My OS: ArShi's Married and One.. (Final Part Done) - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing end to the story!
Keep writing...You have a fresh writing!

God bless ya!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad

A fabulous end for a beautiful story...Will wait for your new work...Thanks for the PM



Originally posted by: rini_kat

A very good ending.I like it...




Originally posted by: priyankaa

awesome..thank you so much for this lovely update..😊



Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks.awsome...fabulous...👏👏


Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Perfect end to a perfect story. Will miss it. Thanks for sharing and the pm.


Originally posted by: vishnudaughter

awesomeee updateee

thanks sooo much for pm😉


Originally posted by: Xaffi

Amazing update... Thnx for the pm... Loved to read it..


Originally posted by: Mishti13

beautiful update

with great ending
thanks for pm


Originally posted by: sathyaish

Fantabalous update:) ?
Eagerly waiting for thread 2:) continue soon:)


Thank you very much for enjoying and appreciating it... I'm touched for sure...
For the PM... you guys are welcome...
And for those waiting for more written work from me... I promise I'll write soon...

Originally posted by: pranganga

Thanks for the OS.
Enjoyed every part of it.
though fell a bit sad that it came to end. Hope u will come out with a new os.


Aww yea i will miss writing it too... but already have my ideas ready for Thread 2... So will be typing it down soon... Hope you would continue reading & supporting...

Originally posted by: princess84

a fab story just finished reading it in one go..continue soon with thread 2 would love to read more and plz pm when you continue


Ohh wow... new reader... thanks so much for enjoying it... might have been slightly complicated due to the audios and stuff.. but hope u enjoyed it truly... yea going to continue soon with 2nd thread... will PM you for sure...

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

OH GOD REALLY IT IS FANTASTIC ...

SUPERBLY WRITTEN...THE LOVE CARING UNDERSTANDING ROMANCE EVERYTHING IS TOO AWESOME YAAR...
U NEED NOT BE SORRY BECOZ WE LOVED UR WORK,,,,,
SUPERB ENDING TO THE POST...
I LOVED IT...ENJOYED TO CORE..
AND COME UP WITH NEXT AWESOME POST SOON...WE R ALLL WAITING...


Thanks very much for the love... really appreciated...
I'm glad you enjoyed but yea its not surely the ending...
I already have the idea in my lil brain... just need to type it in words :p
Won't make you wait for long...

Originally posted by: risat

A Huge Thanku for writing such a wonderful OS. Loved every bit of it. Each and every part touched my heart. Please PM me next time u write something. I really like ur writing style and creativity. Waiting for u to write more. Congratulations on the completion of this beautiful story 😊


A huge welcome and a double huge thank you for reading and enjoying it... I will most certain PM you for my future work... I'm overwhelmed with the compliment truly... 🥳 Finish Thread ONE...

Originally posted by: afnariaz

Khushi singer new thing introduced by you...Beautiful songs, nice memory videos, and awesome update.Thanks for PM.But I wish for last part there was a rabba vey too...Not a shikayath just a wish


Ohh thats just my perception that all good DIL can sing 😆 thanks to Choti Bahu - Zee TV lolzz... so thats why i came up with it.. and throughout we never heard Khushi singing apart of her Mausam Hai Suhana... Thus thought of making it a surprise element for Raizada parivaar... lolxx

Originally posted by: dorindakate

Thanks for the pm...


The ending was just beautiful...

How I wish it would happen in REEL life...


You never know.. may be they read this and try it out 😆

Originally posted by: Jennymyola

The update was just amazing! It was just as if i'm watching the serial! U take so many efforts to give a visual and audio treat to ur readers... Mindblowing, really! And i particularly loved the hindi dialogues u write. I liked particularly this one - 'aapki
nazro se dekhti hu toh
khud ko khubsurat
mehsus kerti
hu' it was soulful.
The suhagraat part was hot enough. U don't have to worry. It was just the right amount- it didn't go overboard. Atleast i enjoyed this update a lot and i'm sure others must've too. It was completely Arshi romance. The last aarti part was so sweet!
Hope u keep writing ahead. Thanks for the PM.
.
.
Jenny


Thank you so much... feel the effort was paid off for sure... Ohh that dialogue lolzz... let me try it with my ASR and see if it sparks hahaha... Lolzz really it was hot enough? 😆 thank god... i was worried on it the most lolzz... Thanks again for the love and support... Will come with another bang soon...

Originally posted by: BBani

Amazing end to the story!
Keep writing...You have a fresh writing!

God bless ya!😃


Thanks so much for the blessings and love...

I'm grateful that most of you enjoyed the end... Was wondering if it would be too common or too off track... but seeing the love and comments... i think i NAILED it 😉
Hope to meet you all very very very soon... sooner than you would imagine...

Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wut a way to finish..realy damn good!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending.n thnx for the pm!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lbsitw

wut a way to finish..realy damn good!!


Originally posted by: 1rocks

awesome ending.n thnx for the pm!!!!!!!!!!😉


thxx for the support guys...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really well written . Enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama

Really well written . Enjoyed it thoroughly.


I'm surely glad...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing job and a wonderful end to the story ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ArHian---

amazing job and a wonderful end to the story ^_^


Thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..thnx for pm.. 😊

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