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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Gayuuu 🤗

Just read your OS!

Omg please don't tell me you're gonna leave me hanging there. I know you said you weren't gonna continue even of we begged, but what if I popped pretty puppy eyes in front of you that would probably entice you to accept my offer to continue? PRETTY PLEASE!

To say I enjoyed every freaking moment of the story.. right from the beginning till the very last word would be an understatement! I still can't believe you write so well. Like so freaking well!! I'm so proud of you dammit!

His entire transition from wanting to be the way he is with every other girl, up until the point where he realizes that she is wayy too pure and genuine to be placed in that category. His view of Khushi.. everything just everything was soo perfect!

Its like a beautiful compilation of feelings <3

p.s.- Continue no? 😳

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Okay wow! Risha just wow. Like I'm too dumbstruck and astounded to say anything at the moment!

Just completed reading yours, and it is such a feel-good and happy OS. that made my heart all fluttery and light, esp cos you had this happy ending to their love story!

That last line bout Teri meri love stories makes me feel -you need to give this to the next story for it! Perfect it is!!

Now I get why Gayu said something bout travelling 😆

I loved the essence of the story. Arnav's realization towards the end that everything in life is preplanned and that at every step destiny plays a huge role. His car break down, his empty seat, her dozing off to the final platter of rain drops. So adorable!

Ilovedlovedit! just loved! 😳

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Mahi Khan

@-EndlessSmile-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

aww dose were so nice and cute OS
well done!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Risha, your OS was simply amazing!

Really enjoyed it

And the ending! It was just superb 😳

Okay now i'm going to read Gayathri's OS!

--Edited--

I'm back!

Gayathri why not end with a kissy and a hug?

I'm going to kill you 😉😆

Awesome OS!

I, myself, am really scared of heights and always try to avoid air journeys so seeing Khushi like this really made me more attached to the story.

Anyways, amazing work!

😳

Edited by ShiningStar18 - 13 years ago

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sunshine23

@sunshine23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Hey guys! these were two really good OneShots!
I wish I could ask you to continue..but sadly I know the rules haha
Great job guys!
Can't wait till the next PM

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Great os loved it

Thanks for pm me

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Bani

@BBani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

This is the most AMAZING OS i've ever read! 😉
I love itt! ❤️

Khushi's talk was hilarious! 😆
Infact the whole situation was hilarious as well as romantic even! 😳

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Bani

@BBani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Oye Hoye! *whistles* 😉
Chakk De Phatte! 😃

Bada Mast Tha Yaar! 👍🏼 *Bohot hi Buddiya Tha*-NK STYLE!) 🤣
Enjoyed it completely!

I'll buddy that ID ! Then please send me PM's!
Love and Hugs! and kisses even! CHUMMMAA! 🤗 🤣
-Bani! 😉

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NinaArief

@NinaArief

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

RES
unres
loved both the os's .. risha's has more of the city feel in it and gayathri's has more of the characters .. i was thinking you girls thought let's write a travelling experience and then wrote it together!!!

Edited by NinaArief - 13 years ago

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

@R..Loved it.!The slow description to city,traffic to the occupied bus was Superb.Than thought flow of arnav was Fab..al centering to Khushi.I liked the way he waited and thought of her wellbeing.And the end part was lovely.Celebration of their anversary in Bus was craziest but Sweet.😆

@G..;)!Loved it Gayuu..beautifully written!Arnav getting irritated with Khushi pompoms😆..and thankgod he dint play the prank..the part were he changed his mind seeing the trust in her eyes was very beautiful.Also,,the Driver and Arnav MU & understanding was cute & funny in its own way.<3

Both your OS'S made my Sunday Morning.I am feeling so relaxed and happy!🤗Thank you R&G ;P!