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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Loved it !! Rish and Gayu I guess you both are just born writers !! Wow they were really nice to read ! 👏 Keep it up sweeties🤗

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Loved both the OS...Amazing works.👏

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

well, Risha and Gayathri, you seem to be soul sisters with a latent link... both have written an os set in a means of transport! telepathy exists in your case, too, or so it seems!

Risha, loved the story... the description in the beginning about the streets and feel of Delhi, especially its bus travel was very well done... arnav's and khushi's interaction was plain cute, especially the final part where they get on the bus to celebrate their anniversary... that really indicated their love for one another and how much their relationship had grown.

Gayathri, your story was very well written... could empathise with khushi's fear of flying but felt like giving arnav a tap on his head for treating people with such disdain... poor dheeraj, he was so clueless about arnav's convo! liked that the core of goodness within arnav is still intact and that he didn't follow through with his plan to humiliate khushi

this is a promising start to a different kind of collaboration... eagerly awaiting more works

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

nice! so good!!

will u cont this??

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Rish it was so beautiful an OS. Loved it so much. Its indeed true your head is always buzzing with ideas!

Gayu mindboggling OS, seriously Arnav at his prankster best. Well if you don't continue I'd Sue you in the American Court :D LOL eeekkksss I'd love to read it further <3

Edited by fire.whiskey - 13 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

girls, congo on ur new venture - Risha, thx for the pm dear

Coming to both the one shots - there were simply awesome -

Risha, as u know, iam a fan of your works - i have read almost all your works and i know u are a great writer but this is the first time iam reading an OS written by your friend, Gayathri - I luved the OS written by her tooo - Thx for the index of gayathri - will read her stories and will comment

awesome OSs girls - luved them -

Looks like a promising start for the new venture - All the best girls - Count me in for all ur works pls.

Edited by Arjuhisis - 13 years ago

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.Jazz.

@.Jazz.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

I love your idea sankadevi and gayatri😎

Both of you are such fab writers! I thoroughly enjoyed both the one shots..sooo darn cute!! Keep rocking both of you. Cant wait to read more🤗

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Tara Singhania

@tara.singhania

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

That was awesome...I so love it...😊

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Risha that was beautiful, every bit. The rain, his concern and then the anniversary bit had me smiling and the whole OS had sort of a sense of calm throughout, loved it <3

Gayu, this was just amazing. I mean just a brilliant, effortless flow of emotions, the whole OS was engaging right from the start till the very end. Beautiful!