RTMC FF Hum Saath Saath(7) Hain part'4-page 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Riya di n Choti i will try my best 2 update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaldi di jaldi dena okies..
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UPDATE PART TWO 😉

Standing against the frame of a large window chandri looking at the buzzing college grounds in front of her with a sad ace ,
tujhe pura ekin ha ki ush dusre larke ka naam Nel ha? kahi asha to nehi ki tujhse sunne mwin kuch galati hui ho or ush larke ka naam ...stop abruptly .
after taking a deep breath she continue ...Neeladri ho...
Tanvi :- chand tu ye sawal subha se 4 baar puch chuki ha, tre sawal baar baar puch ne se nahi mera jawab badlega or nahi sach...
chandni close her eyes :- sach hi to janna ha mujhe , thak gai hoon may ye jhooti zindegi jite jit
confuse Tanvi :- matlab ?
chandni open her eyes & change the topic :- Maa ne phone kia tha kuch jaruri saman lene k liye mujhe mall cjana ha, tu last class attened karke sidha hostel chali jana c. u. there bye ...
Tanvi :- bye
chandni tu meri samajh k bahar ha,
baki larkiyoon se tu bohat alag ha
teri ankheen kuch or kehti ha or jabar kuch or tere hoontooki hasi chehr ki khusi serf ek dikhawaa ha,
Tere ankhoo ki naami or tere batton ki gehrai bhalai mujhe samajh mein na ata ho per mujhe itna to pata ha ki tu ...ush bande se or ush aurat se bohat pyaar karti ha jinki tasveer kabhi apni takiye k niche rakhkar soti ha or kabhi apne bahomein lekar najane kitni raatein jagti rehti ha,
kehti ha pyaar dia pyaar paya nehi jata ishliye undono k liye bhi tu sayed bohat khaas hogi jindono k bina aj tu itni udas ha ,
scene change :-
Prithvi enters the room and glances of the figure lying on the bed covered in blanket and then reaching the windows he opens them wide laing the sun beams to enter the room now he reaches the bed and sit beside his best friend
He shakes him slightly & says :- abe o laila ops sorry lailayoon k mujhe agar tu roj subha itni der tak sota rehega to college kon jayega? kal se college join karna ha yaad ha na Mr. Neeladri Bhadawaaj...
To this the figure stirs a little & then a yawn followed by a sleepy reply comes from underneath the blanket - Neeladri nehi Neel naam ek singer ko jayda suit karta ha, & btw tu mujhe pehle nehi bata sakta tha ki ye ek morning college ha ?
Prithvi smile a little :- Pehle baatane ka to koi sawal hi nehi kiuki mujhe pata ha ki agar ye baat may tujhe flight mein bhi batata na to tu ohi se kud jata lekin ferbi mumbai nehi ata ...
Neel :- mere saath reh reh kar kafi samajhdar ho geya ha, with these words he pulled of the blanket and jumps out of the bed and without turning to his friend rushes to the bathroom and calls back :- prithvi jab tu niche tha tab teri ne phone kia tha unhone tere account mein paise transfer kar dia ha ...
Prithvi :- ye kya tu hamesha meri bhabi meri bhabi bolta rehta ha o teri bhi to bhabi ha na ...anyway may kuch der k liye bahar jaraaha hoon, c.u let bye
Neel from bathroom :- bye ...nehi Prithvi teri bhabi meri bhabi nehi ha ... kas may tujh bata pata ki teri bhabi meri kon ha .
last two lines barely audible
Mumbai shopping mall :-
after strolling for quite sometime aimlessly Prithvi comes accross a shop n h walks in to see if he can find something for Neel as next monday is Neel's birthday n Prithvi arrange a surprise party for his best friend .
suddenly a white wallet caught Prithvi's attention . he smile a little .
as he places his hand on it at the same moment he find another soft hand on it, he looks up to se who the person is and his gaze meets that at two large very pretty eyes .
Chandni is standing there unknowingly holding Prithvi's hand
scene change :- sudden breze come from a open window in a room and a photo frame breaks down .
scene change :- for a moment Prithvi becomes mesmerized by Chandni's beauty and is unable to blink a thing which has never happened with him before .
BG SONG :-
samay k panchi udh gaye agay nikalgaye
darpan waise hi ha ...chere badal gaye
aaj ha neya ehsaash
beeta kal ha ek etihassh
koi kisi k utre sapno se jeetatha apna bachpan
ajj bhi ush k haatoon mein ha doojein ki ammanat
aaaj bhiii ush k hatton mein ha
doojein ki amanat
soon he comes out of his trance by the sweet melodious voice of Chandni :- sorry who leaves his hand .
Prithvi :- ye wallet pehle mayne pasand kia tha to ishe mai hi lunga
Chandni with a cute smile :- to maine kab kaha ki ye mujhe lena ha ? tumhi le jao ishe ,
with these words she steeps out of the shop and walks towards the other corner of mall leave behind a puzzle looking boy .
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Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Sorry 4 late update

jin readers ne abhi tak mujhe friend request nehi bheja ha o plz jaldi bhej de warna mujhe pm karne may problem hoti ha

upar ff mein jo song ha ushka lines mayne khud likha ha as per my story
hope u like it

waiting 4 my di's n friends lovely comment

Choti aj k update mein mayne tera o neel ki line nehi dia ha ish k liye sorry but mayne soch k rakha ha ki mujhe o line kaha dalna ha hope u dont mind
Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
di
ek
bada
wala
sorry
kam pakad k
itna late hone k liye
chlo ab m ud pr tapakti hu
chand bar bar puching
hmmm
coz chand ko pura visvas h
yeah she is misterious
ek ldka
n ek women ki pic
vo pakka neeladri urf neel hi hoga
n vo women ??
Uska sochna pdega
awww ye to such me neel hi neeladri h 😲
sone k mamle me mera hi bhai h 😉
awww chand n prithvi ki 1st meeting 😳
ek hi chizee psnd ani thi
aye bhi kyu na
ek dusre ki psnd napsnd ek hi to hogi 😳
ab ldai hogi
hawww 😲
ldai ni hui dono ki
big shooocckkk 😲
coz aisi koi ff nhi
aisa koi show nhi
jisme in dono ki ldai na hui ho 1st meeting me
frame tut gya...
Line
omg
kya lines h di
mistry chupi h inme to
ho na ho
prithvi n chand phle bhi mil chuke h
bachpan me
pakka
damn sure

ooo lines apne khud likhi h
tbhi m sochu ki aisi lines phle nhi suni
di ek dum jhakkas
bindas
U ROCKZZZ 👍🏼

luv u di
inna sara 🤗
Edited by princesspriyart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update sweety

but from next time onwards, plz provide the link
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Wow so sweet nd cute, hamare chand ka dil uske hero ko pechan chuka hai but dimag ab bhi dhund raha hai hmmm nd ek chote se wallet ke liye woh apne prithvi se kyun ladheg hai na, ab next up thode jaldi de do na plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part...
ur story is full of suspense...i mean bharpoor h raaz n rahesyon se...n...n...sry words ni mil rahe...
neel is hiding something...n chandu too...chandu is sad...tanvi is confused...prithvi is mesmerized n confused too...even i m getting confused now...
but it's ok agar story confusing nahi hogi toh maza kaise ayega...atleast mera khali brain kahi toh use hoga...loved that wallet scene...
update soon...
luv u... :-)

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