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Posted: 12 years ago
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UPDATE PART 3 😉



out side the shopping moll chandi is busy with her phone,
Chandi> tanvi tere project mai complete karke submit kar dungi tu bilkul fikar mat kar aur avi isi baqt delhi keliya nikal ja, tujhe 10.00 am baje ki bas mil jayegi... aur sun ... ansu insan ko kamjor kar deta hai is liye rona mat mai mandir mai jake pray karungi, dekhna ancle ko kuch nehi hoga...wo bahot jald thik ho jayenge bas tu apna hosla banaye rakhna... aur agar koe vi help chaihie to mujhe ph kar lena
from the other side
Tanvi> thank you chandni, tujhe pata hai tu ek bahut achi insan hai aur usse ve achi dost hae love you.bye
Chandi> bye take care...suddenly a young male voice struck in her yers...excuse me
Chandi slowly turns to see him...few feet awya prithvi is standing with his as usual angry expression
chandi smile a little>yes...
prithvi come closer and ask> shokeeper ne mujhe bataya ke yea wallet tumne mere malme mai ane ki bahut pahelie order de ke rakhi thi..keya yea sach hai?
Chandi cutely further aske> shopkeeper tumse jhut kue bolenge? tumhari unse kuch dushmani hai??
irritated prithivi> yea bat tumne vi to bata sakti thi na? aap ke pasand wale wallet mujhe kue de diya?? mahan banne ka bahut sokh hai tumhe????
Chandi> kash...kash ki sirf ek wallet ki kurbani se koe mahan banta...
prithvi take a deep breath and continue> mane ek sidhe sawal pucha...tu uska jawab vi sidhe tarike se de
Chandi. ok to suno...tumne ye wallet hudne ke liya nehi balke kisi apne ko gift karne keliye pasand kiya aur isse dekhte baqt tumhare ankho mai ji chamak tha usse saf pata chal raha tha ke tum uss apne se bahot pyar karte ho.aise mai tumse wo gift lena mujhe sahi nehi laga...
confused prithvi > tumhe kase pata ki ye wallet maine kisi ko gift karne ke liye pasand kiya tha?
Chandi> simple tumhara faviourite colour black hai aur yea wallet white hai, aap koe apnehi pasand ke chis apne liye to pasand karega nehi...
Now prithivi is in a real shock, his mouth fell open somehow prithivi claim down and ask> tum mere faviourite colour kaise jante ho?
Chandi first look at prithivi from top to bottom then a take round around prithivi and says> jis ladke ka shirt, jeans, rist watch sab kuch black colour ka ho uska faviourite colour red to nehi hoga...
Prthivi speaks through gritted teeth> aaj mane blue colour ka jeans pahena hai
Chandi> par kal rat ko hostel ki window se jab paheli bar dekha tab tum black jeans mai the... any way agar yea wallet tumhe dene koe problem nehi hai to isse lene mai tumhe vi koe problem nehi hona chahiye...i think aab humhe is baat ko yehi trahenne dena chahiye...kue prithivi?...
prithivi with a second voice> yeah you are right...mere liye vi yehi better rahega
Chandni smiles at his completely bewildered expression and then ask> keya baat hai? tumhe mujhse koe aur vi puchna hai?
Prihivi shakes his head and soon as possible says> nehi, nehi to...mujhe bilkul nehi puchna ki tumhe mere naam kaise pata...bilkul nehi
suddenly prithivi realize the extremly beautiful girl is disappear now...
Prithivi under his breath> kitni ajib ladki thi...




Chandi walking on the street of mumbai because her destination( the temple) is not two way far so she find it waste of money going by auto, a wide smile cover her face when sahe discover on the infront of her eyes...
menwhile a car also stop infront of mandir...prithivi come out from the car
Prithivi > bas yehi baki raha gaya tha...iss car ko vi avi kharap hona tha...
Prithivi moov forwards when suddenly he see a glipmse of her...she is looking extremly beautiful just like a princes...
infront of radha-krishnas murti chandi covering her head with white duppatta then flodning her hands and close her eyes
now she is looking like a angel from haven so pure and so divine...he just cant let his eyes off her, he even forget to blink...
Chandi> kanhaji aur radha raniji aap to jante hona ke mujhe mere papa ke bare mai kuch vi nehi pata yeha tak ki wo koun hai, kaha hai, unka naam keya hai kuch vi nehi janti mai... papa ke naam kar bachpan ke sirf kuch dhundli yade hi hai mere paas...
papa ke naam se nanaji ke ankho mai nafrat aur maa ke ankho mai ansu dikhte hai, iss liye unse kavi kuch puchne ki himmat hi nehi hai...
DI kaheti thi ki waqt ane par wo khud mujhe sab bata dengi
Mujhe uss waqt ka aaj vi intezeer hai aur mere di yeha baat jante hai
mujhe pura wakin ekdin mere di lout kar aapne ghar jarur ayegi aur uss din wo mere sare swalo kar ka jawab vi degi
keya soch rahe hai? yehi naki mujhe itna varosa kaise hai?
wo iss liye ke kue ki aaj vale mere di mere paas naho fir vi HUM SAATH SAATH HAIN...
ha aur ek baat mere papa to kavi mere paas the hi nehi but please tanvi ke papa ko kavi usse dur mat karna, unhe jaldi se thik kar dena...aur delhio jaise anjan saher mai tanvi aur auntiji par koe musibawt nehi ane dena...


