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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb is the word which is i have in my mind right now. if i speak more than that then i know it would turn out to be a disaster so i would prefer saying less rather than saying rubbish much.
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey firstly thank you so much for finally coming up with an update... i was very eager to read something from Kankshita or Nidhi...even i had asked Nidhi why you or she were not writing anything...anyways whatever may the reason be... i am glad to see that you are back with an update... before i start anything about update i want to make it clear that english like swayam is one of the weakest area of mine.. i can be good in numbers and all but language is the weakest point i have...so i am sorry if you are not able to understand anything I write in comment...

The comment of mixture of everything. It had a fun note to start with as sharon was enjoying the feel of music and didn't care about anything affecting her that time... and she went on to complete her desire of singing and played music too with it was very sharply done...
The next part had SwaRon convo and vicky trying his level best to unite SwaRon...it was all fun to read... the grammar mistakes of swayam while speaking and sharon one by one pointing out that and enjoyed was really sweet...
Than Kriya part was also very nice... she saw swayam enjoying so much in absense of Vicky... that was rare sight to see... and she reacted in the perfect way or i should say the way i was expecting her to react...
Finally you showed swayam having this concern as to why Sharon and Kriya broke off their most cherished friendship... all the things that swayam was doing in order to find out clue or facts about the broke off KriSha friendship was nice to see...He was certain that he wanted a patch up between sharon and kriya by just solving their issues with each other... on the other hand sharon has this mind set that she was unreasonable and reacted oddly from what situation actually demanded... that really made swayam lose hi temper or cool state of mind which he had carried through out the conversation...
It was another fabulous Kankshita update to say the least...thank you for the PM... I hope my comment is worthy of a comment on The Kankshita work... do update soon
Pratik...
P.S. Hey I hope my comment did not make you feel bored while reading... i know i don't have that much captivating language so please bear with this...and i am soory in advance if i get late in commenting or reading the next update as I am having my CA Final exams from 1st November so i am inactive till 19th November untill the exams finish...
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Posted: 13 years ago
^^ That's extremely considerate of you, Pratik. And if you have language issues like my Swayum here, you should also know that he doesn't let it bother him, dun let it bother you accordingly.

Thanks for the comment, I was smiling reading it, and no, not because I found it funny or anything. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thats really so sweet of you kanks 😊 and my language issues have never bothered me much...but commenting on someone's work which is just perfect in every sense needs a good language to commend...
anyways that really made me glad to know that my comment was able to bring a smile on your face... i always love to be the object of somebody's smile however it is it doesn't matter to me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked the way you started the update with the guitar intimidating Sharon and nice description of the guitar as well
It was wooden and had strings that produced music
Agree with Swayam when he thought Vicky had gone overboard with the teasing part, but he is acting like a cupid for Swayam and Sharon, so he is forgiven for being a nitwit!
And finally you unfolded the story so as to why Sharon and Kria weren't friends anymore. I liked it when Sharon let her guards down in front of Swayam, well almost!!

PS: Apologies for the delay, somehow I forgot to read the update🤔

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Posted: 13 years ago

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