KR OS : Life always has a bright side - Last Part

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

its awesome...

beautifully described plz update soon...

thnx for pm...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

truly amazing I luved the way she was getting pissed of by this rich single Dad...

lolz n the last part was too good...

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

ammy dis is awsome...so beautifully written...so loving n caring OS...actually in strting i thought dat rey n kria are married n dey hv a small child named anjali...hehe bt as story procede i loved it to da core...kria as miss n rey adopted his bro's daughter aww dat was so sweet...i love to read nxt part too...plzz if u r planning to post nxt part to den post asap

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Aashi

@aashi_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

OMG !

Dat was so Cute !

N definatly Rey is d best Daddy ! :)

Luvd Anjali n Rey's relationship !

Hope u r nt endin it !

Want atleast 1 more update of dis !

Plz continue !

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesome OS..

Beautiful idea n I loved d way u penned it own..

Totally speechless.

I loved each n every bit of the story.

Anjali n Kria r so good to imagine.

N d father-daughter talks though Anjali isnt really his daughter was so lightening.

Amazing...really amazing...too far to think of this idea.

It wont come on the very first thought.

Loved the whole Os.

Waiting for the continuation.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

loved it...

it was so beautiful... flowing...

everything fit into place as they were...

nothing forced... all of it seemed so natural...

loved how kria was flustered seeing rey... then she put the angry face...awww

the best part was how u interwove their past in the stry..their povs.. their emotions...the way they felt...

the kid was so cute... the baby talks.. the sweetness... adorable...

the way u brought out kriyanshwas superb...

i was smiling allthe way..

one thing ...

u

gotta

change the title...

plzzz

plzzz

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

it has got to be an SS...

P.S: sorry i am in a very jolly mood today... so this thing...

see u got an apt title..

everything fits out to be so well...😃

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

its awesome
loved it
n enjoyed it
do write more

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Beautiful idea and wonderful execution
loved it tons
and plz try and write another 2-3 parts...

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Awesome OS!!! Beautifully potrayed... Loved d idea of rey being a single dad and kria baby sitter...quiet unique n refreshing... Loved their convo... N plz iska to ek aur part ho skta hai...plz likho na di...how they spend their weekend...do they have feelings for each -other...plz...*pout*