SwaRon SS: Summer School

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I began writing for my other SwaRon fan fiction and realized I wanted to write an OS. I began writing an OS and ended up with the following prose. Hence, I announce a Swayum-Sharon Short Story from my side. It should have about five chapters of indefinite lengths. I am determined on finishing this in the coming week itself, so posting here in the D3 forum directly, I doubt that it should make more than 15 pages. If it does, it shall be moved to section Fan Fictions. 😳

Anyway, it is called Summer School. It is lighthearted. Swayum and Sharon are mostly composed differently from the show. Basically, I do not know as of now what I am going to do with the plot but rest assured that there will be a plot to look forward to.

I am mostly positive there is going to be dance in this as well.

That's about it, peeps.

INDEX

Chapter One - Page One
Chapter Two - Page Five
Chapter Three - Page Nine
Chapter Four - Page Twelve
Chapter Five - Page Eighteen
Chapter Six - Page Twenty-One



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter One


Her lips would not utter a word but her expressions would clamour for attention. Her eyes and speech never reconciled with each other after the first time they contradicted each other. Her character was as allusive as one of Jane Austen's prototypical heroines and the glassiness of her facial expressions, as paramount as the author's literary excellence. To count how many times she could roll her eyeballs in all four directions in a mere second is to resolve on burning to ashes your assumption that you ever knew Math.


Our hero on the hand used his tongue to tell what he felt. Mostly he just felt retroactive. His disposition was simplistic and calm otherwise. His line of sight was not as hyperactive as his heroine's. Although the aura about him did fetch him more turning heads than his average looks could garner for him.


She was Sharon and he, Swayum. They studied at the same summer school where their failures at English had gotten them.


* * *

It was a cloudless May morning when our story began. Sharon's new friend Simmi with her new and astoundingly dim-witted friend Rinni followed suit as she stuffed her handbag and water bottle inside her locker.


"Want me to stuff myself inside too?" Sharon asked acidly, smiling sweetly.


"Easy, Sharon," Simmi beamed as she and Rinni moved away from her. They had followed her suit right to the extent of squashing her against her locker.


"Never mind, class starts in exactly ten minutes." Sharon declared.


Sharon had not failed to attempt as much as half a question all her life. It was an outrage to have for real failed to attempt one entire English paper and land in a summer school. This was not going to stain her college application, Sharon had decided. Entering the territory of a clan of failures wasn't likely to be sunshine for her. And it was not.


She acquired a bench in the middle row. It was the third bench and something told her it would give her best view to the blackboard. As students began filing inside the class. She murmured to herself how each was ghastly in their own special way. Eventually she got bored of laughing at her own quick parts and focussed on the doorknob of the class.


She meant to look at it without blinking at all for about a minute. She was mentally scratching off every second as it went. It was fun focussing on the doorknob until a picturesque prospect entered the otherwise domain of the ghastly.


A pair of eyes whose colour was yet to register itself in her eyes darted for a split second at her reflection in the translucent door of the class. That person had not given her the type of look she gave them. Even though Sharon gave a wide variety of her looks to everybody, this was far from her regular.


She was suddenly scrupulous of the fact that she was indeed losing her mind or might have lost it on her way to that fateful school.

* * *





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fine. I admit it. I'm a sucker for your writing and thought I tried my level best to ignore this piece of work here for an entire period of 4 days, I couldn't resist myself from peeking in a little. When that peek turned into a full fledged engrossing read, I dunno. And for that matter, I don't care either.

Like I've told you I'm not really supposed to be reading any stories for a little while (Look how well that turned out). So I might have to cut down on the length of my comments. If that's possible for me.🤔

The first paragraph had the Kanks trademark stamped in bright red all over it. I missed those elements in your writing where you draw the weirdest parallels ever. I say weird because no one could think of it but they make the most sense. And plus your love for Jane Austen and her works was quite apparent. I always took you for a Pride and Prejudice fan.

Then another of your trademarks come into play - your neat little sarcasm. God knows you thrive on it.😆 And somewhere I feel your story would be incomplete without that element.

Sharon's disgust at having failed to give an attempt and having to spend time with 'a clan of failures' was nicely done. Liked that bit immensely. Her pride has most certainly gone for a fall albeit a short one and she takes it out by mentally belittling the 'actual failures'. Nice!😵

Her somewhat weird behaviour of delving into the mysteries of a doorknob was quite a thing to read. Now how many times have you actually done that Kanks? I would really like to know.😆

In the end we see how Swayam's entry (I'm presuming) has finally made her realize that she has gone crazy. Attagirl!👏

Well so much for short comments.😲

I'm going to tell you that I'm not going to read the next chapter but I probably will. So what?🤓

I've never told you this but you have the rare talent of starting a story majestically. Nobody does it better than you. You know how to start a story, you know how to establish the setting and the characters and basically you're a boss at it.😎

Love,
En.

P.S. I'll try to control myself from reading the latest BME update but I think you'll probably have the comment by evening.😳 I know. I'm a sucker for your writing.



Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES
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An awesome surprise most certainly. Loved how different this is from BME, but still has your signature writing style to it. This one has a very relaxed feel to it which i am liking 😳
Looking forward to read this one.
Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nice one... Add me to your buddy list and plz next time do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res

Edited*****

Kanks style ...Kanks script ...Kanks ki Nazron se baatein karnewali Sharon aur gift of the gab wala Swayam...all this makes an awsum story in the making...well waiting for it...
Edited by meevee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well this SS was a definitely a pleasant surprise. I was expecting an update of BME and here we got a completely different work of yours. And whats more surprising is this work is quite different from your ususal works. The light tone of this SS was indeed astonishing.

Quite an interesting start of the first chapter. Sharon's character even though more or less is same to the show but its whole notch more amusing. The plot has been built in an interesting manner. Waiting to read the next update.
Edited by marauder - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res!
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Awesome kankshita! 👏
the intro part was a real stuff!
sharon in locker room was so lyk our classic sharon! 😎
and then the description of sharon's gaze was nyc!
waiting for the next!
Edited by surbhimathur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept and as usual, brilliant writing !! Looking forward to the next chapter !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept kanks !!
awesome start with some fantastic writing as always :D
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm (nidhi).

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