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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hi dear..

just read the prologue..

sounds really interesting..

cont. soon..

n do pm me when u update..

thnx tejjo for the pm...

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nice character sketch...but why do i feel that neel n chan mil k prithvi se truth chupayenge n that will be the reason for their sepration...
but nice cs...
continue soon...
luv u... :-)

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

UPDATE PART 1 😊

MUMBAI AIRPORT 12.00pm

A handsome boy searching someone with naughty smile in his lips and suddenly he turns and move towards taxi stand then a familier voice struk in his ears...NEEL

he quickly turns to see him ... n h saw a boy with dashing personality standing few feet away who looking realy good in black jeans n white shirt... he is none other than PRITHVI neels best friend whoom he loves a lot

Prithvi angrily asked ---- tu mujhe piche ekela chod ke a geya? tujhe pata ha na mujhe mumbai k baremein kuch nehi pata

Neel---- sorry yaar kaan pakad k sorry o kya ha na o jo hot larki hum plan mein mili thi may ushka picha karte karte ag a geya tujhe to pata hai na ki...

Prithvi completed the sentence------ ki ish duniyaan ki koi bhi larki teri behen nhi ho sakti

without noticeing neels suddenly turned pal face he continue ------ le ab apna saaman pakad asha lagta ha poore delhi ko packed karke apne saath mumbai lekar ayaa ha kya hua? ab kya sooch raha hai?

Neel unknowingly said ------- BEHEN

Prithvi confusedly askd ----- what?

Neel---- nehi kuch nehi we r allready late chal ab jaldi chaltein hai hostel k bahar dad k friend wait karrehe honge may taxi dakhta hu

Prithvi---- ish larke ko achanak kya ho geya?

Neel---- aja prithvi taxi milgeya hai

Prithvi---- ayaa

GIRLS HOSTEL 1.00am

One girl lying on bed she is in deep sleep but anather one girl is sitting on the window pane resting her head on glass window hands rested on her knees she is looking outside at the dark sky the darkness is only lit by the light of the full moon it is a beautiful night and there is a very sweet untraceable fragrance in the air

suddenly her beautiful eyes fell on opposite side A BOY is standing there near the boys hostels open window

THEY simply looking at each other 4 a few moments and for that period of the time there only seemed to be a young boy n a very beautiful girl

after sometime a sudden breeze come and they simultaneously realized that they both r staring at a stranger and in that some instant her eyes fell on anather boy in that same room who seemed to be familiar but without followed her eyes PRITHVI suddenly close the window but CHANDNI still standing near the window like a statue

r u ok chandni? TANVI her friend asked confusedly

Chandni still stairing at closed window answer ------- hna

Tanvi----- kya tune aaj firshe ohi bura sapna dekha ?

Chandni----- NEHI aaj koi bura sapna nehi dekha balki aaj mujhe bohat acha lag rahahai

pata hai tanvi mumbai ane ke baad aaj pehli baar mujhe ish saher mein ek ajeebsa apna pan mehsus ho rehi hai asha lagraha hai jaise mera koi apna mere bohat pass hai

Tanvi---- tu boys hostel k ush window ko dekhkar kiu baat karrehi ha? ush room mein koi nehi rhta hna per aaj do new larke anewale to the pata nehi ayee ya nehi

Chandni----- tujhe kaise pata?

Tanvi---- boys k baremein mujhe sab pata hota hai tu to janti hai na

Chandni----- ek baat bata un dono larko ka naam kya hai?

Tanvi surprisingly ask----- tu kabse larko k bremein itna interest lane lagi? suvek ne ekbaar line maraa tha to tune poore clg k saamne kitne jorse thappad mari thi yaad hai? tu to larko se nafraat karti hai na?

