My OS: ArShi's Married and One.. (Final Part Done)

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

OH GOD REALLY IT IS FANTASTIC ...

SUPERBLY WRITTEN...THE LOVE CARING UNDERSTANDING ROMANCE EVERYTHING IS TOO AWESOME YAAR...

U NEED NOT BE SORRY BECOZ WE LOVED UR WORK,,,,,

SUPERB ENDING TO THE POST...

I LOVED IT...ENJOYED TO CORE..

AND COME UP WITH NEXT AWESOME POST SOON...WE R ALLL WAITING...

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

A Huge Thanku for writing such a wonderful OS. Loved every bit of it. Each and every part touched my heart. Please PM me next time u write something. I really like ur writing style and creativity. Waiting for u to write more. Congratulations on the completion of this beautiful story 😊

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

👏👏thanks.awsome...fabulous...👏👏

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Khushi singer new thing introduced by you...Beautiful songs, nice memory videos, and awesome update.Thanks for PM.But I wish for last part there was a rabba vey too...Not a shikayath just a wish

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Deepa

@Deedeepa1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

awesomeee updateee

thanks sooo much for pm😉

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Xaffi

@Xaffi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Amazing update... Thnx for the pm... Loved to read it..

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

beautiful update

with great ending

thanks for pm

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Thanks for the pm...

The ending was just beautiful...

How I wish it would happen in REEL life...

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

The update was just amazing! It was just as if i'm watching the serial! U take so many efforts to give a visual and audio treat to ur readers... Mindblowing, really! And i particularly loved the hindi dialogues u write. I liked particularly this one - 'aapki
nazro se dekhti hu toh
khud ko khubsurat
mehsus kerti
hu' it was soulful.
The suhagraat part was hot enough. U don't have to worry. It was just the right amount- it didn't go overboard. Atleast i enjoyed this update a lot and i'm sure others must've too. It was completely Arshi romance. The last aarti part was so sweet!
Hope u keep writing ahead. Thanks for the PM.
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Jenny