager to c how ur gonna deal with Kria in this one as I usually find Rey to b in that role...sumthing light and easy on the sensibility I say...liked it very much 😊

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Amazing update...luved the vicky swayam masti with sharon kriya...waiting for nxt part...thnx for pm.

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Brilliant one.

I've just put down Pride and Prejudice (my eighth re-read). And it seems like I'm still reading Austen.

You English has the Janeite tenderness and the Victorian royalness to it. Brilliant work.

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Tania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Awesome one!!egarly waiting for the next one...thanks for the pm...love tania;)

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

A fun update and could imagine my school days. I liked Vicky in this update, munching on Sharon's pen, he reminded me of one of my friends who does the same thing when he is nervous😆 Enjoyed reading this update.

Anyways loved it how Sharon dragged Swayam in the conversation. Kria's character seems interesting as well. The boys fiddling with the girl's hairbands showed their bonding with each other. Looking forward to the next update

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