Chandni--- nehi saare larko se nafraat nehi karti bas kuch larko ko pasand nhi karti

AGAR ISH DUNIYAAN MEIN SUVEK JAISE BURE LARKE HAI TO MERE SPYDERMEN JAISHE ACHE LARK BHI ISHI DUNIYAAN MEIN HAI SERF EK SUVEK K LIYE MAY APNE SPYDERMAN SE NAFRAAT NEHI KAR SAKTI KABHI BHI NEHI KISI BHI KIMAAT PE NEHI

Tanvi---- tu fer suru hogai?tu din mein kamse kam 20 baar apne spydrman ki baatein karti hai per ajj tak may ye samajh nehi pai ki ye banda akher hai kon

Chandni--- un dono larko ka naam kya ha tanvi?

Tanvi----- firse topic change anyway ek ka naam PRITHVI hai dusre ka naam abhi yaad nehi subha soch k baataungi gdn8

Chandni--- ok gdn8

PRITHVI acha naam hai per o dusra naam kya hoga? window se jishe mayne dekha o bhi sayed prithvi hi tha fer ushke piche kon tha jisse may thik s dekh nehi pai or ab jisse may bhool nehi parahi hnu

Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice start...
poor neel got scared listening the word BEHEN...funny ...he can not imagine any girl to be his sister in his wildest dreams...n prithvi is kind of reserved one...less talktive...
n in girls hostel chandini...why she was sitting like that?...n nightmare?...who is this her spiderman?...
n chandu is thinking neel is prithvi whom she saw minutes ago,no girl prithvi is one who is behind,whom u didn't saw
update soon
luv u :-)

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ridzzi
nice start...
poor neel got scared listening the word BEHEN...funny ...he can not imagine any girl to be his sister in his wildest dreams...n prithvi is kind of reserved one...less talktive...
n in girls hostel chandini...why she was sitting like that?...n nightmare?...who is this her spiderman?...
n chandu is thinking neel is prithvi whom she saw minutes ago,no girl prithvi is one who is behind,whom u didn't saw
update soon
luv u :-)

Di chand ne jishe dekha o prithvi hi tha window ushi ne close kia neel thodi na close karega

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

prithvi in white t-shirt n black jeans
hye kitna smart lag rha h 😳
neel k liye koi ladki bhn nhi h
hahahaha

but behan sun kr neel udas kyu hua 😕
chlo ab
chand ki entry
moon light me chand looking so sundar
i also like santi se
night me
alone bathna
koi disturbe na kre
prithvi n chand staring each other 😳
chand maring thappad
vo bhi pure clg k samne
brave girl 😊
chand ka spiderman 😆
ye lo aa gya PRITHVI
but ye chand neel ko kyu janna chahti h
shyad vo uska bhai hoga
nhi pakka
now m w8ing for part 2
ud soon

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

The story is really good...its great...
Have to go through character sketch again...em confused

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Lovely ud arpita

wow neel is so cute saari ladkiya uski behan kaise ho ho sakti usme se koi uski gf nikli to

oh to prithvi first time mumbai aya h wow

oho aate hi eye lock session between prithvi n chandni

so sweet...bt prithvi ko kya ho gya usne window kyun band kar di

itni beautiful ladki uske saamne khadi h or use dekhne ki jagah usne window band kar di dumbo kahin ka

han han accha kyun lagta mumbai me chandni ko prithvi to ab aya h ab sb accha hi accha lagega

oh she asked his name.,koi tanvi ko samjhao ki chand ne suvek ko thappad isliye mara tha becoz she didn't like him

uska prince charming to ab aya h

ud soon
lovely ud tha
luv u

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I was nice update...

nd I liked the CS too...

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sultanahabeeb

@sultanahabeeb

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

wow dono ne ek dosre ko dekha dekha aur woh bhi 1st part main,interesting really very interesting

hmmm prithvi acha naam hai, g nahi chandini g bahut acha naam hai nd is mein ap ki koi ghalte nahi hai hamara prithvi hai hi aisa ki jo koi ek bar dekhle bhool hi nahi pata

waiting for next up jaldi dena plzzz