precap> entry of encounter spacialist bahadur inspector NUPUR DIWAN
Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
may 2 baatein clear karna chati hnu😉

1 ye ek suspance story hai thik se read karna jayda confusion nehi hoga 😳

2inha koi love traangle nehi hai😆



hna or ek baat inha o sab kuch hoga jo aj tak kisi bhi RTMC ff mein nehi hua ha

ENJOY😳
Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
wow wow wow hamare chandni kitne samajhdar hai, us ne prithvi ko pehchan liya hayeee nd woh wallet ka khissa hmmm
hamare prithvi ko hilaaa ke rakhdeya chand ne wow wow wow
hmmm saddy saddy part she dont know about her father
wow mandir wala scene, is mein prithvi ki koi galte nahi hai ha cnand hai hi aise kise ke nazar us se hatege hi nahi especially jab us ne white color pehna ho
hamare prithvi ka background song "ek ladhki ko dekha to aisa lagaaa"
next bahadur inspector ki entry hmmm suspense hai nd mujhe suspense bahut pasand hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part
chandu is really suspensing...how she got to know so many things about pathu...even his name n the reason she gave is not convencing
well somewhere pathu is flat on her...totally flat
n chandu k dad uske saath nahi h...she didn't even know his name
n wait is their something b/w chandu's di n neel...couz in previous update their is something which neel is hidding about a girl...u know bhabhi n all that,he himself said that she is not his bhabhi
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Nice ud

ek mulakat or itna asar by god ladki h ya kuch or

she know his fav color as well as uski man ki baat

or baad me gayab kahan ho gyi

ladki hi h na
abhi doubt hone laga h uspar mujhe

strange girl she is
awww tnvi ke father bimaar h
so sad


accha ye chandni ke papa nhi h
hmmm

ok di kaha gyi uski?

Bhot saare questions h arpita

bt i loved the ud

ud soon
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

wow wow wow hamare chandni kitne samajhdar hai, us ne prithvi ko pehchan liya hayeee nd woh wallet ka khissa hmmm

</div><div>hamare prithvi ko hilaaa ke rakhdeya chand ne wow wow wow
hmmm saddy saddy part she dont know about her father
wow mandir wala scene, is mein prithvi ki koi galte nahi hai ha cnand hai hi aise kise ke nazar us se hatege hi nahi especially jab us ne white color pehna ho
hamare prithvi ka background song "ek ladhki ko dekha to aisa lagaaa"
next bahadur inspector ki entry hmmm suspense hai nd mujhe suspense bahut pasand hai

Thank you sulatna 4 ur lovely comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Thanks shafyy di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

nice part
chandu is really suspensing...how she got to know so many things about pathu...even his name n the reason she gave is not convencing
well somewhere pathu is flat on her...totally flat
n chandu k dad uske saath nahi h...she didn't even know his name
n wait is their something b/w chandu's di n neel...couz in previous update their is something which neel is hidding about a girl...u know bhabhi n all that,he himself said that she is not his bhabhi
update soon
luv u :-)

bas aap sabko update pasand aye or kya chahiye mujhe... Thank u di love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejjo

Nice ud

ek mulakat or itna asar by god ladki h ya kuch or

she know his fav color as well as uski man ki baat

or baad me gayab kahan ho gyi

ladki hi h na
abhi doubt hone laga h uspar mujhe

strange girl she is
awww tnvi ke father bimaar h
so sad


accha ye chandni ke papa nhi h
hmmm

ok di kaha gyi uski?

Bhot saare questions h arpita

bt i loved the ud

ud soon
luv u

dikhne mein to larki hi lagti ha...or obhi bohat khubsurat...baki mujhe nehi pata lol thank u di n love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
really really awesome update

and as u said it will super hatke from others. i m very intrigued after reading this update
chand ke baare kya kahu ek dum kamaal hai
omg suspense , mujhe FF ke naam se laga tha parivarik prem kahani hogi,simple n sweet . ek ladka n ek ladki wali types
but i m pleasantly surprised n eager now😊
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago

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